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Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/08 08:31 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

Yeah we went down the 2nd week in July. We have a condo up in St. Pete beach so we drove down for a weekend.

I was reading your story and it sounded exactly like the dry tortugas it was awesome!

Author's Response: i went there at the end of july. it was so hot!

Reviewer: Alina Van Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/08 05:02 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

LAST CHAPTER!? NO! >> Well, as long as I dun have to wait.... *clicks the 'next' button*

Author's Response: lol. i think ill be able to update tomorow! i live in florida so my school has been canceled due to the huricane heading my way!!

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/08 01:48 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

yea!!!!! :):):):):):):):):)

Author's Response: (:

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/08 12:53 am Title: XVIII : My Sacred

Woo Hoo!
So cute!
Epilouges = Yay!!!!!
Update soon please! :]

Author's Response: ill try so hard :D

Reviewer: -SoLonely- Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/08 12:31 am Title: XVIII : My Sacred

ow, that's so cute :) the ending was a nice one.. exept the weather and the whole snorkling thing dosen't suit very well to Germany.. though you never told where they live. but anyway, it kinda disturbet me :/ it was a good one though. ;) epilogue jey :D waiting for it now, or a new story from you. :)

Author's Response: yeah. actually, i imagined them living in the united states, not germany. i was thinking around a new york-ish area, or any other state that boarders the atlantic ocean. i couldnt make up my mind, so i just chose not to say where they live.rnrnand i have one other story im working on, 'starved for perfection.' i dont know if you've read it, if not...youre welcome to check it out. and im currently planning on another fic, 'the grass is always greener.' but im still planning on it!

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 10:38 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

hahaha, great chapter and I love how you're like "this is the last chapter" and then you have an epilogue coming for us. Hahaha, love that. Anyway, great job and I can't wait for the last chapter.

Author's Response: actually, i wasn't even planning on adding an epilouge lol. but it was a nice suprise :D

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 10:37 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

Woot! Aww That was sooo good! =]
I loveedd it! you were right.
Ohhh epilouge excited!!!

Author's Response: thanks. im so glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 10:27 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

Awww. I hate to see it end, but I guess it's inevitable =) And it's still amazing...**even w/o the sex** XD

Author's Response: woo! thanks! (:

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 10:14 pm Title: XIII : Dead Daisy

wow

Author's Response: good or bad?

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 09:41 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

awesome job cant wait for the epilouge, i just got back from snorkeling in the dry tortugas

Author's Response: no way!!! that's exactly where i went! that's where i imagined the story, without the fortress. on the boat ride there, i was planning this chapter. when did you go?

Reviewer: Drank-It-Up Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 09:10 pm Title: XVIII : My Sacred

awwwwwwwww. their second kiss was even sweeter than the first. adorable!! :)

Author's Response: hah hah (: thank you! glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Drank-It-Up Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 09:00 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Dannnnnggg that was some first kiss. Way to push your fear aside for a moment there Bill. *applause* MMM I love this!

Author's Response: **bows** thanks!

Reviewer: -fever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 08:22 am Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

and also, i'm a little scared of what's gonna happen cuz it ends so suddenly, i shall not get any sleep because of that. Thanks. ;D

Author's Response: youre welcome! and all im going to say is dont be scared. i think youre going to like the last chapter :D

Reviewer: -fever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 08:19 am Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Oh My Fucking God! I just read all the 17 chapters holy shiiit... not the last.. plz, THIS SO OVER CUTE! Okay, fine, but remember, make it long!! :D

Author's Response: and im planning to make it the longest chapter, if it all works out (:

Reviewer: theworldfascinatesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/08 02:14 am Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Noooooo NOT THE LAST CHAPTER NEXT TIME..
I like it too much for it to end!!1

Author's Response: aw i'm sorry /: but i already had the end planned out perfectly /: glad you liked it though (:

Reviewer: -SoLonely- Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/08 12:13 am Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Oh, NO! No no no no... Not the last one! now imm fusturated... -.-' it was just starting to get "intrestimgg.." as if it wouldn't have been it allready- well, just remember to make it good and LOOOOOOOOOOONG ^^)

Author's Response: i'll try so hard (:

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 10:47 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Awww yay!!! there going to the Aquarium! woot! Tom should take Bill away from his father.
Amazing chapter!

*Gasp* oh no...its almost over =[ It was an amazing story!!

Author's Response: thank you (: i hope you'll like the aquartium chapter. i think you will (:

Reviewer: zimmer_4_8_3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 10:16 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

....last chapter? but...i really like this story...and i dont want it to end...aww now im sad...
well besides me being sad, this chapter was really good and i really liked it.bill seems to have changed so much in the past couple chapters but in a good way. update soon!

Author's Response: thanks i'll try (:

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 09:05 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

already!?!?!?!?! awww..... i really love this. y u have 2 end it so soon???

Author's Response: yep (: the whole purpose of this story was to get the boys together, and now that they are...idk what to do with them lol

Reviewer: Konoto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 09:01 pm Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations

Oh,good chapter, but I'm sad because next one is the last one T-T... I wonder how Tom will react if he knows that Bill's father rapped him (Bill)

Author's Response: hmmm. you just gave me an idea for the chapter (: thanks!

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