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Reviewer: LadyAya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 09:47 pm Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

OMNOMNOMNOM.....Bill is so cute and erratic in this it's really just adorable! YAY...I luffs it!

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 06:14 am Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

that is a good story but what about georg and gustav will georg tell gustav did georg get it on camera

Author's Response: mm, I wrote a sequel.. It was called "that was horrifiyingly incredible" (:

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 01:44 pm Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

sweet

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/25/08 09:57 am Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

That was SO hot!
*reads the sequel*

Reviewer: miss pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 08:12 pm Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

hot and cute at the same time ;)

Reviewer: ziemniakers Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 06:07 am Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

Sorry, but I must say that I didn't like it.
I read it without any emotions. This time I can't blame my imperfect English for it.
It would be OK if you just wrote about the chocolate, but what the hell was Geo doing in this story? I don't understand why you put him in it. His reaction was totally counterintuitive.
Last sentences. They're just like Georg. They came out of nowhere.
My advice: practice, practice, practice!

Reviewer: billtom_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 01:09 am Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

awww cute lolz and wow Georg thats weird i loved it great job lolz

Reviewer: be_truthful Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 08:15 pm Title: Bill likes his chocolate ;)

You should do a sequel to this, with Georg's reaction the next day.
This was bloody awesome.

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