Date: 08/07/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Please update soon! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I just did.
Date: 08/07/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh, well. Since you asked nicely...*puts away torture devices* You're forgiven XD We won't kill you.
Hmmm, I think I like it either way :) Just do what you think looks best! Honestly, I think it'll turn out good no matter how you decide to write it. I reeeeally like this story! Chapter 9...soon!! You're making me anxious, lol :)
Author's Response: O thank Gott! I was scared there for a second. lol. Thank you!
Date: 08/07/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awwww I was dying for this to happen! Yay! =]
Ohhh Im soooo excited for the next chapter!!
NO! Dont change it to past tense! Its soooo well written. I love it this way! =P
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like chapter nine.
Date: 08/07/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
your forgiven in my book! but please More!
Author's Response: lol thanks! Nine is up!
Date: 08/07/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yes. I think past tense would fit alot better.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 08/07/08 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
I like this story a lot.
And nah, it's cool.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 08/07/08 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
omg *jaw dropps*
what happened when he was 14?! =0 i thought this only started a few months back?!=0 *has a mental melt down*
PLEASE update soon?! please!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You'll see. It did only start a few months back, but there is more to the story that meets the eye. Thanks, I will soon.
Date: 08/07/08 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! You updated!
You dont write in the past tense?
haha I really never noticed it. I say just leave it how it is when you publish it. It's good either way. =]
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/07/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow...i loved it...yay they are finally together...
about the past tense thing...i think you should keep it the same as it is... :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/07/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think you can keep it in present tense. It makes me feel like it's happening at this moment, and not like someone is telling it afterwards.
But I think you should just go with what feels best. ;)
And I love the story by the way. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad to hear your opinion.
Date: 08/07/08 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
I know I said that I like it better in past tense, and I do. But I think the reason that I prefere it is because it's what I'm used to.
And for the book, never in my life have I read a book in present tense. So I think you should, yet I'm biased. If you do decide to convert it, I'll help if you want.
I really really do love this.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 08/07/08 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
auwww, sooo cute^^
I was thinking: Now they both have seen each others bruise/scars, they are willing to talk about it soon?
btw, Your idea about making this story into a book is awesome!
XxX
Author's Response: They will talk about it really soon, promise. Thanks!
Date: 08/06/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwwwwwwwwww, this is such a great chapter, so lovely and cute. Toms past is very interesting but his father makes me feel ill...I think it would be nice if Bills mom and Toms dad fall in love with each other like Bill and Tom :). I enjoy your writing so much and I can't wait for the next chapter. You are great!
Author's Response: Tom's mom and Bill's dad will not meet in this story, sorry. Thank you!
Date: 08/06/08 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwwww ^_^
this was just the cutest ending EVER! =D
but yeah.. i've been away for a while, so i had a looooong read 2day, but i LOVED ALL OF IT!!!!! *hugs u tight*
this was totally amazing and i can't wait for more!!!
tom's "dad" is a total jackass and.. yeah.. u've probably already heard just about every other word i could posably think of that would discribe him from other reviewers, so i might just skip the others =) (the list would get kinda long and probably just downright boring after a while.. =S)
but now i'm afread that it might end up that tom and bill are twins and that they fall inlove first and then find out and just... well, u know the deal.... )=
but PLEASE update soon? (A)
Author's Response: They won't end up twins in this one. I think that is done way to much in fics. Plus, I want to publish this story and incest is taboo to a lot of people and I rather not be viewed as a bad writer yet. Thanks for your opinion though!
Date: 08/06/08 12:35 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww that was soo cute!
Bill seriously needs to tell him!
eekkkk now Im excited for chapter 9! =] cant wait!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was good even know it was short but oh well and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww! that has got to be the cutest scene i have ever seen(well read). and i absolutely cannot wait to read chapter eight!!!! SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post it tonight. ill love you forever!!!!!
also, dont change the looks too much, they're hot. lol
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwwwe thank you!
Date: 08/05/08 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
time them both up and do a double update!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/05/08 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow, amazing. I loved it. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 08/05/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was so cute, especially when Bill kissed Toms back, definitely an 'aw' worthy moment :)
Author's Response: Thanks.