Date: 07/20/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1
OMFG. Rape, Watersports, normally so disgusting and you make it soooooooo hot! Nice job!
Date: 07/20/08 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY!!!!!!
WATER SPORT!!!
That was hot and disturbing all at the same time... *naughty smile*
it was perfect!!!
Date: 07/20/08 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1
i love that " my names tom" fucking hilarious
Date: 07/19/08 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
XDDD oh my fucking god!!! LMAO what the fuck I just read Torgy???? XDDD god damn, that is the nastiest fan fic that I have ever read XDDD and I"m giggling like a maniac for some reason!!! oh... lmao XDDD *sigh* O_O damn...
Date: 07/19/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOMIGOD... way better than flintstones porn for sure... hun, you are SICK. but i love you for it
Date: 07/19/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
O__O That is the dirtiest, nastiest, raunchiest thing I think I've ever read here. And you made me like it. Damn you! XD
Date: 07/19/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a lurker and I liked it ^_^ very hot and I believe I may just be a pervert for thinking that lol. Awesome job!
Date: 07/19/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
The hotness was so intense, I really think my brain just melted....
Are you considering doing a sequel to this? *asks in a hopeful tone*
Date: 07/19/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was horribly disgusting.
So please tell me, why on earth did I enjoy it??? XDDDDD
Date: 07/19/08 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
omg that was funny as hell seriously i loved it even tho it was kinda sick lolz
Date: 07/19/08 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!
Just OMG!
I can't belive how much I love it, expecially the mouth fucking part
Date: 07/19/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG. fuck.
I loved this fic. so hot!!!!!!!
Date: 07/19/08 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Utter filth.
Fabulous! Lol.
But, I really love the way that he told Bill his name at the end. He may have seemed like a cold hearted bastard all the way through, but that kinda made him more human if you know what I mean.
Date: 07/19/08 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
you write the hottest PWPs ever! guh that was amazing.
Date: 07/19/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1
*Left eye twiches*
Oh god, that was so dirty!
in a good way don't worry...but i mean dude i never imagined Bill or Tom saying these things.
I'm defenetly coming back to this story when i need to get into the mood to write smut.
XP,Now i know what a water sport is! lol
Date: 07/19/08 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL Tom was all "get the fuck out" but maybe he was interested in another rendezvous cause he said his name o_O
I'm not much for piss but I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
P.S. I love the dirty talking :P
Date: 07/19/08 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so good and so hot omg. :D
Date: 07/19/08 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1
ooohhh dirtyyyyyyyyyyy
xD
it was HOT
cant u do a sequel?!
its just so cool! ;D