Date: 05/11/10 09:00 pm Title: The Newcomers
>.< This makes me angry because I still can't figure out what's going on inside Bill's mind. It's usually so easy to guess what's going on in characters minds, but this Bill you've created it so different, in a creepy good way, of course. I must know! AHH!!!
Author's Response: Woo, that's good >:D Thanks!
Date: 05/11/10 09:00 pm Title: Armed
Ooooh, scary Bill is exciting!!!=D
Date: 05/11/10 08:47 pm Title: Armed
Finally an update ... I'm so happy . That was so mean , Bill . Just make me love him even more XD , and getting to see Tom's face like that is definetely a bonus . And conglatulations on winning the award . You totally desever it .
Date: 05/11/10 08:23 pm Title: Armed
ohhh my goodness. im guessing it has something to do w/ Bill shooting someone (a nurse maybe?) while he was in prison for a less serious crime. or at least that's what im thinking right now - ahh hurry so i can find out what really happened! haha ;D
Date: 05/11/10 08:03 pm Title: Armed
aaaaaaaaaahh
i love this
MORE!
Date: 05/11/10 07:58 pm Title: Armed
Wow..... Bills freaking me out : oo but i adoooore his caracter : D
Date: 05/11/10 07:13 pm Title: Armed
i believe bill is a tiny bit pyscotic....wow apparently i cannot spell either. hahah. oh well. thank you for updating!!!
Author's Response: A tiny bit, yes. Thank you!
Date: 05/11/10 07:10 pm Title: Armed
LOL I love that you called Tom a slow idiot.
Author's Response: *snicker* I had to.
Date: 05/11/10 07:08 pm Title: Armed
aaah i wanna knowwwww :) congratulations!
Author's Response: I want you to know tooooo, but I have to keep it in a little while longer. Thanks!
Date: 05/11/10 07:02 pm Title: Armed
amazing, you're such a good writer :O
I'm slow like Tom, can't figure out what Bill has done. :'D
Author's Response: Thank you! Aw, don't worry, if you're not picking up the hints you will know sooner or later anyway ^^
Date: 05/11/10 06:52 pm Title: Armed
so here are the clues you gave us:
- bill doesn't want to talk about what he's done and about his parents so the two must be related in some way.
- he killed a girl whose mother had thought he was a good guy at first.
- he used a gun to do so.
- (not really a clue but) i just know it has to do with his manipulative skills.
i haven't figured the whole thing yet but i've got the feeling that bill did something like make the girl kill herself. but that doesn't involve his parents or him using a gun so i guess i'm wrong :)
as you see this story has me obsessed :D i just can't help it. i love mysterious and dark and this fic is both plus i love the fact that i can't really tell how it's going to end up (which i can normally do around the second chapter).
keep up with the amazing work, hun! and update asap, pleeeease :)
love, chiara
Author's Response: Wow, I love how you've remembered those and listed them up, that's amazing :D I can't tell you whether or not your theory is wrong, but :D Thank you! <3
Date: 05/11/10 06:42 pm Title: Armed
Well, I sure got the hint, I'm starting to understand what he's done.
Seriously, if all the prisons had people like Bill - and I don't mean in a physical way - I would LOVE to work there. I'm seriously in love with every single lunatic out there. And really, aren't we all a bit crazy on the inside? Isn't that what makes us NOT boring? That's why I love your story.
Also, I always misspell some word or fill the review with stupid typos because I ignore my need to be a perfectionist and I don't even bother to actually check it twice - that's how awesome your story is.
So please, do keep going. :)
Author's Response: Great! :D I'm glad you're picking up my hints. And same here, same here. Thank you!
Date: 05/11/10 06:38 pm Title: Armed
O.O
Author's Response: :DD
Date: 05/11/10 06:36 pm Title: Armed
I hope I'm not a slow idiot like Tom. =) Thanks for the update. This story totally deserved the award, congrats! keep up the great work, i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sure you're not ^^ Thank you!
Date: 05/11/10 06:33 pm Title: Armed
XD The slow idiot, anyway, I like this a lot. Still not sure how everything will work out between everyone in the end but I am DEFINITELY excited for you next update. Even though you have large gaps between your updates I love the wait because it gives you plenty of time to think about everything and be excited. You're doing a great job, and congrats on everything, I'm really happy for you! =]
Author's Response: Thank you! Ugh, I know the gaps are a bit too large, so I'm glad you don't mind (that) much :)
Date: 05/11/10 06:15 pm Title: Armed
Awz, I'm a slow idiot. I reread it twice.. I didn't catch it. T.T
fail..
*reads for the third time*
umm.. he must've.. Mind fucked them? XD No...
idk
*sobs*
btw, doesn't Georg have long hair? XD
Author's Response: Haha awww. No worries, it'll be explained properly when the time comes ^^ and yeah, he does. That's what bill meant haha.
Date: 05/11/10 06:06 pm Title: Armed
hm i have my guesses...looking forward to see if they're correct ;)
Author's Response: :D
Date: 05/11/10 06:06 pm Title: Armed
Yay, you just made my day! Poor Tom, he is a little slow on the uptake, isn't he? Ah well, it just makes Bill more fabulous and mysterious. I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: aww :D Thank you!
Date: 05/11/10 06:05 pm Title: Armed
so obviously he shot someone, and i think that lady was the victim's mother right?
Author's Response: I can't say yes or no to the first, but yeah, she was the vic's mother.
Date: 05/11/10 05:48 pm Title: Armed
X__x
you have to hurry and update amazing !!
Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks!