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Reviewer: tomigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 04:52 pm Title: Deutschland? You mean, Duitchland?

Love the Story :) You should make a sequel to it! I want to know what happens to Lena and the baby.. :)

Reviewer: TokioGirrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 06:30 pm Title: Ready, Set, Go it's time to run...

OMG D: *cries* that is so sad.
i am in love with this story. UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: LilyLeonard Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 06:42 pm Title: A Normal Day at school

this sounds a bit too rushed and 'i have the perfect life but i'll add a few issues for the crack'
BUT
this is a veryyyy good story and very well written :)
i liked it personally. and if it isn't finished...PLEASE UPDATE:D
and i suppose it is fan fiction isn't it? and to each their own! :)

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 08:38 pm Title: Are We There Yet?

11 to 12? NO PROBLEM! cool chapter though, i like the way the people did stuff.

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 08:26 pm Title: Nice Day Out

young and fit... and full of PUDDING? I like pudding. lots. alot lots lot.
you like pudding?

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 08:21 pm Title: A Normal Day at school

Awwsome start! So, Bill is a third wheel, eh? ^_^ Well, I won't scamper off! I'll review every chappy! You can't get rid of me! ~giggle~ ~twitch~

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 03:37 pm Title: From Red and into the Blue

I confess I'm a little irritated - and not just because ETERNITY has passed since we last saw you. The whole pregnancy thing is a little over-used if I'm honest, but I'll wait to see where this goes, I think.

Author's Response: I know it has been eternity :(. Mostly because I have all my school exams now. But, yes I do agree pregnany is over used, but how this works out is definately not how you would expect. I'll e-mail some stuff to get checked today so thanks for reminding me ^_^

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 11:54 am Title: I bring good news!

Feeding away...

Anyways, I have to agree that friends that are the important things in life. Update soon, but please put a little Tomi action in..

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/09 03:35 pm Title: I loved it, and I think this can work!

Nice update, and I liked the bit at the end with her mother - very sweet and a nice touch, methinks.

Do update soon!

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/08 06:33 am Title: I loved it, and I think this can work!

Bit of a filler, but I'm glad you posted it!

Update soon!

Reviewer: Bills girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 07:49 am Title: I loved it, and I think this can work!

MORE BITTE

Reviewer: Sugarpain Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/08 04:15 pm Title: I loved it, and I think this can work!

I really liked this! I love the way you describe everything, it's much easier to put myself into the mentality that way. If that makes sense? :D
You're a phenomonal writer, Monique!

Reviewer: xoxlucyzxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/08 05:21 pm Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

lovely jubly again , ty so much xx

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/08 01:17 pm Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

Oh thank God, you know no-one is updating at the moment. Stupid education system. Update as soon as you can, kay?

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 03:19 pm Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

i looooooooooved it!!!!!!

plz update soon!!!!!

=D

Reviewer: Bills girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 11:41 am Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

more please

Reviewer: ttara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 07:57 am Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

very well written.!
kudos!
:)

Reviewer: 10soley Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 06:49 pm Title: Music Jam @ Garage in TEN!

i like it n_n

Reviewer: Sodelicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 05:28 pm Title: A Normal Day at school

That was absolutely amazing!

Reviewer: Bills girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 10:20 am Title: F is for Forgiveness

more please

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