Date: 09/13/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
hey i love it keep the story up i cant wait for the next ch XD btw this was a cute chapter
Date: 09/13/09 11:20 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
I seriously think you should continue the story! I wanna see how Bill adjusts to his new life :) he's so cute in the story too ^_^
Date: 09/13/09 09:35 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
continue please let bill get smarter
Date: 09/13/09 07:27 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
you should deffinatly keep going. i dont even want to hear you think about stopping. this is a wonderful story and as i said before im so sorry i didnt reply when you updated on myspace. i love the development of everything the way the plot lines up with characters is just wonderful.
Date: 09/13/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
I love this story and i really want it to continue
Date: 09/13/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
Awwww soooo cute! I love this fics! Continue with how Bill adjusts to this new kift PLEASE!!!!
Date: 09/13/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
I love this story! The idča and the plot is great,and you shud continue.
I think everyone that reads would be thinking about how Bill would be like when he is more..."Grown" into the world? :)
Don`t change Tom`s relationship with him,but he could be more independent. like he knows where he lives now and can walk home without Tom.
Im just giving a little inspiration. Hope you don`t think Im sounding rude in any way. My fav story!
Author's Response: Oh dont worry, you dont sounds rude. And also, Tom and Bills relationship wont change:) they love each other.
Date: 09/13/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
waaaa continue!!!! made a billion chapters long!!! i was squealing, grinning, clapping and jumping up and down and screaming like a maniac at 2am because of this!!!!
ahem.... sorry you had to read that... now seriously..... i want more of this, its just so...... cute and adorable.... i needs moreee
Date: 09/13/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
This chapter is one of the cutest things I've ever read ~ it was sooo sweet how Tomi took care of Bill. I love the twins. :)
Hmmm... Well, I think I want to see more of Bill adjusting, though I'm not sure I want to see him making friends and spending less time with Tom :( but I don't want the story to end soon. Of course, it's up to you in the end. Do whatever your muse/author sense tells you to. No sense forcing anything.
Either way, this is a really cool story. It's so innocent :) I have a question, though: how old are the twins? I didn't notice their age anywhere :
Date: 09/13/09 02:40 am Title: Chapter Ten; Anything for you Billa.
AWWWWWWWWWW! CUTE! you should definantly continue! doesnt matter how long/how many more chappies there are as long as they keep on coming!!!
Date: 09/09/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
Yay! You updated! I'm so happy, because I found this story a few months ago and I'd been a little sad that it was kind of like on hiatus... But now everything's okay! I absolutely adore the way you write the twins. It's really, really cute and sooooo... twins-y!!!
Hope you manage to update soon and have a really awesome day!
Date: 08/18/09 12:19 am Title: Prologue
Great story so far. Its really sweet to see Tom take care of his brother. I hope we get a update soon I can't wait.
Date: 08/05/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
This story is so beautiful!
I've just finished reading it and until now I like all of it. It's so well written and the action is well thought.
Sorry for not leaving a longer review, but I've just spent the last hours reading and I feel tired.
I love it and I can't wait to see what's going on next!^^
Date: 08/04/09 07:30 am Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww :) Bill is soooooo cuuuuuuteeeeee x3 I love it!!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/27/09 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
this is a really good story! I like your writing style. Good luck, and keep writing!
Date: 07/26/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
yay! so many updates!! a few typos in some of the latest chapters, but great story progression. I'm excited to read how their relationship changes and grows as bill gets better. keep up the good work and update soon please! :)
Author's Response: yeah i know there are a lot of typos but i gotta type it up fast. i hope it wasnt to distracting though!
Date: 07/22/09 01:28 am Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
UPDATE
Date: 07/21/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
awww....that was just cute!!! loved it...more very soon pleeeease??
fern xx
Date: 07/18/09 03:06 am Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
This is such an amazing idea! I love this story.
Date: 07/17/09 10:55 am Title: Chapter Nine; He has to be okay...
Congratulations!!! I`m so happy that you have returned!! I just adore this fic, one of my favorites. I`m so happy that Bill is getting well, but this will be hard both for him and Tom. I`m very very curios what kind of boy will be Bill after the brain surgery! He must study so much things... I cross my fingers for him!! So please update as soon as possible!! Thank you so much!!!