Date: 11/10/08 03:53 am Title: Stage 1
it's strange that your top chapter comes out at the same time with mine! i'm just writing the most important part of my story and here you are with yours!
i keep reading and sighing when your bill and kit have their sweet moments before falling asleep...you have something with these moments that makes you feel it physically, they are some of my favourite parts.
now bill/sky meeting. he is so deliciously embarassed by the awkwardness of the situation. the moment she's trying to force him spit out his real feelings is a wonderful dramatic success. it really hurts to see bill gathering his courage to make his confession to kit after waking up.
liking sky the way he did when he first met her is very bill-like.i've always wondered about the real gusti, considering he and bill seem to have a close relationship in real life (compared to the one bill has with georg). making a pair of sky and gusti could really be possible, he seems to be a deep guy.
back to bill/sky! god, i like her stubborness of challenging bill's wild behaviour! i shook when he asked where kit was and when he started that interrogatory about sky! it was breathtaking to see how he knew so many details!magic flows through all that conversation and waves of kit-sky mixture hit it when you expect it least.
"the hardest is to come"? god, can it get more intense than this?
"hurt her light" wow! this is so beautiful!
when she ran to the bus through the rain i could swear that was the moment she would change back to sky. but i'd forgotten about the danger bill was in. who was that guy? i need to know!
please update, every chapter makes the plot even thicker. i guess this is how books are written, you can go on with numberless chapters but you still keep me hooked! sorry for being so late with my comment, i've been dying to write it but my computer didn't agree. in fact, i'd written it on paper and now it's finally on its way electronically. love you too, besitos, pupici, Irenie
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Author's Response: i dont noe if ive mentioned this but i always luv saving ur reviews for last to respond. they always make me feel so happy! i reread them like a gabizilion times. and yes, it is strange. koin-ka-dink? i think not =] its a sign. now lets see. the pyshical times with kit and bill. i want them to get closer and closer, inch by inch, to the point where u want to scream at them to take the final step. and the bill/sky meeting. i knew that had to be perfect. the emotions and reactions, its kinda like a preview to how bill would react to sky in real life. but then it makes u wonder how hes going to react to kit really being sky now. hehe and hes so cute when he can tell things r awkward! and yes, him liking sky is very bill-like. i can really see it, he would be drawn to her like a magnet. haha to be honest i never really thought about sky and gus' relationship dynamics. they broke up in the beginning anyway so i never thought id have to back track to it, but i guess i did. and they do seem like a good combo, like u said :) and now to bills stalking! gosh, i cant believe that those lines really hade u shaking. thats extremely flattering, since i squirm and squeal so much when i read ur stories :D wowu point out such interesting things! a mix of sky/kit in the meeting-didnt really expect that would happen but im glad it did. ur sudden thinking that kit would turn back to normal is a good one! it wouldve gone perfect with the atmosphere, but like u said she has to take care of the terrible danger that got bill! oh irenie, u seriously make me blush and scream in delight when i read ur reviews. u wrote this on paper?! i just cant express how meaningful that is to me, and i dont want to sound so repetitive. thats just, well, wow. u give me so much encouragement to really take my plot lines out there and ur views on everything r so fascinating. i honestly dont think this fanfic would be as half as good if u hadnt taken a liking to it. we spur each other on in our reviews to go as far as possible with our stories and thats wat makes them so good. hope ur comp doesnt stay stubborn. besitos y abrazos(hugs,cept i probably spelled it wrong), kit.
Date: 11/09/08 05:01 pm Title: Stage 1
i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
i don't want this fanfic to end
Author's Response: *tears up* i dont want this to end either! oh, no ones said that so far :'] wow. thanks so much thats just too sweet. but the ending will be filled amazing and in case ur wondering i will be writing another long story like this once APITD is finished...lolz the abbreviation for my sotry is looks so funny! XD
Date: 11/08/08 02:32 pm Title: Stage 1
O.O.......... who is it?!?!?!!?!?! i was rite!!!! billa did like her!!!!! d:)
Author's Response: XD yes our billa was in luv with sky. where would the story be without that surprizing plot twist? lolz and yaayyy tomi's smile. seriously, u need to keep him in a box or else im going to kidnap him! :}
Date: 11/06/08 03:40 pm Title: In The Morning
is it 22
Author's Response: hehe no its a number after 104 lolz but thats a good guess :) thanks for reading :D
Date: 11/06/08 10:10 am Title: Stage 1
how could you just stop it there
Author's Response: XD i do it so u will come back to read the next chap! and too keep u sitting on the edge of ur seat lolz stuff like that. thanks for reading *hugs*
Date: 11/06/08 04:11 am Title: Stage 1
Ok. I'll write a short one now, to make sure I haven't missed THE number. In fact, I've spent so much time reading the last chpter that I had to relog. I'll post my whole comment a little later, after my usual rereading and this time I'll need MUCH room! This was really exquisite and therefore requires a matching review! I hope to come back down on earth until then, I've been dizzy up there where your story took me, but the perspective was great!
Author's Response: XD i like keeping ur review unasnwered for a little while cuz then i always get to click on it and think "yayyyy" but neh it looks like we'r not going to reach my fav number. oh wells. hopefully with the net chap. or the one after. it doesnt really matter when, just as long as we hit it before i finish! and u noe i lov lov lov LOV ur super duper long reviews. dont be afraid to take up so much space :D and if this review is any clue as to how superly awesome ur other review will be i cant wait! thanks for the luvs irenie besitos
Date: 11/05/08 05:56 pm Title: Promise Overload
i just read it all and this story is amazing.
i am so sorry about your dog
Author's Response: aw thanks for reading everything! is been getting so long 2, but im very happy that u enjoyed it. and thank you for your sympathy. it means alot. *hugs* and now u get to read a new chap! :]
Date: 10/30/08 11:53 pm Title: Promise Overload
How is everything going to turn out? What will happen when Bill and Gustav figure out she's Skylar? I'm hanging by a thread here... update soon please???
Author's Response: haha oh those darn plot suspense questions-they're the death of us! XD did that make sense at all? oh wells, yes. the next update will be very interesting, so keep checking :) and thanks for the luv! *hugs*
Date: 10/29/08 05:02 am Title: In The Morning
my dear Kit (is it ok if I call you that? I like the name)if you like, you can write me on the following mail addresses: irinaene@email.ro, irina_beratlief@yahoo.com
i'm glad i could be useful in soothing the pain, you are such a wonderful girl.
reading your reviews and answers always makes my day! and usually until you give me your opinion on my new chapter, i feel insecure.
"mi estrella"? I love that, but i think it's too much...By the way, teach me some more words, i really love that!
Author's Response: yayyyy! ok i promise to email u soon. haha ya as u can see i simply suck at picking nicknames -.- idk if u noe but estrella means star, btw. so ya, definitely not that one lolz haha yes! i dont mind if u call me kit, its really cool :D and the same goes for me about the reviews. i just value ur opinion so much. now teaching words would be relly fun! ok lets see-spanish 1 as taught by me xD that amauses me really, since i do average in the class itself but when put into the environment i can totally rock it ;] ok then, well theres this- chow, wich means goodbye. i say it all the time with my family.also -'yo gusta la musica' means i like the music. 'el es muy guapo' means he is really attractive *cough*bill*cough* and '-insert noun- es el mejor' means -noun- is the best. so tell me if this is too basic and i'll pull out the bigger stuff :D yay im so happy! i'll email u soon, irene. ah! i just realized actually that probably the reason y i cant think of a good nickname, besides the fact that im terrible at it, is becuz i really like saying, or typing ur name out. its just so pretty! XD so i think thats wat im going to keep saying lolz unless u want me to call u something else, watever u prefer. ya i'll stop talking now :) ttyl irene!rnrn
Date: 10/28/08 06:47 pm Title: Promise Overload
I am really sorry for your dog; my dog died too. And yes, I am sure that if you're dog could read, he would be very proud of you! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you very much. im also sorry for ur dog. it just gets so hard to not think of them 24/7 and want them back. thank you very,very much, and i hope that my story makes u smile :) *hugs*
Date: 10/27/08 04:57 pm Title: Promise Overload
d:)
Author's Response: neeyahhh! the tomi smile! *glomps and runs away with it* haha that is how all powerful this creation is. all u need to do is send it and ive got the biggest grin on my face XD
Date: 10/27/08 03:11 pm Title: Promise Overload
I forgot to say that I have a dog too and I fully understand the proportions of your sorrow. I love him in a very special way. I think they love us back in a more devoted way than humans do. They love without conditions, questions, the bond you were talking about is so deep I can't even express it in words. Only a dog owner understands that. You know, people say that when dogs are no longer with us, they go to join the "rainbow". I guess that must be their paradise and I'm sure we would all be happier there than in our own paradise, they are so pure and good hearted. Please don't cry, he'll be happy there.If you loved him, he knows that.
Author's Response: irene thank you. sincerly, thank you for telling me this. i cried again this morning and i had to go to the bathroom and skool and just hope that no1 would walk in on my breakdown. but then i remember wat u said, cuz i had read it last night, and i cried then too, but when i though about it this morning it made me feel alot better. his unconditional love was something i craved and needed but now i just need to let it go. i'll never sotp loving him, but i need to let him be wherever he needs to be. over here the rainy season is coming and i'm going to be looking out for all the rainbows. thank you so much irene. this, especially coming from a girl who i only know through the internet and who lives on the other side of the world, amazes me to no end. im glad that u told me this, and i'm going to remember it for the rest of my life. so once again, thanks. te amo, mi estrella.
Date: 10/27/08 03:03 pm Title: Promise Overload
Wow! This review is certainly going to be long! I don't know exactly where to begin in this huge diversity of events and feelings! So I'll just take them as they came. First, Kit's voice coming back because of Bill. It is an emotional overdrive , yes, because she suffers and is confused, while he shares the same contradictions inside his heart. This constant battle to understand the other is so realistic and they are both so natural. And about the way he comforts her, well I have dreams about his tenderness, I really imagine him as a delicate guy and the way he appears in your story makes him like being a part of it even more.
Also, the outfits for the special night and the place they go to are also "billish", I'm sure he would enjoy eccentric clothes on such an occasion and the fact that he knows the whole significance of the clothes simply amazed me, your Bill is smart, original, cultivated, sofisticated and subtle. He may appear frivolous sometimes in real life, but not here in your wonderful chapter. And Kit is definitely at the hight of the beautiful moment they live together that night. As for Coldplay, I think I understand perfectly why you love it and also why Bill loves it. It's special too and it fits remarkably well in the context. Stop me before they throw me out of the site! Love you and need more of this super story! Pupici, weather girl!
Author's Response: *glomps* irene, my love! i'll respond to ur review just as u came up with ur views on the events in the story, in order i guess ;]. first, awwwwwwww that is just too cute! u have dreams about billa! aww and its so adorable that u just dream bout his sweetness.there r certain moments when i watch vids of him and see him live that just scream to me that he's different-he isnt one of those guys who would just shove u and bring u down and make u regret everything u did together. bill is someone who u'd crave to spend time with and hed never make u regret a thing. but thats wat i think. and i guess u think the same thing! ya kit getting her voice back cuz of bill is very symbolic to me. after all the times of trying to help her and find out who she is and wanting o know everything about her, he helps her in the worst way possible. and understanding each other is also very hard, especially between these two cuz of all the previous history between bill and sky, which only kit knows about since bill doesnt noe theyr the same person! haha bill and the clothes. where do i start? the actual possiblity of bill knowing about all these things seemed so improbable that i just had to do it! wow i didnt noe that bill was such a good character! for some reason i feel like my bill is pretty much like every1 elses typical idea of him, but i guess not :D that makes me really happy, cuz it shows that i can really make awesome characters! lolz ya that moment in the gazeo was really beautiful. i wish that it was me and bill! X] oh gosh, im in love with coldplay! i happy that bill likes them too, but im dissapointed that he never mentions heyr classic albums-at least not that ive noticed. for coldplay, theyr firsts were always the greatest, and if bill were to ever mention that his first album of theirs was idk like parachutes or a rush of blood to the head i would seriously start screaming like crazy! not that i dont anyways, but even more so. it would definetly impress me. haha they can never get rid of u, my wonderful irene! and if they try its cuz theyr jealous that u dont leave them such awesome reviews lolz. te adoro...i will eventually come up with an awesome nickname. i promise XD
Date: 10/27/08 02:59 am Title: Promise Overload
AH! i am so in love with this story!
I really am nervouse about what will ahppenwhen Bill finds out she's sky, but i'm pretty sure he'll be fine about it, he does love her, at least it hink he does,lol.
I really wish/hope/pray you can update soon!
i love th eoutfits he puts he rin tha ti sso cool! i want the white one! lol
and oh dear, well that man did't seem to make anyhtign bad happen at eh concert was he completly unrelared to the letter? i guess i'll find out, please please pretty plas euppdate sooon!
ALSO, the conection between sky/kit is o amazing, your grasp of emotions is really secure, i feel like i am in Sky's role.
ta ta!
Author's Response: *blushes* really? thats so great! im really happy that u luv my crazy little fanfic so much ^///^ haha yes when the discovery of kit being sky happens, there will be screams happening for all the people who read-at least thats what im hoping! yes i luv the outfits that bill puts kit in! theyr just so cool and it makes me want to live in tokio cuz wearing stuf like that is completely acceptable, unlike over here where if i were to wear the white dress some1 would probably spill sumthin on it on purpose XP i wish people were more accepting thats y i luv TH and bill cuz theyr fighting to be different. haha once again-more guesses! my lips rr sealed tho, but i'll try to update soon. and thanks alot for mentioning the connection with kit and bill. thats y i chose to write the story from kits view cuz it would be so much more easy to relate and imagine ur in her shoes. im extremely proud that the emotions seem to be spot on. i guess being a secretly emotional freak works in writing lolz cant wiat for ur next review! *hugs*
Date: 10/27/08 01:04 am Title: Can't You Hear It?
oh wow!
sorry i havn't been reveiwing on the other chapters, but ive been so wrapped up in this story!
I love the idea od Sky,kit,princess, i love her. its really interesintg the story that you've woven here, i'm greatly enjoying it.
i have a question, does her 'now' form in no way resemble her normal human form? like at all?
Also, someites bill freaks me out, like uber! but the rest of the time he is so perfect!!!!
arg, i'm starting to think he really like the original sky and was just reall really jelous and that was why he treated her so poorly, but i might be wrong.
AND omg! the guys attacking her?!!! so epic man, loved that part, of course bill freaking out afterward and poor sky/kit emotional breakdown were so relistic too!
I'm wondering if this review even makes sense!, lol i seem to be rambling about too many differant things at once, but overall i love this story, now i'm off to read the next few chapters. tata!
Author's Response: hehe im glad u started reveiwing again! it makes me happy that u just get so into it that u dont remember :) i really luv sky/princess/kit 2! lolz i just never thought that she'd develop so much and it makes me really glad that i basically made her up. ok while kit is in her cat girl form the idea is that she DOESNT resemble skylar at all. so i try to describe her like this: instead of having short, punky hair like skylarkit has hair that reaches down to her thighs. both are black, but since kits hair is now so long it has some curl to it. kit has the cat slit eyes, but both kit and sky have the hazel coloring. and then kit has the cat ears and tail. also, kit moves alot differently from skylar. i havent mentioned anything yet, but now that i think about it sky moved like she had to be sure anf firm of every step-as if she had to check the ground before she walked. kit just glides across the floor becuz shes still part cat, and more or less she has no fear of tripping over something and falling flat on her face! lolz ya bill got to a point where he scared me 2 :( but it does give him character depth. i cant confirm ur guess cuz then id be giving away the plot, but i'd like to let u noe that poeple have guessed things spot on which made me think of a new way for things to happen! X] ah ya the guys attacking kit...i really came up with it on the spot ;P i needd to create a new bad guys so BAM! lolz oh and i felt aweful writing bout the freakout! bill shouldnt have been so violent. no i completely love ur review and it made perfect sense! write more long reveiws cuz they make me really happy :D *huggles*
Date: 10/20/08 09:02 pm Title: Emotional Overload
!!! Love this with my lifeeee!!!!
Author's Response: *faints* u only have to write one sentence and it has me going crazy with pride and love! ive read ur story and i thought it was simply amazing and here u r telling me that u love MY story!!! *dies* its just too great for words. so yes, thanks a bunch! *besos*
Date: 10/19/08 12:30 am Title: In The Morning
god. what is my problem tonight? i meant sky. sky.that is the name that i meant. wow. i should probably go to bed now. i think i'm going insane from lack of sleep. i'm always on here.
Author's Response: omg dont worry ive spent sleepless nights on this site! i swear to god im hooked cuz i visit EVERY. SINGLE. DAY. for at least an hr! XD so dont worry bout it. go sleep lolz
Date: 10/19/08 12:28 am Title: In The Morning
oh and i just realized that i said my favorite part wil be when people find out she's kit.well i meant when people find out she's saky. i'm sure you could've figured that ou but i felt i should at least point it out. keep up the awesome work XD
Author's Response: haha yes dont worry all her aliases get me confused too sometimes. thanks again for the reviews! :D
Date: 10/19/08 12:27 am Title: Emotional Overload
ahhh oh my god! overload indeed. SHE TALKS! that was big for me. i mean she hasnt been able to talk for like the majority of the story. that's gotta change some things up. for some reason i feel like shes gonna hide that but i'm nott quite sure.
The "I was Gustav’s rejection. Our relationship was a joke." and "I needed to erase every touch, every kiss, and this was doing it. I’m not going to let anyone touch me until all of theses disgusting ghosts are burned off my body. Exorcized from my translucent skin." parts were both good. they made me sad. i hope she's not gonna keep herself closed off.she needs bill as much as he needs her. i also hope theat she fogives bill for the almost rape thing. i mean he was obviously wasted out of his mind and just really horny. but i can see where she wouldn't.
the part i am most looking forward to (although i don't think its going to happen for a while) is when people find out she's kit. for some reason my favorite parts are always people's reactions. it makes the story seem so real.
wow i just realized how long this is. so in a nutshell: i've loved it so far andddd i'm pretty sure i will continue loving it. great job! update whenever you can XD
Author's Response: YES! kit finally her voice back. u noe im glad u mentioned it, becuz all this ime we've been hearing her internal thoughts about everything but now we should hear wat she has to really say! or at least we should..cant give away any plot spilers ;] oh yes, those lines were very sad. i was sad when writing them. im glad that u mentioned the lines cuz they show me how effective they were. theyr a great help, so the more u mention them the more ill luv u! not that i dont already, uve sent me such a long review!! :D aggh! i still cant wrap my mind around the fact that bill was actually horny! >.< it just scars me so much cuz this is the bill i created, and in my story bill+horny=WTF?! lolz but i guess it makes the problem stand out more, cuz every1 else is like NO BILL NO! ahh already looking forward to later on in the story. u have no idea how much this haunts my mind every day! im writing this story as i go along, so with every chap i have to think bout how the next series of event is going to be affected and what will change and blah blah blah. but this part is going to be pivotal-it will make or break the story if i cant write it good! :X it cause me so much worry lolz im happy the story is so realistic, cuz i wouldnt really expect it with all this magic mojo going on-but it makes me happy! sum1 else mentioned that the characters like kit r very realistic and human, and this is such a great accomplishment for me. im so happy that u love my story and dont worry bout leaving long reviews cuz they make me smile and i write long responeses back! and it also shows how good the stories getting, so dont ever worry bout how long it is. i read every word. thanks for the love! besos <3
Date: 10/18/08 12:58 am Title: Emotional Overload
This is so, so, completely amazing. I need this like oxygen.
Author's Response: WAH! thanks so much! thats a really beautiful thing to say, and it makes me feel extremely happy. *glomps* thanks for reading! :D