Date: 07/24/08 04:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Is this the story you have posted some time ago? I had been reading it with utmost interest, it was very well written, but it suddenly stopped. If you go on, I'll be here to read!
Author's Response: Yes. i did have this story posted a long long time ago. but someone deleted it from the site and its taken me until now to get it accepted back onto the site. I will be posting more chapters as soon as my beta reader gets back to me.. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/23/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Again, really clumped together. I'll help you out with that if you need it.
Love it!! Its been a while since you've really focussed on this. I like re-reading them again.
Author's Response: again i forgot!rnrnit took me what.. 3 months to start writing this story again?rnhaha but i got it finished now thank goodness
Date: 07/23/08 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1
YES!! Finally posted!!!
you know I love it baby.
Just one thing. Your paragraphs are pretty clumped still, and I would space it out a lot more. But it kicks ass otherwise.
Author's Response: I forgot to space em out after i printed them out for you.