Date: 02/07/15 09:33 am Title: The Newcomers
First I must note: If this is pink I’m going to kill you,” he said as he felt her dab a light brush across his eyelid.
“You wouldn't dare,” she said and switched to another brush, doing god knows what to his face.
THE IRONYYYYYY FFFFFFOR FUCK'S SAKE
Okay now that I got that outta my system... ^^ A friend suggested this story to me a few days ago and immediately I was like: if anyone dies -- if there's even a HINT of it -- I'm not reading this. Safe to say I read the whole thing even after I thought "...shit what if he got the death penalty" and EVEN after my suspicions were confirmed. Then I told my friend Tom better sell his stupid cadillac to save Bill and what did he do? He did exactly that mwahaha I'm kinda proud of myself I must say. x)
Anyway enough of that. This story. I don't think you understand how much it fucked me up. Let me quote it real quick: "fucking brain rape!"
It scares me how much this story has made me realize. I relate to Bill...way too much, it's unhealthy and frightening. Literally I think I need to see a shrink.
Honestly I'll never be the same after this. Never. I...don't know if I regret reading this, that's how fucked up I feel right now, even the day after. It was fucking amazing, don't get me wrong, but I don't think I'm even the same person anymore. You may think I'm exaggerating, well I wish I was! You fucking sadist I swear I have a love/hate relationship with you and your story. xD
Moving on! I saw in the reviews that you're rewriting it and I think that's great, good luck! (random: at first I imagined Tom with his black dreads and I kept slapping myself for it xD cause I admit I had a hard time imagining a 20 yo blond dreadlocked Tom. I was also so conflicted about Bill in my head, his appearance I mean, I just couldn't decide myself :P)
I also saw you were writing a sequel... Personally I think the ending was incredible as is and a small part of me thinks you shouldn't touch it...that's just a tiny part though. The rest of me is dying to see Bill happy. It's killing me inside. That reminds me actually I (like others) felt sick reading this quite a few times. Sometimes even I thought I was having a damn heart attack, no kidding! Also I don't know why I exploded when Tom suggested running away. Something about it man, I don't know, it just tore me like a fucking lion was trying to escape from inside me, clawing at me, ripping me to shreds. I managed not to cry anywhere else...I don't understand myself. XD Anyway I got sidetracked! Even just a little sidefic, just a little glimpse into their lives months later, some sorta epilogue...I want it so bad. Something else I want so bad is a drabble where Bill finds out Tom "cheated" on him. x'D Lord yes.
Sooo yeah I want to say thank you...but at the same time I want to say fuck you. I don't know which feeling is stronger. :)
Oh also I was really sad when any links you put were invalid or the fanart was deleted... :((( such a shame
Y'know, I have so much more to say but I don't want to bore you and this is definitely WAY too long already. x)
OH OH ALSO In Your Shadow. nuff said. actuallySOmanysongscametomindreadindthis
AH I KEEP REMEMBERING SHIT. It said somewhere Tom had to take off his piercing for work but several times you talk about him either playing with it or once, Bill touching it...maybe I'm just confused Idk. /headdesk/
One more question then I swear I'll shut up. Why was the ending in italics? It might be obvious but... ^^;
awwww how did Bill escape that first time since they had to put that second lock I HAVE TOO MANY QUESTIONS someone put me out of my miseryyyyyasdfghjklhgfd
Date: 01/04/15 11:48 pm Title: Partner in Crime
I put off reading this for so long. So I skipped to the end. Thank you for giving them hope, and another chance.
Date: 12/25/14 08:32 pm Title: Partner in Crime
Hi there, Brokenmirror. It's 3 AM here in Italy, but I figured I should write something to you before heading to bed.
Thing is, I have so many stuff to say I don't even know where or how to start.
So let me just thank you for the beautiful journey you've led me into, thank you for sharing what your creative mind has to offer and thank you for all of the care and love you've put into each chapter. Thanks, dear.
This had been so good for my soul. My only escape from all the trouble I'm going through lately: curling up in bed and reading my heart out.
If you'll ever read this, just take all of my gratitude and compliments. They're yours. It had been like falling in love with Tokio Hotel all over again, under a new perspective.
Keep it up, girl.
Greetings,
-Ria.
Date: 12/23/14 01:55 pm Title: Partner in Crime
Let me just say that... I cried... a lot... Right when Bill was supposed to die, I mean, I was bawling at that scene. It was heartbreaking...
I'm so glad I came to finish this because this story was amazing. I wish this was published because I would so buy this and cherish it forever.
Ok, thank you for your amazing work. :)
Date: 12/17/14 12:34 am Title: At Gunpoint
Fucking hell man. I never usually read/like OOC but was going through Featured Fics and thought with the amount of reviews this has, i would give it a chance. And man, this story has sucked me right in. I'm used to Bill being the same sweet little guy in every story but this is crazy and i love it! Really original storyline as well so far and i've read a lot of prison fics!
That bit with the gun was so sudden and sneaky but definitely started to build up Bill's character more.
So glad this story has a million more chapters to read. It's 5.34am and i have to go into uni tomorrow but i mean, that's what happens in the fandom world haha!
Date: 11/04/14 04:33 am Title: Partner in Crime
I found this story back 2008 when you first started writing it, I'm pretty sure you were only two, maybe three chapters in when I started to read it. I remember for ages I would eagerly await for the next update, nearly squealing in excitement whenever I saw that e-mail showing you had updated.
I don't remember exactly when I had stopped reading, it wan't just reading this though. It was everything, I stopped writing, I stopped doing a helluva lot of things.
Only recently have I been starting to get better again, started to feel more like myself again after what feels like forever. I've been trying to do things that made me happy, so yesterday I pulled up this site again, I can barely remember the last time I was really on it. I read some of my old stuff, it made me feel nostalgic, it made me smile. I quickly got tired of my own stuff though, it was a stupid walk down memory lane that I still have trouble with.
I don't know what clicked, not sure what it was, but I remembered this story. I remembered how in love with it I had been. It took me just a few seconds to find it again, honestly a little surprised to find that you had finished it. Excited that you had.
And I couldn't stop reading it, I was so invested in this whole story all over again that I just couldn't make myself stop reading it... even though I told myself four and a half ours ago that it was past midnight and to shut my laptop and go to sleep. I couldn't. I needed to know what happened, I needed to follow through.
I almost hated you a few times reading this, almost cried a few times... you're amazing. You painted a picture that I could see so flawlessly, I can't remember the last time I read something that I just couldn't stop. Hunger Games maybe?
I'm sure you don't care about the ramblings of a sleep deprived ex-writer at four thirty in the morning. But I had to say *something* to you, even if you never read this. Because this was beautiful, and I loved every second I read it, so happy that I was able to come back here and find it again.
I feel a little childish, really. Like a silly fan girl almost. I suppose in a way I am, wanting you to know how much I loved your work. How good it made me feel, I don't know. I can't even think of the right words to use to express it. I don't know if that's from lack of writing for so long, lack of leaving any sort of review on anything in years, or possibly just lack of sleep.
Anyways, I'll stop the rambling now and just leave you with this.
It was amazing... that isn't a strong enough word but it will have to do right now.
Thank You.
Date: 10/26/14 04:48 am Title: The Newcomers
I've just finished reading this precious gem for the umpteenth time and nothing, it hurts like the first time. This story always has the power to wreck me. And I’ve just realized I’ve never said you thank you.
I’m so thankful you shared this masterpiece with us, it’s totally one of my favorite. I have a thing for this kind of topic - mental illness/prison but I swear I’m not crazy ;) – and you can imagine how this story can affect me deeply. Every chapter, every word are so powerful and full of emotions that it makes you just keep reading and reading. I became fond of it and well I caught myself thinking that I wish it would never end. Unfortunately everything has an end and yours is… God, it’s amazing. I bloodly loved it although it’s bittersweet. I’ve often thought I would have liked an epilogue, a little glimpse of their lives now. But actually the idea of it scares me a bit. The story is so perfect like it is and the end lets your imagination works and everyone imagined something different, I guess. I’m for the sweetest one. But it will be so appreciated anyway! I’m curious about how it could be for you.
Last thing that I really need to say. I realized I love more your idea of Bill/Tom relationship than those sappy ones. I mean, sometimes little things are better at showing love than words. They’ve never said ‘I love you’ to each other but does it mean they love each other less? No way. The strength and the intensity of their love is well expressed by their unspoken ‘I love you’. They really do care about each other more than anything else in the world, you can see it through their looks and touches. That’s what makes me fell in love even more with #815.
So thank you thank you thank you xxx
Date: 09/15/14 02:49 am Title: Partner in Crime
I finally made myself read the entire thing and I love it. Unexpected ending, but really good none the less! Great story!
Date: 09/08/14 09:40 pm Title: Partner in Crime
OMGGG I need an other story which continues with this story like police chasing Bill and Tom like Bonnie and Clyde! I loved it! You made me cry a lot! Thank you for this story!
Author's Response: Hi, thank you! I actually did start on something exactly like that (called Fugitive as a working title) during last year's NaNoWriMo. I'll continue it this year maybe and see where it ends up.
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Date: 08/06/14 09:36 am Title: Limbo. Part II
You have broken my heart.
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Date: 06/09/14 04:04 pm Title: Partner in Crime
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Date: 05/08/14 02:11 pm Title: Partner in Crime
Time for a review
Date: 05/03/14 08:51 am Title: Partner in Crime
This story has absolutely taken over my world, life and body the last days... I love it, it disturbs me how real it feels, it has totally fucked with my mind. You have written an amazing story, I will never forget it.
Date: 02/17/14 08:25 am Title: Partner in Crime
I havn't really been a superfan about TH for a very long time, though i always keep them in my heart. But last week I found my way back, started listerna again and continued working on my own fanfic. With that came the intrested back to read. I kinda given up hope on this one. Searched for it a couple of times and nothing new was posted. By chance I found you again and was overly happy and exited to find the last chapter. You don't know how long I have been waiting for this. Read this over so many years. You really dragged me back in time and I love it. Like the sentimental feelings. You are usch a good writer. The story, the caracthers and the way you desribe everyting. Its all really realistic and never becomes cheesy. You really got me thinking Bill was dead even though I predicted a happy ending. And i was so nervous the whole car and plane ride. I am at work and read this while transporting files around on my computer. The people who watched my must have wondered why I stare at my phone and look so stressed and emotional. Well this was long, cover up all the time I havn't commeted. Thank you for everything, really loved this!
Date: 02/03/14 07:21 am Title: Partner in Crime
I remember first reading this is in '08... I even told my friend about this. We had a conversation about fanfiction and I was suddenly reminded of its existance. I can back after nearly 2 years and saw that it was completed and I cried of joy! The ending was everything that I imagined. It was worth 4 years of a waiting.
Date: 02/01/14 09:25 pm Title: Partner in Crime
I remember first reading this is in '08... I even told my friend about this. We had a conversation about fanfiction and I was suddenly reminded of its existance. I can back after nearly 2 years and saw that it was completed and I cried of joy! The ending was everything that I imagined. It was worth 4 years of a waiting.
Date: 01/29/14 10:18 am Title: Partner in Crime
Oh my god. This fic fucked me up emotionally. One my of all time favorites. I will never not love it. Thank you for sharing this and for finishing it. Magnificent. I'm at a loss for words. I'm so happy that Tom's plan worked. I was freaking out that they'd be caught. 10/10 would read again and again.