wow I really love the way you worte this story

Author's Response: AHHH! thanks so much! XD its simple comments like urs that give me such huge smiles :D thanks so much for ur review *hugs*

It seems I was wrong completely: the chapter before this was not the top one, I think this one is! there is a strange mixture of all kinds of information, feelings, moments and twists that I can hardly begin to speak about it. I am always touched by the way Kit tries to protect Bill all the time, risking her own safety, when things usually happen the other way round. She is even preoccupied of his mental safety and wants to keep him away from even watching. And then the magic moment of the kiss, the key to many turns (both meanings of the word) in your story! It's like kissing a cloud...etc etc, that was one of the best metaphores I have ever read! A wonderful way of picturing a kiss! Just wonderful! And then she confesses her feelings, that is magic too, these simple words that I am always reluctant to use, have the correct deep meaning, since she said them on the point of losing her life. And he needs to hear them, of course he does! I am confused by the leit motif of the rain. Rain always gives me a pressure sensation, like my brain is compressed or numbed by the lack of sun and the constant, hypnotising sound of the water pouring. I find it a good background for the tensed moments in the story, the dark ones. Bill's revelation about Kit's identity is touching too, he finally superposes his two adored girls and I think he is happy.
As for Sky's moments with Gram, they are also contradictory to me. Because she is a guardian angel, but she doesn't also bring happiness. Kit had to endure much pain before being able to discover and confess her feelings to Bill and this old angel couldn't even protect her from being almost killed. If she were an angel to my taste, she wouldn't have given Sky any choice. She was supposed to know how things would happen, wasn't she? Sky doesn't think too clearly in that moment, so Gram should have not listened to her. On the other hand, I can understand Sky very well, she refuses to have half things, but I guess Bill should have had a say in all that, after all Gram killed the connection he had to Sky and he had feelings for her. Even strong ones! Why would this angel not take his pain into account too?
I am obviously very curious to see how these issues are going to untangle in your last chapter. I will have nothing else to do but wait (it seems waiting for one of your chapters is perfectly worth it)and then reread everything, with the image of the whole story inside my head. I am sorry it ends, but at the same time it follows a logical course and I wouldn't even dare suggest a continuation that might spoil the charm. I trust you will come up with something at least equally astounding with this magnificent chapter! Well written, Kit and come back quickly, I'll be here! Besitos and pupici!Irenie

Author's Response: oh irenie. i really really wish that i could discuss chap ideas with u b4 i post things. i mean u would be able to tell me where i go wrong-like wat i should work on or fix. no1 over here can give me any help! aghhh. and i have to be honest-i really want to rewrite the last bit of the chap. i shouldve explained the angel dynamics more. ur reviews always send my thoughts turning! :) im very grateful for them and becuz of them im aplying with the idea of explaining that better in the next chap. maybe tho, not really sure, like normal lol. i luv how u pick up the little details in my chap :D they make me so very happy! hehe the kiss was the best thing to write. making it sensual wasnt needed in this case and im very grateful cuz ur descriptions of kisses r always so vivid and beautiful. i went with a metaphor! i thought about it for a really long time but then it clicked and it worked out really well. i LOVE it whenever rain is mentioned. rain is the answer to all weather conundrums. if u need a cozy atmosphere or in this case a tense one rain is the solution. as for the angel thing ive been playing with sum ideas as to y she really oes suck at her job. if u have time, id like to noe if it would be overkill in the next chap if i tried to explain it a bit better. if i really think about it, it might work out but id like ur opinion too if u dont mind :] and irenie ur reviews make me smile so big! ugive the best compliments and u make my work feel like its something important,something thats cared about by other people than me ^///^ i hope that i give the same feeling whenever i review for ur chaps. ur story is absolutely amazing and i luv it to bits, just like u! besitos and pupici irenie. snuggles,kit

only one more chapter?? OH NOES! but anyways this chapter was so sad. seriously. that last part almost made me cry. it was great though. can't wait for the final chapter!

Author's Response: ^///^ yay! thanks so much for ur review. glad u liked this chap. hope the ending is just as good :D *hugs*

Bestiality! Haha just kidding...mostly =P

Also, you should know this is coming-
RA CHA CHAAA

It's still great, by the way. The clothing descriptions are a nice touch

Author's Response: hahah ya seriously. i never thought of it until aria mentioned how she hs to forget that bill is basically falling in love with a cat XD oh u guys. u slowly intend to drive me insane as i intend to make u addicted to TH fanfics lolz and if u think wat uve read so far is ra cha cha it gets better. much much better aka lots of secret sexual tension better lmao and i told u it was the epic adventure i never got to write. these clothes r something i want/crave to own but their so godamn expensive. so y not give them to kit since bill is so godamn rich! and im glad u think its great :D

suspense!

Author's Response: it keeps u on the edge of ur seat ;]

woow i like it! this band fan fiction is really cool

Author's Response: hehe thanks! xD u make me smile. and once i pull u into this fanfic addiction there will be limitless possibilities as to wat ull read muwahahaha ;]

Ahhh the dream sequence is really well-written! It was really suspenseful and it was pretty clever how Sky can only do things if Bill imagines it possible. Also, is the dad character true to life?

"Wait.

I didn’t just say that.

I did not just say that!"
I know how you feel, Sky. Well, sort of. Except I'm not saying I like him. I feel like this is making less sense as I go on.

I'm not done reviewing/reading this chapter but I have to finish another time. Sorry!

-R

Author's Response: ok theres is almost nothing known about their real dad. their parents divorced when they were 7, and hes never in any of their pics or anything. seriously dissappeared off the face of the earth. typically, in alot of the fanfics thier dad is portrayed as the bad guy hence the divorce. so ya, this is all in my head since i needed a childhood insecurity and this was perfect. haha and dont worry. its easy to feel how sky felt during bills little shower *sings* EROTIC EROTIC PUT UR HANDS ALL OVER MY BODY!

Crazy dream. I was trying to analyze who/what the torturer guy is but i failed i think.

FANTASMAGORICAL! In both senses of the word haha.

-R

Author's Response: ok the bad guy in the dream was supposed to be like a symbol of all the worries in bill's life at the moment and how theyr slowly eating him up on the inside. it has alot to do with his mental state-all the stress and worry and stuff. so there wasnt a specific type of person, just the epitome of all his troubles personified in this nightmare man.rnand yes. fantasmagoricalX2 lolz

I don't think I've said it yet but this is reallllly good so far! I love your descriptions and how you totally just embrace the supernatural.

-R

Author's Response: haha magic is my middle name! idk if i tried to explain this to u but this fanfic is like the epic story that i never had the motivation to write so i think everything that iver ever had the urge to write bout is in here lolz

I think Tom would be more of a...whatever this is:

http://njhurst.com/~natiel3/knitting/2006july/bendi_dred.jpg

bahahahahah

Author's Response: XD OMG UR SO RITE! now if only i couldve put this in my story instead. oh wells. but that seriously really clever. i give u props ;]