Date: 07/27/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn this is a good start. So cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks. I will be uploading another tonight.
Date: 07/27/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
*-* ohhhhhh!!! Fishie likey!!! XDDD go on! go on!!! lol totally passes in my book =P good grammar, good starting scene XD wunderschön!!! Except for at the ending notes where you said "if this gets excepted by the mods" =P then it's "accepted" ^^ toodles! *scurries off to bed*
Author's Response: Thank you. Lol, I can't believe I made a simple mistake like that. I guess I was just tired and fed up with my computer (it kept freezing), I'll go and fix it now. I should be uploading a new chapter tonight. I usually wait until I get about five reviews (a chapter) then I upload again and I already have five, so you guys don't have to wait.
Date: 07/27/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
that is harsh curse andreas for making my poor Bill cry..I hope u do end up putting the rest of the storie i would really and i mean really love to read more ^^
Author's Response: I should be uploading a new chapter later today. I am glad you like it.