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Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

*whines* April! D: I dun wanna wait another two months! D:

...Or did you just abandon the fic? Dx

Author's Response: Actually, I had an unusual amount of...issues. I'm on a new medication now and am in a much better situation where I am pulling ideas again.rnrnAlso, I have most of this story planned out, so all I have to do is find the motivation to work in band fiction again. :]

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/09 04:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow.. Dude. this story is confusing ... In a good way though.. The way you describe the scenes is awesome. I really hope you update soon...THIS STORY IS MYSTERIOUS AND I LOVE MYSTERIOUS!! I have a feeling it would take you a while to update again. SSSOOOO!! Please update soon! Like....Really soon!!!

Author's Response: It's confusing, hmm? Well, it's not the first time I've heard that, and with the way things have been headed in the outline of the future chapters, it certainly won't be the last. And your feeling about the next update is more than likely going to be true... But it'll be long. I swear! :) Either way I will try my best. thank you for the review and opinions!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/09 03:59 am Title: Hallucination

Wow..... Sorry. Its a really good story. I'm just too lazy to describe it...

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

honey i just got really messed up with this storie! XD wooow with ur imaginatioon! AMAZING! omg! no woooah just im speechless messed up n GAH!

Author's Response: I'm glad. x) Err, I think. It took forever to finish that chapter because it never hit my standards. I guess it is kinda messed up though. Bill's a very messed up, confused ghost. I don't envy him. 'Specially in the future. Anyway, thanks for your review and opinions!

Reviewer: DURCHDENMONSUN Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOL OMG.
MINDFUCK TO THE EXTREME.
FINALLY! YOU ARE ALIVE!
i've been waiting forever for an update!

Author's Response: :D Sorry to keep you waiting so long. I've not had net long enough to post anything, and since school's almost out, I can't type anything there then send it to myself to post when I get a chance.rnrnThankfully, chapter 3 is well underway, and I've planned out the story, and the sequel, so I won't hit another harsh dry spell for a good while. :3rnrnThanks for the review!

Reviewer: SkullGirlXOXO Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/09 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

awesome story
dude my b-day's in April
it's on the 6th!!!
anyways
it's different and I like it
please update soon

Author's Response: Happy day-early-birthday!!! :DrnrnAnd I plan on updating soon, so please look for it in the upcoming week or two. x)

Reviewer: runningthroughtthemonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 07:22 pm Title: Hallucination

plaese update soon. i will die with out this story. i need to know what is going on with bill.Is he died or what. Is he ever going to leave his room

Author's Response: Ack! Please don't die! I don't think that'll work out in my favor. And anyways, I'd planned to update over Christmas break, but my computer caught a small virus and I lost a good third of my stories, DttW being one of them. I have a small chunk of the chapter on paper somewhere in my locker at school, and maybe even a bit typed up on the school database... But nothing here at home. So, I've gotta do some major searching and hope I find it. Otherwise, it might take a good month or two to rewrite all of this story that I've lost.rnrnI'm terribly sorry! Please forgive me! :(

Reviewer: dannspringich Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/08 07:57 pm Title: Hallucination

I definatly like it. Please continue soon xDDD

Author's Response: Really? So glad you like it. :3 I's trying to write the second chapter... It just got so off base.... *trashed what she'd written and had started over* Gah!rnrnAnyways, I'm trying to update on the weekends, but things are kinda rough right now... Sorry!

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/08 03:34 pm Title: Hallucination

(makes a face) yeah.. had to do that before... will be waiting though

Author's Response: Thanks. And I'll try to put up, at least, a small chapter to show I've still working on it tomorrow while meh folks're gone.

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/08 02:47 pm Title: Hallucination

I'm curious as to what happens next..

Author's Response: Actually, I'd finished most of the second chapter, but I hated how it ended, so I tossed most of it and started over.

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 11:41 am Title: Hallucination

liked it enough to tag it for updates... that help?

poor Bill, and boy is Tom in for a surprise..

Author's Response: Actually, that helps a lot. :3 I'm glad you liked it enough for updates.

Reviewer: DURCHDENMONSUN Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 09:56 pm Title: Hallucination

*iz dying* WRITEEE MOOORE! PLEEEEASE!!
xD

Author's Response: I'm so sorry!! I've been house sitting with my friend for her grandparents, and everything for the second chapter is at my mom's house saved ot the computer there. In the past week, I haven't gone home ecept once, and that was because I had to go and be a freshman peer (tor)mentor. x3 But I fully plan on spending some time on DttW before school starts up on the 12th.

Reviewer: ingrid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/08 12:06 pm Title: Hallucination

wow dis is gd plz write more

Author's Response: I will, and I am. Thanks! :D

Reviewer: namenlos Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 04:37 pm Title: Hallucination

You're welcome! Usually what I do is work ahead till I have a few chapters, then go back and find the ending point I want for a chapter. I find that I end up putting in perfect places to close it on without realizing. And then I already have a jumpstart on the rest of the story, and I can stay ahead of what I post.

I'm really glad you posted this story, and I hope you post more of your stories as well!

Author's Response: That is a good idea. I'll probably do that while working on chapters two and three, because they're taking place in the same setting.rnrnI'm glad I've posted the story, too though. It makes me feel good to see what other people think of how I write. I like constructive criticism and chapter pointers, like yours. It betters me! Yay me!rnrnAnd I have posted a new story, the second chapter for that is so much closer to being done than DttW that it makes me laugh.

Reviewer: Hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 10:54 am Title: Hallucination

oh my god! scary! please update soon!

Author's Response: Well, I've been trying. The chapter just hasn't met my expectations. I've got all the ideas I need, but I'm just not on the computer my story is stved to.

Author's Response: Well, I've been trying. The chapter just hasn't met my expectations. I've got all the ideas I need, but I'm just not on the computer my story is stved to.

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 09:52 pm Title: Hallucination

Woah! Crazy!
Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: :D Thanks so very much!!

Reviewer: thehobbitgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 09:17 pm Title: Hallucination

This is so awesome! I like how you keep wondering what happened to Bill and how you changed the myths about ghosts. Totally awesome!

Author's Response: Actually, I was so nervous that while I was writing the first chapter, I also wrote a page of rules to keep myself in line. Some I did change completely while others were merely adapted to fit. I'm glad you like it, thanks for your imput!

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 08:27 pm Title: Hallucination

Dang this story is awesome!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it!

Reviewer: namenlos Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 07:19 pm Title: Hallucination

I really like it, I can't wait for more! I always wanted to do a story like this, but it didn't get far. Oh well, update soon :D

Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you like this. Heck, I'm pleased that people like this. I wasn't even sure I wanted to post this chapter. I spent three days on the chapter, and on the second day I ended up getting side-tracked on an ending. Usually, I write an ending that I'll never attain, then I never post the story itself. I know it's strange, but it's just how I work. But now, the ending seems to have motivated me! (Quite odd, I know.) But whatever works. I hope to have chapter 2 up by next Wednesday. Thanks bunches. =3

Reviewer: DURCHDENMONSUN Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 06:55 pm Title: Hallucination

I liked it.
=3
please continue soon! =D

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you liked it! Positive feedback makes me smile. =D The second chapter is maybe halfway done right now. I just have to finish it up and re-type it. I hope to post the second chapter next Wednesday (or sooner).

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