Date: 04/01/10 04:48 pm Title: ...
OMG! Can't say anything else atm. Fuck! You better update fast enough or I'll take a plane to Norway to lock you up on your comp (just kidding XD).
This is really amazing. I love the way you write and the idea you got. Never thought of a psyco Bill and you're getting it soo right.
Keep writing, dear and I'll be there to review you.
Love you and all that!
Author's Response: I hope the update wasn't too late, but it's here now! :D Thank you <33
Date: 04/01/10 03:00 pm Title: ...
omgomgomg, I seriously fall in love all over again everytime i read the updates!!! It's getting better and better! And wow, that Bill is such a mind fucker! I don't really know what to think. I got really excited when he told Tom "Kiss me" and then, his intentions were taking his keys. ._. And I thought he was being all lovey-dovey.
And it's really sad that he got life sentence, god, what did he do?? I can't possibly think of anything *scratches head*
I'm so excited for this story!! You're doing an amazing job!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Bill's not really the lovey-dovey person I'm afraid D: You shouldn't burst your braincells trying to think of anything he could've done, because really, it's not that complicated and I'm sure you'll all be like T________T that's it? XDDD Oh well. Thank you again! :'D
Date: 04/01/10 09:54 am Title: ...
tom is sooooooo gonna get it deep by those last words...wOW what a mystery
Author's Response: Glad you like it! :'D
Date: 04/01/10 09:26 am Title: Scared Yet?
«“I bet you taste much better,” Bill said huskily before he lifted the fork to his mouth and closed his mouth around it, his eyes on Tom’s as he licked the last bit of mashed potato off the fork that Tom had just had in his mouth.
All Tom could think was oh shit, he has a tongue ring.»
LOL! That last part was AWSOME. I mean it.
So far so good, gonna continue the reading.
Loved the gun part too, lol. Tom've been an idiot lmfao.
Keep it up, dear ;)
Author's Response: haha, thank you! :'D
Date: 04/01/10 12:53 am Title: ...
Ooh! More mystery. Loving it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/31/10 11:05 pm Title: ...
Congratulations on being able to go to the Zuich concert!! You are so lucky! I'm sill waiting for them to come to USA. (i know it's gonna take a while ^^;)
awesome awesome chapter!! Bill is scary and I can't wait to find out his enire story. Go have fun in the concert and share the happiness by updating?xD
Author's Response: Thank you! :D It was amazing! :D I will update soon :D
Date: 03/31/10 07:16 pm Title: ...
:( oh bill...he's just really confusing!! and i want to understand him so much :P
Author's Response: Awww :']
Date: 03/31/10 07:07 pm Title: ...
:) plz omg update asap haha
Author's Response: Will try :)
Date: 03/31/10 04:37 pm Title: ...
Kool chapter! Write more soon
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/31/10 02:28 pm Title: The Newcomers
(reply) Lol, okay. Maybe make it so the drugs are making him forget :D
Oh, and I forgot to say I shivered in a good way at that last line XD
Author's Response: ._. Right. I was gonna change that. *totally forgot* *runs to do it now*
Date: 03/31/10 01:36 pm Title: ...
*pounces* I totally flipped out when I saw you'd updated! I had to calm myself down before I read it, every time I'd start I'd have a mini flip out again, xD I'm a little late reviewing, I'm sorry about that, I wish I could have read it last night but I didn't even come online except to update a stoy of my own. So reading this after a tough (and reaaaaally long) college day was pretty much the best thing ever :D I'm so head over heels in love with this fic. It's 100% fabulous! *____*
I'm so curious to know more about Bill. I know I say it eveytime but jesus, you keep my right on the edge of my seat wanting more details about Bil's psyche. But yeah, at the same time I don't want to know. I like the hidden truths and secrecy, it's all part of the wonder of your writing. You keep us all desperate for more knowledge. GOD seriously, your writing is just perfect! I can just about taste Tom's desire to satitate his thirst for knowledge. It's so potent, omnipresent throughout. The way you write this is amazing because you say so much, yet give away so little. It's not lacking detail - faaaar from it - but it's not over flashy with excess information. OhmyGOD I wish I could write like this.
Oh christ! And you said English is your second language. I can't imagine learning a second language so flawlessly. Really, it's perfect. You said you're glad it's not THAT noticable, well I can tell you, English being my mothertongue, that it's not noticable AT ALL. It's perfect. Really, I can't write anything close to as good as this and I've been speaking it for my whole life xD Perhaps I'm just a retard haha.
Wow, I'm hoping you're going to update soon! Though no pressure of course ^.^ I love clicking on my "Tracked Sories" option and seeing this right at the top. I think I'll be stalking my "Tracked Stories" page more than I do, which is a LOT *___* I can't wait till this is number one again :D
Okay, I'll wrap this up. Too much work *cries* and wait patiently for the next update. I love this I love this I love this!
Oh and also, have/had a SUPER FABULOUS time seeing Tokio Hotel (again?) Let us all know how it went. Thanks for the update!! Take care *kiss*
Author's Response: Awwww, your reviews always make me all *___________* You're the best <3 I'm glad you like that I'm holding back on the information, since many people tend to get impatient, but I like to drag it out and keep you on the edge of your seat, even if it might annoy the reader a bit LOL (I know, cause this sort of thing annoys me as a reader x'D). And what are you talking about, woman? You're an amazing writer! I love everything I've read by you *.* And yeah, it's my second language, haha. You should have read my English 4/5 years ago, you wouldn't understand a thing! Fanfiction made me good, before that I was awful xD But yeah, thank you so much! <3 ilu. And yeah, I was seeing them for the second time in a month! :D It was amazing, but I don't know if it was just me, but I think the boys looked happier in Oslo >:D At least more energetic, as did the crowd. But the concert was German! So I'm happy.
Date: 03/31/10 01:03 am Title: ...
very nice. I look forward for more. :)
and congrats on the concert :D I'm super jealous. V_V
Author's Response: Thanks! :'D >:D
Date: 03/31/10 12:41 am Title: ...
Lucky! grrr. im jeluz. XP But awesome freak out right?
Author's Response: The freakout itself wasn't very awesome xD But when we got there it was all good! :D
Date: 03/31/10 12:16 am Title: ...
My god you are so lucky! Trip at the last minute like that are so exciting !
I really like this chapter, the kissing scene was so hot ! The ending was awesome, I love Bill's character more with every new chap! This ending quote is gold: “I want you to come willingly.” I feel like I know Bill much more just by this one sentence !
Author's Response: It was very exciting, but we were so freaked out xD Thank you so much! :DDD
Date: 03/30/10 11:58 pm Title: ...
Lol, loved this.
Update more this story is amazing D:
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: 03/30/10 11:30 pm Title: ...
have fun!!
Author's Response: I had lots of fun! Thanks :D
Date: 03/30/10 11:03 pm Title: ...
Wait, didn't Bill already know about Tom's aquaintance with Anne back in chapter 8?
Or are the drugs making him forget? :/
Gripping story :D
Author's Response: Did he? Oh man ._. I can fix that, but after I get home x.X thanks for pointing that out.rn
Date: 03/30/10 07:52 pm Title: ...
oh wow~ god this is so addictive~ i need more or i wont know how to function properly... love you sugar~
Author's Response: hahaha awww, thank you<3
Date: 03/30/10 07:26 pm Title: The Newcomers
LOL!! That was the 815th tweet!! AWESOME!! (sorry just had to point that out xD)
And again,, I LOOOOVE this story ;)
Author's Response: Woooo >:D *totally print screen'd that xD* Thank you, again!
Date: 03/30/10 07:23 pm Title: ...
Ohhh shit that was good >D
Author's Response: thank you!