Date: 07/29/08 11:23 am Title: One.
i thought it was good. keep it up :)
Date: 07/28/08 04:18 am Title: One.
*wipes tears*
amazing! ^^
Author's Response: Awh! thanks xD
Date: 07/27/08 11:14 pm Title: One.
i have one, you put "night" instead of "knight" i just wanted to point it out since u said to tell u. Love the storie ^^
Author's Response: yeah, I noticed that when i was re reading it to check the layout was rightrn*goes and corrects*rnthanks for reminding me!!!
Date: 07/27/08 07:23 pm Title: One.
I liked this first chapter.
Yup, I want to read more.
But maybe you'd like to fix this chapter, I don't think you meant to make it all italic, did you?
It kind of confused me, for a second I wondered what was a video/what was from the present.
But other than that, it was awesome :D
Date: 07/27/08 06:53 pm Title: One.
Yeah, it was kinda soon. And i think it rushed a little into Tom's side of things, you sorta mentioned what his illness was, but im still a little unsure.
However, that might've been your point! Sometimes i dont catch on to things that fast. Dx.
But the little scenes between the chibi twins are just adorable. I love mommy kisses between them. XD.
Author's Response: Damn it, I knew it was too rushed when I posted but I was like 'naah, its fine ._.'rnGah, its gonna slow riiight down, and get picked up really fast, then back to slow (:rnrnAnd I don't want details of Tom's ilness clarified just yet, I want too wait until its's too late, story wise.
Date: 07/27/08 12:00 am Title: Prologue
I love this! I'm excited for more. Update soon!
Date: 07/26/08 11:14 pm Title: Prologue
It's a nice beggining...
Though i feel for Tom,but i have no idea what he has.
Update soon!
Date: 07/26/08 11:03 pm Title: Prologue
yet bill should know that even if things happen in the past they still come back to hunt you...i really got inspired by your storie i hope i get to read more ^^
Date: 07/26/08 05:15 pm Title: Prologue
Cute, is my initial reaction, and then i just have a comment, that i'm pretty sure its Tom who loves nature and Bill who'd rather stay inside. I think they said that in an interview or something.
Anyways, i love little candid videos of the twins, i would love to see one. XD.
There's more right? What kind of illness is Tom suffering from?
Author's Response: Shhhhh, I forgot to add ooc to the warnings.rnOf course there's more coming.rnAll shall be made clear (:
Date: 07/26/08 04:46 pm Title: Prologue
*is interested*
Yup, I really like this start.
I'll be looking out for the first chapter. (:
Author's Response: :D thanks!rnI wasn't sure of it tbh, I'll try and update asap (:
Date: 07/26/08 04:29 pm Title: Prologue
Tom's illness? ^o)
ok.. so i only started reading out of boredom (i don't read anything that might be cest), but now u've got me captivated! =0
update soon and tell me? (A)
Author's Response: Yeah, it'll get explained...rnrnAnd its ok, "cest aint for everyone, unfortunately, this will turn out smutty, IT BECKONS MEEEE! LOLrnrnAnd I'll update soon, I hope xD