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Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/08 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

really great!!
can't wait to read more. the dialogue is flowing more easily now, and it's nice to read.

Reviewer: GodSentAnAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it. It's a little strange. But I hope you continue. ^__^

*adds to favorites*

Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1

I love it!!!!!
Update ASAP or when you can!!

~Emily

Reviewer: jonas_kaulitz_crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 1

this sounds cool!!!
more plz!!!!!

Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1

really great. definitely an improvement on the first chapter, in which the narration was a bit choppy. keep writing!!

Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 01:03 am Title: Prolouge

I love it!
The begining is awesome and very well written!!
I'm looking forward to more!!!

~Emily

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