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Reviewer: billsonenonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/08 12:49 pm Title: Prologue

I miss this story, plz update soon =(

Reviewer: Konoto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 01:39 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Oh, I love it, totally sweet, I cannot wait for the next chapter *-*

Reviewer: neko_mizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER??????????? I MUST HAVE MORE!!!

Reviewer: billsxlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/08 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

aww this fic is adorable! I can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: seven-bracelets Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Awww, this is so sweet!
Please update soon!
It's really amazing!
xx

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

:( I'm so disappointed at their mother's behaviour... she shouldn't treat them so badly, but at least Tom is always good with Bill (L) I hope he won't get hurt badly in the next chapter! Please post sooner X3

Reviewer: Tavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 10:53 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

aww Bill is a cute little boy and i love how the way Tom take care of him
^^

update soon please :)

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

D: I feel sorry for Bill being so naive D:
more!

Reviewer: BlackStars Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 04:46 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Awh :) I really love this, I can't wait for more.
Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: billsonenonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

love this story. I hope Jorg doesnt get to come back into the twins lives cuz he doesnt deserve a gift like them lol.

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 01:45 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Awww this is soo cute! Toms all protective! What exactly is wrong with Bill.. does his mind just not grow like it normaly should? anyway.. I hope he gets a sugery or somthing and not die.. cause that would be sad..but then again hes soo cute like this XD

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 12:18 am Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Aww, Bill's soooo cute! > <
And great update btw.
Update again soon please?

Reviewer: Pomegranate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Dear lord I cried a little. This is one of the most heartbreakingly cute stories I have ever read. I hate/love you...mostly love.

Reviewer: EMO_KAULITZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. THAT IS JSUT THE CUTREST LITTLE THING IVE EVER READ.

Reviewer: LarnaRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

I love how Tom cares for Bill. So sweet. X

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

I really do love this story and I definitely can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TurnOnTheLight163 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

This was cute! defintly worth the wait. =]

Reviewer: cobraaastyle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

I just read the prologue and both chapters and I can already say I love this.
I can't wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: vampireslure1608 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Ooohh, can't wait, update soon please!

Reviewer: Harlequinbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Two; W-was that guy Daddy?

Aw, Bill just sounds so sweet and innocent, it breaks my heart to know something bad might(and probably will) happen :(
This story shows a lot of potential and i love the banner :)

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