Date: 09/04/12 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
awe i was so getting into this story why is it done
Date: 09/28/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 15
Love it :D
Author's Response: That's always good to hear!
Date: 09/28/09 12:44 am Title: Chapter 15
I went to click "Next", and the button was mising! I'm sad now!
I love Tabby, i can totally identify with her. She's funny and witty (mostly), and she has great friends. Please keep it coming!
And bedridden? My god! That's horrid! Feel better soon, ok?
Author's Response: Sorry!!!rnrnI'm glad you like Tabby - a lot of people seem to. I wanted to make her real, and normak, so wrote what I knew, rather than what I wish I was like. And then I gave her new traits and strengths and weaknesses and voila! My best friend actually wants to marry but I'm just like - she's a character. And then my best friend hit me. Honestly, the abuse I get!rnrnI've actually only just been able to type again, so now I might actually be able to get some stuff done. My work is bewing sent home, but I'm gonna try and update soon! As for the better bit, my God I hope so, pain is getting so old now.
Date: 09/28/09 12:27 am Title: Chapter 14
Alright. In the beginning, I stated that I was pretty sure I had started this story. Now I'm positive, because I remember reading about the food. Figures, right?
All in all, I really like this, very much.
Author's Response: I remember your reviews!! I was actually wondering where you'd got to, I'd considered giving you a poke, but I though it'd be a bit rude. Besides - you turned up!
Date: 09/27/09 11:39 pm Title: Count down
Just checking in to let you know that I like this. Superior wit and sarcasm is always a good thing.
Author's Response: Oh Good, I'm glad you do, and I agree, so long as they're working... I hate it when they switch off!
Date: 09/27/09 11:13 pm Title: Meet me
Alright, so, I'm pretty sure I started reading this before, but I can't remember parts of it, so I'll just have to go through it again. With pleasure.
Author's Response: Yah, you did! I hope you enjoy!!
Date: 09/06/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 14
As for constructive critisism, you may want to watch out for gettng your tenses mixed up. Make sure that it's all past, and doesn't jump into present. It can be a bit difficult to figure out what's going on.
Overall, though, the chapter was very good.
Author's Response: Thankies!! I'll watch out for that :D
Date: 07/03/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was lovely. Really. I like the style, you made me feel like I was a part of everything going happening on the stage, like I was right there along side the band. Very spiff. The description of the feelings and the attitude and the crowd totally wowed me. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I really wanted to focus on the show and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have the next bit partly written. But I've got to go to my friend party tomorrow, so I'll be exhausted all weekend. I'll try to update soon though!
Date: 05/15/09 10:14 pm Title: Meet me
ok i just noticed that i didn't review. Well I love it and I am begging you to atleast update ome more chapter bcuz i have no life whatsoever...at all....TMI
i'm gonna walk away now...
Author's Response: Thank you!! At the moment, updating will be very slow, because I have weeks of major exams coming up and I have to devote myself to them (unfortunately), so I can't really write much. Sucks. I'll do my best to get one up asap though!
Date: 04/27/09 10:50 pm Title: Kick Off
I just got up to speed, and I think I like this very much. Please update, and I will read it.
Author's Response: Thakns! I'll do my best, but I've got exams in a few weeks, GCSE mocks in December and GCSE's next year - and my school is going mental.
Date: 04/26/09 10:17 pm Title: Information Overload
this is gooood.
Author's Response: Thankies for the compliment, but you do know that you didn't review at the end?
Date: 04/26/09 10:06 pm Title: Meet me
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice...
Date: 03/11/09 06:02 pm Title: On Arrival
You have to write more or I will force feed you pie.
Aren't I an angel? :)
Author's Response: Absolutely angelic. I have the next one but I forgot to post it... Whoopsie-daisies! I'll take the pie though, I'm so hungry! I have just walked thirty k in a day and a half and I'm feeling the after-affects!! *...posts*
Date: 01/12/09 10:29 pm Title: On Arrival
*pout* No more chappies for me.... I love this story, very well-written. Update soon? Maybe? Please?
Author's Response: Updating it as we speak! Well, techinically we're typing, and I'll have to do it afterwards, but whate ver. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 11/13/08 10:09 pm Title: On Arrival
*grins* Love this!
Author's Response: Yay!! Thankies *does happy dance* I hope the next one is up soon... Really, I have actuall no idea what I've done with it. Oops. But I'll be as quick as I can - promise!
Date: 10/27/08 07:02 pm Title: On Arrival
i'm so excited you updated again!!!!
yay yay yay yay yay !!!
*does a little dance*
Author's Response: I just realised that have the next one that hasn't been posted. Hehe, oops. I'll do that as quick as possible - and thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 10/26/08 12:10 pm Title: On Arrival
yay! Welcome baaaaack!!!! We missed you and your brilliant writing! :D
Author's Response: Aw, shucks, I missed you too!
Date: 09/15/08 02:26 pm Title: Meet me
Why yes, yes I am smart. Very much so. Of course.
You're joking, right?
You posted a chapter twice O_o
Author's Response: I did? Huh. How did I manage that?
Date: 08/28/08 11:21 am Title: In the air
this is amazing i actually love this the mum bit made me chuckle like a little gnome i love it soo sooooooo
much
please update soon london rocks baby *coz ur royal awesomeness lives ther (me)*
wish they realy would come here one ccan dream
update soon
ly
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's Response: Th in London. *sighs* We wish. I'm the little gnomes chuckling is something to behold, and I have managed to update the next bit. Well done me!!
Date: 08/28/08 07:21 am Title: In the air
Oh dear bills ass *far off in dreamland*
Even though it was short it was good : )
*offers humbugs*
Author's Response: I know, right?rnrnSorry about the length, it was kinda a filler. I'm on a typing course atm, but I'll get the next bit up asap.rnrnOoh! Humbug!!