Date: 03/30/10 06:56 pm Title: ...
only Bill can be in jail forever and still make people want him, that is true talent
great chapter! i loved the way you described Bill's mental rage and he and Tom's moments together
Author's Response: haha true that! Thank you :'D
Date: 03/30/10 06:51 pm Title: ...
more please :)
Author's Response: Yup :)
Date: 03/30/10 06:32 pm Title: ...
that was some intense shit..I loved it.
:D
Author's Response: Thanks! :'D
Date: 03/30/10 06:01 pm Title: ...
I flipping love this story!
Author's Response: thanks!!
Date: 03/30/10 05:57 pm Title: ...
wow. love this. BUT WHAT THE HELL DID HE DO?! XD
Author's Response: You all shouldn't be expecting so much of his crime x'D It's nothing too complicated D: But thanks :D
Date: 03/30/10 05:31 pm Title: ...
JAJAJ i loved this sooo freaking much!!! alost cried at the end :'( Lol though this is a freaking amazing story! and i love the fact that the chapter was nice and long!! it made it all the more enjoyable!
Author's Response: Thank you! :''D awww.
Date: 03/30/10 05:02 pm Title: ...
:D well bill has a point .tom has the right to know what he is getting himself into
Author's Response: yupyup :)
Date: 03/30/10 04:50 pm Title: ...
great story.come willingly were>what did he do?is he liying to tom?he just wants to escape?is he just mind fucking tom?update soon plz i wanna knowww:)
Author's Response: ^_________^ Can't answer those questions yet. Thanks!
Date: 03/30/10 04:49 pm Title: ...
God, I love this so frigging much!
I feel so sorry for Bill. Maybe I'm just as gullible as Tom, lol, but I feel as though he's really not this arsehole he wants people to think he is.
I hope Tom can help him. I don't think he'll have much trouble going willingly to Bill, LOL! Who would? :P
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And lol, I sure wouldn't have a problem with that >:D
Date: 03/30/10 04:33 pm Title: ...
More More More *.*
I'm soooo into this story :3
I love it @
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/30/10 04:13 pm Title: ...
:D MOAR!!
Author's Response: yessir! :D
Date: 03/30/10 03:48 pm Title: ...
Awwwe, I found this chapter oddly sweet bby!
Author's Response: hahaha, well thanks!
Date: 03/30/10 03:30 pm Title: ...
oh snap.
Author's Response: dundundun
Date: 03/30/10 03:21 pm Title: ...
This just gets better and better, I swear. The mental episode thing reminded me of The Exorcism Of Emily Rose and that's a GREAT thing.. Keep it up, duckie.
Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't seen that movie D: (never get around to do it) but I've seen plenty of other exorcisms. They're awesome :D
Date: 03/30/10 03:07 pm Title: ...
Thanks for the fast update.
I really like this story. It's one of those which you can't guess what's coming or why something is happening. Sometimes it's boring to read stories when you can guess/know what will happen. But this is different. I have no idea what will happen, like for example to Bill and Tom as a couple, if they will ever be one.
Good work! Keep it up!
xx
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank you! :D I'm glad it's not predictable, I'm trying not to make it so :)
Date: 03/30/10 02:53 pm Title: ...
oh, oh wow. what a chapter ending! aaaaaaaaaah want more!!!! this story is like a drug to me~ because you said to feel free, i figured i'd help you catch a few small mistakes,kay? "The way he said it ma(d)e Tom nod," :) "other than just being co(o)ped up inside all day." "Bill t(h)rashed in the man’s tight grip" wonderful chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! And thanks for pointing that out x_X My spell check must have been drunk.
Date: 03/30/10 02:44 pm Title: ...
*stabs Andi with a knife made out of soap*
Author's Response: *dies*
Date: 03/30/10 02:38 pm Title: ...
Wow, I can't believe how fast we got an update.
As always, I really liked the chapter. In the beginning when They kissed I got so excited.
When Bill took Tom's keys, OMG... I got scared that he was going to do something to Tom and escape, so I was really glad when he didn't. Bill really does scare me when he acts like that.
When they were going to sedate him and he was screaming, I felt so bad for him.
When Tom when to check on him, I liked how it seemed like Bill was being honest with him when Tom asked him questions, I don't know if he was, but it felt like he was being honest.
I really liked the ending of the chapter. When Bill tells Tom that he knows what he wants and that he wants Tom to know what he's getting himself into. When he told him; “I want you to come willingly” I got pretty excited.
I am like always looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Woo, glad you liked it! :D I know, I surprised myself as well with how quickly I wrote this x'D
Date: 03/30/10 02:31 pm Title: ...
such a big chapter *.*
loved the end ;)
keep on the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/30/10 02:27 pm Title: ...
I'm starting to feel sorry for bill!
btw I'm glad u started updating this again! :D
Author's Response: He's a troubled soul :( Haha, so am I :D I'm trying to finish this quickly (quick for me) now, so I can start on my other ideas :D