Date: 10/26/09 01:36 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
I was so glad to see this had been updated! I'm so curious to find out how will bill and tom's relationship develop. I can't wait for more!
Cool that you've got the tickets! I can't buy them yet cuz I'm broke at the moment xd completely poor xD update soon!!
Author's Response: Woo, thanks! :D Yeah, I'm sooo happy ! *dances*
Date: 10/26/09 08:39 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
DON'T DO IT! I like this story a lot, mainly because it appears Bill has a good story. If he was a vampire, it would just explain EVERYTHING, you know? I like the mystery, and the fact that, even if/when we figure Bill out, it will be something mundane like he's schizo and just snapped on day or he was framed or something.
...Or maybe I just detest vampire stories, since they tend to be overdone :/
ANYWAY. Great chapter, I totes loved it. Bill obviously has some issues with his parents and how they raised him...did he kill them, or am I remembering wrong? XD
Author's Response: Of course I won't do it, that would've ruined the whole thing, so breathe :D Personally I love vampire stories, and maybe I will write one later, but it won't be in this one ^^ Thank you! :D
Date: 10/26/09 06:44 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
Hmmm.... I think that Bill... LMAO I got nothing,but I love how you had Tom blame Bill for why he couldn't let go. I'm thinking either it really was Bill doing that, or Tom just didn't want to think of himself at doing that.
Author's Response: hahaha, bit of both?
Date: 10/26/09 04:36 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
Aaaaah, this chapter was just too awesome!!! Haha, Tom is so absolutely caught in Bill's trap that he doesn't even realize it ~~ Honestly, why does he even try to tell himself that he has any control over the situation? Tsk tsk, there's no way he can resist Bill.
It's so awesome how they sort of fit together, with Bill being a criminal mastermind or something like that, and Tom being so innocent... Aww.
Hmm... I'm trying to pick up the hints. But I'm sort of failing. However, I do have a theory regarding why Bill's in jail. Maybe his parents treated him horribly and he couldn't stand it so he killed them. That sounds pretty typical. Either way, he obviously has something against his parents.
But it's just SOOOO cute how he tries not to kill Tom ~~~~~ They are meant for each other, and I definitely hope they'll end up together! But I also hope the end is still far away...
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for an awesome review! :D Haha, yeah, Tom's a little dense isn't he. You're not that far off with your theory, that's as much as I can tell you ^^ Thanks again!
Date: 10/26/09 04:24 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
it's love love love
Bill scares me ..in the most appealing of ways through..
Author's Response: Yay :D Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/26/09 01:54 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
this chapter was amazing! Bill is so....mysterious and sexy, even in jail. Tom can't handle the sexy
more soon please
Author's Response: Thank you! No, he can't xD
Date: 10/26/09 12:31 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
So pretty much, i squealed when i saw you updated. Lmao. I just got so happy. Creepy!Bill and Tom closeness....*drools* MOAR?! XD
Author's Response: Weee :D I'm glad you like it!! More soon. I hope.
Date: 10/26/09 12:24 am Title: What 'Too Close' Means
You're a great writer. I think Bill is seducing ME. 0_o
next chapter soon?
Author's Response: Thank you! Hoho, I'm glad xD I dunno, will try, can't promise anything though.
Date: 10/25/09 11:59 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
plese tell me where the hints are?
not the actual words,but near their location?
i am absolutely obsessed with this story(:
Author's Response: The hints are in Bill's reactions and words ;) Thank you :'D
Date: 10/25/09 11:58 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
Haha A vamprie is just what i was thinking! I love how Tom keeps finding himself entranced by Bill its great!
Author's Response: I was so tempted to just give him fangs x'D Thank you :D
Date: 10/25/09 11:46 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
I think ying and yang represents a condition Bill has. Maybe bipolar, or schitzophrenia?
Author's Response: Getting there, getting there ^^
Date: 10/25/09 11:46 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
Omg gaspedness. :D Did Bill kill his folks?! Did he kill them because they abused him and stuff?!! That's gonna be my guess for now. Mhmm...
Author's Response: Hmmmmm, not telling, but you're not that far off. Thank you for reading :D
Date: 10/25/09 11:34 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
apparently he has some type of parent issues...i'm not one for hints...i'll just have to wait til the brick is thrown at me...
Author's Response: Hahaha aw, wait and see then ^^
Date: 10/25/09 11:03 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
I love this story so much.
I'm happy Tom took control in this chappy.
Author's Response: Me too, he just kinda did it xD
Date: 10/25/09 10:06 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
oh mai god. so hott. I was actually rereading this the other day because i missed it. I'm so glad its updated! you're doing a great job. *__*
Author's Response: Awww, thank you :'D
Date: 10/25/09 08:58 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
I like!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/25/09 08:52 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
Wow...Bill's a creeper... Good story, though. Perfect for Halloween!!!
Author's Response: He is xD Thanks!
Date: 10/25/09 08:33 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
I just read all 8 chapters, and I think I'm totally addicted to this story XD
I adore Bill's characterisation here, very seductive..
Author's Response: Thank you! :'D
Date: 10/25/09 08:04 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
oooh this is very fascinating! I like it a lot :) And what are these hints? Haha, I'm gonna feel really dumb if I don't get it!
Right now, my guess is that Bill killed his parents and he and Andreas had some love affair.
I'm sure I'll love the story no matter what happens! Hoping for a fast update :D
Author's Response: *squeals and fangirls a little over that you, one of her favorite authors, read her story before replying* Thank you so much!! :'D I won't tell you if you're right, but I can tell you you're on the right track! Again, thank you *_*
Date: 10/25/09 08:03 pm Title: What 'Too Close' Means
.:).
You are Love.
Author's Response: aw, thanks! :'D