Date: 08/05/08 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is a great story, I don't say this often but i hope that andreas gets whats coming to him soon. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
cant wait for the next chapter... hoping for some "action" though^^
Author's Response: Thanks. There will be soon. Promise.
Date: 08/05/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwww poor tomi!!!...good Billa...awww its sooooo freakin cute...more reeeeally soon please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/08 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww, this chapter was so sweet! We'll be good, I promise! *puppy dog eyes* More SOON! *coughs* Pweeeassee?! ((anxious))
Author's Response: Thanks, more will come soon.
Date: 08/05/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
What's happenning in chapter nine that's so great?! >o>
Author's Response: You'll see. All I will say is that you will get more understanding.
Date: 08/05/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
I actually really love this, I can't wait for the next chapter
I want to kill Bill and Tom though, seeing as they both know that the other has secrets
A tiny bit of CC though, in my personal opinion, if you wrote in past tense, e.g- 'After a while Simone opened the door' your writing would probably improve and flow alot better.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that there's anthing bad about your writing as it is now, it's just when I find a fic that I really like, I like to help out the author as best I can, feel free to completely ignore this though
Please, update soon.
Author's Response: I know I should write in past tense, but for some reason I can't...don't ask me why. My brain tells me it looks wrong, then I have to fix it. Thanks for the advice though.
Date: 08/05/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
So very cute! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG!! so beautiful...oh god I'm gonna cry!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/05/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
i think i would love a book like this.
cause frankly i can't wait to read more, and that's always good (:
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 08/05/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg...never saw that one coming...poor tomi...more please!!
Author's Response: Thanks, more later today.
Date: 08/05/08 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
How sad, poor Tom, but it was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 08/05/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 6
great chapter!
Poor Tom, it seems kinda hard for him,,,
Oh, Bill is so cute when he is worried xD
Love you! can't wait till there is more to read ;) X
Author's Response: Thanks, more later today.
Date: 08/04/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
aww, i feel bad for tom, but why on earth would he think that bill would hate him because of that? it's not like he did anything..anyway cant wait for the next chapter! i want them to progress!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry, they will very soon. You'll see why.
Date: 08/04/08 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
I would soo buy a book like this!
Just be sure to tell me when its made XD Its an amazing plot!
Amazing chapter!!
Cant wait to see when they finaly tell each other..everything =]
Author's Response: I will let you know, thank you. It will happen eventually.
Date: 08/04/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
uh i wanna read chapters seven and eight and i'll go crazy for nine...an hell yeah i'll buy the book if ur writing and sign it for me please ^_^..
Author's Response: Of course I will sign it! Thank you so much! Seven will come tomorrow.
Date: 08/04/08 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah I would Probably buy it. :D
What happens next???
Update soon!
Author's Response: I will update tomorrow. Thank you!
Date: 08/04/08 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
ah. if this was a book i would totally read it like 10 times
Author's Response: Awesome. Thank you.
Date: 08/04/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
A book?! Really?! That's so awesome, haha. And no, being sued would NOT be a good thing XD I'm really enjoying this story. Post another update soon! Don't let me...die...*haha*
Author's Response: Awesome, don't worry. I will update tomorrow. Thanks!
Date: 08/03/08 03:21 am Title: Chapter 5
=[ How sad....I wish he didn't have to lie....but I guess....it's more realistic. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks, yes, it is a bit more relestic this way. Thanks.
Date: 08/03/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww! So sweet :) I've just read 1-5, and I think it's a really good story so far. Andreas, though, ugh. Poor Bill! Making him stutter and such (^_^')
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you like it.