Date: 01/15/19 11:52 am Title: Chapter 13
this was a really good story!!
i hope you did a sequel to this!
Date: 07/22/12 09:52 am Title: Chapter 13
Ohhh that was a beautiful quote!
I liked this story a lot. For a first slash attempt it was pretty good. I'm actually simultaneously reading another of yours, 'everything fades to black' and there if definite improvement, but I still really enjoyed this one.
I like hoe in the end Bill gave Andreas his necklace back. It was very poetic, but I thinlk Andreas 'single tear down the cheek' was just a little bit over dramatic.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Date: 09/06/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 13
wow, I really like that quote at the end there. This was a really good fic. congrats on your first slash and novella.
Date: 09/05/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
wait so..omg I just realized something...he literally runs for the hills to get away from Andreas...*chuckles sadly* I'm trying SO hard not to find that funny because of WHY he needs to but...it is a litte funny...and no your not doing a bad job with the emotional aspect of this my brain just tries to find humor in bad situations sometimes...i
ll review again when i finish
Date: 05/24/10 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
this was so moving so beautiful. This makes me reanalyze life. Thank You for this work of art
Date: 06/20/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
ooh, that was so adorable.. i love how you finished it with bill's eyes that are finally shining.. i wish i had someone who would love me like that :) i loved it..
Date: 04/09/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nice quote and nice story:) looking forward to read more of your work!
Date: 04/09/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
i like the way you write don't change it:)
Date: 04/09/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
that was so sweet and aww just loved that moment where Bill kisses his back.:D
Date: 04/09/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really like the story and i saw the book on the link unfortunately i do not own a credit card, but I'm putting this on my "to get" list:D
Date: 04/09/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
aww, stuttering bill is so cute! Tom's so nice:)
Date: 04/09/09 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
"This means no playing your guitar until two in the morning."
lol, sounds just like my mom xD
ugh, I hate guys like andi and his "gang"
Date: 01/10/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh poor Bill. Andi's mean!