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Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1

“Good.” Bill slaps his thigh in a friendly gesture, then gets up. “Glad we talked,” he grins, and then he’s bouncing down the narrow aisle, bumping into the ceiling and the walls left and right as the bus sways, laughing and calling for Tom, and the moment is past-- Awww that is so cute and I can picture it!!!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/10 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Very good!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love how you have Gustav as brooding, but not in the normal sense. As someone who can appreciate alone time, and the contemplative introspection it brings, it was a balanced look at someone who loves the beat and what he does, and doesn't need the rest of everything that comes with fame. And you reinforced that he was happy, which I always love in a fic.

Perceptive Bill is perceptive. ;)

Another awesome job.

Reviewer: WGPunkRocker Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I went "aww" at this. XD It's so adorable

Reviewer: Jodine16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw that awe cute, I like stories with insight into what Gusti's thinking. ^w^

Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved it!!! : )

~Emily

Reviewer: amythystmoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

you are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers :)

I love these little glimpses of insight, I hope to be able to read more :)

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