Date: 07/31/08 04:29 am Title: The Mason Jar
never actually read stories on-line, so I never leave comments either. but this time I just HAD to say two things: 1) I absolutely adore your story, and 2) man, why don't people see that Tom is a werewolf? I mean, with all that superhuman hearing, strength and sense of smell of him. him liking meat so much. furthermore, his leaving conditions are precisely those of werewolves like J. K. Rowling described them. AND that shoe burying thing! dogs like to do that, why should werewolves be different? :))
erm. did I mention that I love the story itself? :))
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review.
We shall see exactly what Tom is. Another chapter or two, I think.
:)
Date: 07/31/08 01:25 am Title: The Deadly Cookies
Great chapter :D Tom is cute here :) I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 07/30/08 10:48 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
I feel stupid to say this, but I think tom and his dad might be vamps
I love this story
Date: 07/30/08 10:44 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
Tom is definitely an alien. There is no doubt about it. Why else would his dad be so paranoid. Why else wold Tom not want Bill to see his dad? It is obvious that Tom himself is not normal. Who the hell buries shoes?? Especially Doc Martins. I think him burying the shoes is sort of like the glasses of water in Signs. They are obviously there for a reason. An ALIEN reason.
I don't want anyone to pick on Bill :(
Date: 07/30/08 10:40 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
aaaw. tom all protective. bill all oblivious and sweet. i can't wait for this to get nc-17 and hot and bothered.
this is progressing so nicely i didn't want this chapter to end. who invented chapters anyway?! bc what an asshole.
hurry back WaywardMuffin! plzzzz (no my please isn't sleeping).
and no way is Tom human. his awesome hotness is a dead giveaway. like clark kent. pshyuh.
Date: 07/30/08 10:28 pm Title: The Lawn Gnomes
aaw. Tom slowly trippin all over his heels for Bill is teh cute. i'm loving this fic so hard.
Date: 07/30/08 10:20 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
I definitely enjoyed the extra long chapter. :D
I love this story. It's original, & I've never read anything like it.
Tis great. (:
Date: 07/30/08 09:42 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
AWSOME AS EVER!!!
I think Tom is human, but I have a weird feeling about his dad though, I can't put my finger on it is. :)
Date: 07/30/08 09:37 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
This is one of two stories that makes me squee in joy when I find it's been updated. I adore protective Tom...and poor, cute Bill with his gnome phobia!
Date: 07/30/08 09:20 pm Title: The Mason Jar
dudes.
le so HAPPY i found this badboy. i've been craving somethin' new for a while.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it.
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07/30/08 08:58 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
A leprechaun, loosely related to gnomes. Though not as deceptively cute, so as not to terrify Bill.
Date: 07/30/08 08:34 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
Tom is so fapping human. He better be. I don't know. Stop it.
Date: 07/30/08 08:19 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
ha. theses chapters always always make me laugh. =D
Date: 07/30/08 07:52 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
Ugh, I'm so torn. I think Tom might be human but I don't want him to be. It would be so cute if Bill fell for some otherwordly/supernatural creature. I'm on the fence D: I can't wait till it gets revealed for sure though.
Date: 07/30/08 07:51 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Bill being too afraid of the gnome to go near his locker, and Tom leading him away... Tom threatening to stuff a sock in Bill's mouth... That little kiss on the cheek! :)
What is up with Tom burying those shoes, anyway?
Date: 07/30/08 07:21 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
gahgjajaj damn me for clicking an ad and forcing myself to rewrite the review -__-
OKAY.
So there were lots of things in this chapter that made me giggle. First off, the interaction between Simone and Bill. The whole "I don't want dead animals in my freezer" is perfectly plausible and so very fun to read XD The Keebler Elf thing was funny too. I love how you keep adding odd little quirks to Bill when it seems like he can't get any weirder!
I also love the relationship development; it's pretty cliche for Bill to be bullied, but you guys pulled it off and made it unique and believable, especially since Tom didn't step in until the bullying got out of hand. AND THAT KISS.
In the Box the other night, I think it was Froggy who was saying that there was going to be a kiss; you tease! I thought it was gonna be a *real* kiss, but the kiss-on-the-cheek was cute too :) And I suppose a real kiss would have been too soon anyway *sigh*. I'll wait for it ;3 I think I also saw this on th-fanfic, and there was a warning saying that it was going to be NC-17 in later chapters...I'm DEFINITELY looking forward to that XD Keep it up!
Date: 07/30/08 07:09 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
AWW Homg, i love it when Tom sticks up for his Bill!!
This was so cute, and im glad the whole alien thing is persistant, like, even though Tom is "normalling" Bill out, he still believes in this whole...thing. XD. BTW i absolutely loved the gnome thing. Jeez. Opening my locker to find a freaking gnome would scare the shit outta me too. xD
Date: 07/30/08 07:06 pm Title: The Deadly Cookies
hmm...since tom has to work hard to hold himself back from killing gustav, and since his dad is all ferocious, and since he buries shoes, tom must be a...hehe i think you'd be able to come up with an awesome name for it. i don't know what i'd call him, but i'm sure he's some kind of shape-shifting creature o_O
Date: 07/30/08 12:47 am Title: The Lawn Gnomes
I think Tom must be some kind of superhuman eating monster. Do guys actually think that much about food??? Or maybe I've just been living under a rock my whole life XD
I love the wit in this story. The humor is really what keeps me reading more than anything...well, aside from Bill's one of a kind personality of course :)
Date: 07/28/08 06:35 pm Title: The Lawn Gnomes
Erm, I am inclined to go with Bill on this one, though I think heäs a bit of a nut. I love this though. Thank god for fanfic, it can make even the shittiest daz better. And for you two, this storz never cease to make me laugh. *waits eagerly for the next chapter*