Date: 10/17/08 07:43 pm Title: Emotional Overload
Favourite lines?
"I needed to erase every touch, every kiss, and this was doing it. I’m not going to let anyone touch me until all of theses disgusting ghosts are burned off my body. Exorcized from my translucent skin. "
Holy shit.I love the whole idea of her needing to rid herself of everyone else.. really brilliant on your part O_O
AND HOLY CRAPOLA, PLOT TWIST MUCH?!?!? You are an evil, EVIL woman.
Much love, and can't wait for more xo
Author's Response: XD omg im going to be lookin forward to ur reviews all the time if u keep saying such fantastic things! this really helps, telling me ur fav lines and such, cuz it lets me know wat stands out. hehe im so happy that the idea was well accepted. not getting too personal, but when i break up with a bf i always feel that im very disgusting after, even if we only kissed. and when i thought of this idea, i actually took a shower with steaming water a couple of days be4 i posted...it was, unpleasant to say the least. and to think that Kit would do it over and over again just so she can be 'clean' for Bill. she idolizes his purity and the fact that he doesnt noe who she was with be4 him makes her feel a little guilty. so tadah! this was her answer to it. and YES! u love my plot twists-they slowly work to drive all of u insane ;] thanks again 4 ur reveiw, cant wait to hear more from u :D *hugs*
Date: 10/17/08 07:15 pm Title: Sensory Overload
Lmao yes!! The way you described her lack of senses was perfect. I dont even know how to explain it! lol
The connection getting stonger, almost kissing, Stoned Kit?! Hahah
I really want to know where this is all going though *ponders*
Keep at it ^^
Author's Response: 0.0 u really thought that the senses thing was good?! *faints* oh wow, i was so worried it would be pretentious and stupid *smacks head* thanks so much for telling me. all ur reviews are really helping with my writing, cuz as u can see im still really insecure bout the new things i try. thanks so much for ur reviews! *hugs* i'll be waiting for more ;]rnrn
Date: 10/15/08 06:51 pm Title: Emotional Overload
bill was obviously beyond wasted so i hope she considers forgiving him. i'm glad nothing happened to kit. i hope bil didn't fuck up any chance he had with her. oh yea and that guy in all black i hope kit finds him again and is that one crazy fan in jail or... i love drama hence the reviewing lol ur story is just amazing do these things just come to your head and do u take uh.. i guess u could call them creative writing classes or what? i dont think i could ever write half as good as this. if bill ever finds out she's sky i hope he doesn't stop loving her at atleast not completly. i got so excited when i saw you updated and it made my day since it was kinda crappy so go u lol. update as soon as u can but take ur time though =D
Author's Response: haha yay first let me say that ur long review makes me very very happy! now lets c, where to start? cant give anything of the story away, but i can say that all plot ideas r definitely mine! yes i do take creative writing classes and last year i focused alot on the poetry aspect of my writing. this story is the longest thing ive written, and currently im rereading all the chaps to see how i developed in my writing techniques. right now i can say that these recent chaps have been going more towards the emotional side, and i kind of relate it to my peotry because when describing emotions who can go in any direction. oh ive been taking these classes since last year. and thanks u for the compliment ^///^ writing is wat i hope to make a career of, just not in the area of fanfic-but im glad this is getting such good response! and im SO HAPPY that this update made ur day better. the fact that this story can lift up someone on a bad day is just fantasmagorical! thanks for the long review, it means alot as u cna see. *huggles* :D
Date: 10/15/08 05:08 pm Title: Emotional Overload
Genius!
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks so much!
Date: 10/15/08 05:07 pm Title: Emotional Overload
yea!!! she can talk!!!!!!!! bill is stupid wen he drunk......... d:)LOVE!!!!!
Author's Response: neyah!! The gangsta smile!!! XD and yes bills very stupid when drunk. Very very stupid lolz hehe thanks for the smile and luv! *hugs* rn
Date: 10/15/08 11:31 am Title: So Please Don't Leave
IMM BAAACK!! *rises from the dead*
God I missed this story!!
And stupidly excited that there was 3 new chapters waiting impatiently for me to mow-down =P
1 down, 2 to go. ^^ Again, brilliant writing m'dear
xo
Author's Response: thanks so much! glad that my story is one of the things u check after a little break from the site :D it makes me very happy. hope u like the other chaps too! luvs <3
Date: 10/15/08 05:45 am Title: Emotional Overload
wow!this is really emotional overload!!! of course, you can allow yourself to venture into such a deep subject since you are so good at describing it. it's not simple at all, but you just do it.
i also like the mixture of power and vulnerability in Kit's character. that makes her more realistic, cause everyone has strong and weak points.
about the connection, it certainly has its disadvantages, hasn't it? she can find out Bill loves her, enjoy that, but she also needs privacy for her unspoken hesitations. which brings me to the revelation of a drunk Bill. That is a hard thing to imagine! some guys become funny, others violent, but Bill is just horny. it's sad to see your friend (lover, as she now wanted him to be)in a state that erases his principles and makes him to be just instinct driven.i've experienced that myself and i must confess i'm not very tolerant about this, even if it's not a habit. in Bill's case, i think she should considerate forgiving him, only because she knows him so well and because he loves her.
thank you for giving so much consideration to my opinion. but about the plot twists, i must say you're far away from my expectations! you've left so many opportunities of developing this story, that it's practically impossible to forecast the next events. i don't even dare try, you've never failed surprising me with more than one thing. this is one of the reasons of my interest in your writing.thank you for the constantly warm comments! Pupici!
Author's Response: oh irene. i literally read ur review at least 6 times u posted, and finally im writing back. first thanks SO much for how long it is! XD it makes me extremely happy. now lets begin *takes deep breath* i never really expected kit to sound so realistic. i was always afriad that shed be the perfect mary sue because of the way i describe her body, mostly. especially in this chap, where shes taking a shower. i make her very unrealistically skinny and tho i knew that alot of people wouldnt mind/care, it bothered me. i mean, i knew that sky is skinny thats who she is, but i see her as being the type of skinny that is only recieved when u have genes like bill-which not alot of us have, me included. idk, its just really...ugh, goddamn her skinniness but i cant do anything bout it so watever. woah, i just went on a completely different tangent, sorry. but i guess im telling u so that u can understand wat i feel which u probably will lolz so ya im glad that sky has depth. its an accomplishement that i havent yet reached :D oh god, the connection is just so insane! every time i try to describe it in emotions i feel that its just getting too cliched and sappy, so im switching it more to visual which helps me alot more cuz i can totally picture it better. and yes, a drunk bill. haha i hadnt really sat down to think that basically bill is horny when drunk lolz. when i first read that i was like 'my bill? never!...ah wait, shes right...oh GOD!' i just couldnt associate it like that in such er sorry but crude wording. i mean dont get me wrong i read instense smut and stuff so the line 'bill gets horny' shouldnt make me freak out but it did when i was thinking bout the bill i had formed! >.< anywhos ive never had the misfortune of seeing any1 close to me drunk. my parents r very safe and protective. im sorry that its happened to u. i noe that it mustve been a terrible experience. i cant give away the story of course, but the next chap will have so many surprizes! the ones u luv of course, that send ur head reeling and begging for more lolz i luv reading ur reviews, irene! theyr just fantasmagorical. muschos besitos <3
Date: 10/09/08 06:09 pm Title: Sensory Overload
Will this be it???? I don't know but I will find out!!
;D
Author's Response: i think theyr must be sumtin wrong with me, but i just dont get ur message >.< i think its cuz im always spending too much time on the internet and my brain just cant process wat ur trying to say! so for sure i can say thanks for reading and reviewing, but thats bout it! sorry hun my mind is just on the fritz lolz but thanks for the luv! *snuggles*
Date: 10/09/08 05:01 pm Title: So Please Don't Leave
“I’m never going to be me without you, so please don’t leave,” Bill whispered
That quote made me think they were going to kiss xDDD
Hope I was able to satisfy your curiosity :D
Author's Response: XD AHHHH i was thinking of stickiing that in there, but then i had to really sit down and think 'is this wat i want happening right now?' i decided not to put it in just yet, that way when they do kiss every1s reactions will be 0.0!!! :D thanks for letting me noe! *hugs*
Date: 10/09/08 05:25 am Title: Sensory Overload
Ha! I think I'm the first reviewer of this chap! (That if I end my usually long comment before someone takes my privileged place). Ok, spit it out: where do you get these crazy unique ideas of yours from? I either write endless comments on how much I like the story, or just remain wordless. Either way, the intention is to make you go on. The story should last as long as you feel it should, I think the number of reviews doesn't matter, what really matters is that you enjoy writing it. And as far as I can see, you still take pleasure in writing, so there is no reason to stop. Bill and Kit are definitely getting closer and closer, I feel another intense moment is in view soon, not only about their feelings, but also about the plot. Exquisite dialogues, wonderful description of the sweet tender moments, I fallow attentively every detail and progress in their connection. Stop me before I take all the room in your review section! Kisses!
Author's Response: *GLOMPS* irene, ur comments never ever get old! i luv reading all the things u have to say XD it just makes me want t write a story with u all the sooner! ya idk y i mentioned how long will this story keep going- i guess its just wat i was thinking about when i posted it. so dont worry bout me just randomly cutting it off at the worst place possible-i'll see this story to the end. hehehe and ur guesses bout the story r always so scarily close 0.o they really make me think of new ways to explain wat i want to say cuz, and plz exuse this, but i want to give a different twist on wat people guess wat will happen, because sumtimes theyr right. and in the case of u, ur almost always rite so it sets me thinking for hours on end! and im really happy that the progress of connections between kit and bill r oing at a good pace. i always have doubts, but u make them go away in seconds :Dand dont wrry bout taking over my review box, cuz ur reviews r just that good! lots of luv and kisses :3
Date: 10/04/08 09:57 am Title: So Please Don't Leave
i cannot wait for the next chapter please write quickly!!!
Author's Response: aww thanks hun! *hugs* im hoping to get in the next update by this week, so keep ur fingers crossed :]
Date: 09/30/08 07:17 am Title: In The Morning
God, I always get wrapped up in reading and I ALWAYS forget to tell you I LOve this banner!
Author's Response: SQUEEEE!!! yayyy im so happy! well since u mentioned my beloved banner i must tell u that i literally felt like crying after my first attempt at it. u see *takes deep breath* my friend dylan works photoshop like magic, and so i decided to spend a few hours going over some good pics of bill and random chicks and then i told him 'hey banner making time' so we set to work at like 10:30 at night and after discussing and fixing things we were done at around 12 midnight. and then the nightmare happened-we couldnt get the pic to open in html format on any of the online websites that offer it and when we finally realized that we should save it under sumtin else, the pic wouldnt open up anymore. all the work was lost, and i felt like a completey failer. needless to say it was so aggravating, but in the end dylan finished it without me so ya. the story behind my banner :D
Date: 09/30/08 07:15 am Title: So Please Don't Leave
I still haven't finished my second reading of this chapter, but I need to let you know that I feel deep respect for your hard work. Imagination doesn't do it all, it's work here. That life-and-death connection with Bill is my favourite moment, it's beyond love and it should remain unchanged no matter the shape Sky is in. Of course I'll stay tuned, just like always. As for the mail, I have to create another account, probably on yahoo, just like yours, because it seems hotmail gets stuck sometimes. As soon as I do that, I promise to rewrite you.So please go on!
Author's Response: AH! as usual u drown me in compliments :D i honestly thought that the connection with bill and kit mightve been too over the top but im truly happy that it was just the perfect thing to add, especially from what uve told me. thanks for mentioning that its not just my imagination thats on fire but my writing skills too. this story is really helping me develop in so many ways, and i have u to thank too for constantly giving me such positive support. and i'll be waiting for ur email so dont stress out about it too much. thanks for everything! <3
Date: 09/30/08 04:09 am Title: So Please Don't Leave
Cliffhanger!!! I knew it wasn't over! The girl was just a coincidence.
I love the clothes you write. They sound pretty xD
I thought they were going to kiss right there, their connection is so powerful.
Very nice.
Author's Response: hahaha it will never be over! jkjk ugh i wish i could draw then id be able to show all of u guys what i want kit to be wearing. oh wells, i trust that ur imaginations r doint it justice. um u can answer this in ur next review or sumtin, but when did u think they weregoing to kiss? when bill was helping kit with her clothes or when she was sitting on the couch and their foreheads were pressed together? i want to noe cuz im curious :] thanks for the review and im glad u luved it! <3
Date: 09/29/08 07:41 pm Title: So Please Don't Leave
wowww. crazy stalker chick much? anywayss that cliffy is like wayy too much for me.and then all those questions at the end got me thinking and now i'm gonna be up all night thinking about what's gonna happen next. garhhh i hate cliffys... but i love them so much!!! oh and i realize that 100 pages is a lot(believe me I could never do that) so i won't be all "oooh update update!!"(i always feel like i'm being annoying when i do that) even though i really want to. you take a break and just update when ever you can
Author's Response: i noe, rite? i made sure not to describe the girl too much cuz i was seriously getting unhappy with the thought that sum1 would ever do sumtin so crazy-even if it was a fictional character! *sigh* im getting way too into this story lolz. and about all my cliffys, u noe ur addicted to them! muwahaha-its all apart of my devious plan to keep u coming back to see if i updated every day :] jkjk. and dont worry bout asking bout the next update, i do it ALL the time to other fanfics. but i feel very special that ur taking into consideration my obvious laziness now that ive reached so far in this story :D but i'll try to update soon, so keep looking out 4 it!
Date: 09/29/08 06:02 pm Title: So Please Don't Leave
ur welcome i've never written anything that long so kudos to u. i was so excited when i realized you updated and as usual u didn't disapoint. if it was over (the story) i'd be sad cuz it's fun to read. i wanna know hot attacked kit so please update when you can =D
Author's Response: hehehe thanks! im glad i didnt let u down, i was worried bout that lolz and im so happy that u like reading my story! it gives me butterflies, and u noe wat they say about butterflies-they make u fly! lmao xD thanks for all the luv <3
Date: 09/29/08 05:47 pm Title: I Think We're Both Insane
I don't mind that you used schizophrenic. Feel free to use whatever you like ;)
I won't be reading the next chapter today. I really have to go to bed, I got school tomorrow :/
I'll read it tomorrow, yeah??
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Author's Response: phew im glad u didnt mind that i used it. it was like the word was on the tip of my tongue and then u suddenly bring it up and im like its perfect! and yes-i dont want u to lose ur beauty sleep over this. seriously, i have been on this sight at least every night and u need to stop ur addiction b4 it messes up with how u look in the morning. like last night i read this 1 fanfic, er lutherfansa flight 483(sumtin like that) and i basically cried myself to sleep cuz it was so sad :X needless to say that i looked like crap in the morning but ANYWHOS! ya, thanks for letting me use ur words and read whenever u have time, cuz u'll definitely enjoy it :]
Date: 09/29/08 05:06 pm Title: So Please Don't Leave
:D :D :D I knew it couldn't be the end yet!!! it's too good!!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: aww thanks! *blushes* ya this storys realy taking off, and if i ended it there then i woulve been eaten by all of u guys ;] thanks for the luv!
Date: 09/29/08 12:57 am Title: So Please Don't Leave
OOOOoooooo...... d:)(Gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: WAH! thats so clever! wow, never thought of that-thats amazing! d:) bahahaha its tom! omg u have no idea how much that amuses me :D thanks for the review!
Date: 09/25/08 12:39 pm Title: I Think We're Both Insane
I hate sounding like a repeating, unintelagent fangirl, but wow hun. Your writing composition is stunning. I love the inaligies, images, the dialoge. God woman! This chappy is great, I love how the characters of Bill & Kit are becoming deeper, and you make it come to life so well! Good luck with school, and I can't wait for a new update (however long it may take) xo
Author's Response: awww u'll never sound like an unintelagent fangirl-never ever ever cuz every time u review its like a whole new compliment. i never get tired of repition! :D thanks so much for pointing out all the things i put in my chaps-when i reread them i always think 'wow, i put that in there and it sounds great! but i dont think anyone is going to notice...'but im wrong! thanks sooo much and i'll try to update soon <3 *huggles*