Date: 12/25/08 01:59 am Title: II : The Boy from the Park
He had almost no muscle mass, and all of his baby-fat had melted off of him years ago. - this is a setence to be proud of!
...he remained silent. Sometimes, being quiet is the best thing to do. - another good line!
The boy hated crying. - Nice parallel to the first chapter.
Author's Response: thank you. i love it when you commented on my lines. i really like it when readers seem to remember certain phrases from each chapter. glad you liked it.
Date: 12/25/08 01:24 am Title: I : The Silent
"If you just kept your damn mouth your mother and I would still be together." - you forgot a word in there...just thought you'd like to know.
Nice set up. I'm intrigued! looking forward to what comes next.
Date: 11/13/08 02:34 pm Title: Epilouge
Great story :D I loved it ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: thank you, im glad you did :)
Date: 10/21/08 08:44 pm Title: Epilouge
Aww cute ass story! I was a little sad to see that Bill's situation with his father didn't change or get solved but I am still glad I read this! Great job!
Author's Response: thanks :D im glad you liked it
Date: 09/17/08 11:01 am Title: Epilouge
AAAW! So f'n' cute! Thank you so much, i loved it. purely..
Author's Response: thank you (: i'm glad you enjoyed it (:
Date: 09/02/08 09:49 pm Title: Epilouge
Hehe! Underwater kiss was smexii!! (last chap. :P) lol. I loved it ((Kinda say that too alot of stories xD)) I'm happy Bill let Tom touch him, but poor Bill, getting raped und all... Um. . . lol. Well... I liked-- no loved it. :))
Author's Response: wow thanks (: im so glad you did. and i always thought being kissed underwater would be soooo romantic. lol
Date: 09/02/08 07:35 pm Title: III : Final Bell
I really hope that you know that "nodding" means that Tom is saying "Yes" not "No."
Review (lol.): I like it so far, it caught my interest so fast. ((Yes, I just stopped by to say those two things. xD))
Author's Response: thank you (: glad it caught your attention. that's the plan :D
Date: 08/24/08 02:22 am Title: Epilouge
I liked the ending. I'm happy Tom's helping Bill on the healing process. He's right though, they do need to tell some one. They probably will eventually w/ Tom encouraging Bill. It ended on a positive note but wasn't finite. I liked it.
Author's Response: thank you (: im really glad you liked that. and what happens after the ending is totally up to you. (no sequel)
Date: 08/24/08 02:19 am Title: XVIII : My Sacred
Oh that so cute! They kissed and Bill seems a little bit more ok w/ the touching. I wish they hadn't bickered so much though.
Author's Response: yes, but it's also normal for friends to disagree so much. and its the bickering that brought them closer :D
Date: 08/24/08 02:12 am Title: XVII : Sweet Temptations
He said no! Talk about self restraint! Bill's dad would kill him though! Tom doesn't grasp the enormity of the abuse Bill recieves at home. It's inhumane. And illegal.
Date: 08/24/08 02:05 am Title: XVI : Just a Person
Tom saved Bill! And maybe Bill will let him kiss him now? Hope so!
Date: 08/24/08 01:57 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
OOO! Total cliff hanger at the end! And Tom saved Bill! I'm so proud of him1
Date: 08/24/08 01:53 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
And now Bill fall's victem to Georg and posse. I hope Tom is able ot intervene.
Date: 08/24/08 01:47 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
Tom's over reacting, especially considering they just officiallly became almost friends.
Poor Bill.
Date: 08/24/08 01:44 am Title: XII : Sunday Night
Poor Bill. Jorg is NOT a nice guy and does NOT want Bill to be happy! He's awful!
Date: 08/24/08 01:39 am Title: XI : Don't Touch
Bill opened up too quickly. I understand that he wanted a friend and reached out a bit to Tom but that's not something you usually share w/ someone you've just met. Oh well, it'll move their relationship along quickly, and I liked how understanding Tom was.
Author's Response: i agree. i kinda rushed it. thanks for pointing that out though [:
Date: 08/24/08 01:33 am Title: X : The Chase and Bad Remarks
Can Tom call his mom to come get him? And poor Bill, I figured Jorg was one of his rapists.
Date: 08/24/08 01:27 am Title: IX : How's the Weather?
Lovely way to start a conversation. How's the weather?! Tom can do better, I thought he was at least a bit of a ladies man. The next chapters gonna be akward.
Date: 08/24/08 01:23 am Title: VIII : Stealing Spots and Flashbacks
Oh god! Poor Bill! That's just awful! Craig's on his way to jail.
Date: 08/24/08 01:19 am Title: VII: Such an ordinary name for such an exotic Person
Poor Bill! Raped by three different people? I'm assuming one was his dad, but who were the other two? Maybe he'll talke to Tom now? How does he know Tom's name?