Date: 08/09/08 04:41 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
ah no it cant stop there. T.T
haha i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: i'll try to get it updated soon :P
Date: 08/09/08 03:29 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
ou, poor Bill.. first his father treats him like shit and now tom is being an ass.. i honestly didn't belive my eyes when i saw that you've continued :) so happy that you wrote so soon. hoping u r posting next one tomorrow (: hmm.. i even can't make-up any mistakes or stuff like that. either you have a good beta or you are good yourself..
Author's Response: i dont use betas. its all edit by me and my computer. (i use Word for spelling errors) and since its summer, i do post every other day (i get bored easily lol) when school starts, ill be updating slower though :/ my goal is to finish this story before i return to school. (:
Date: 08/09/08 02:25 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
aww thats so sad :( good job so far:)
Author's Response: thank you (:
Date: 08/09/08 01:48 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
Oh, Tom's so mean! Even in his shoes, I'd at least give Bill a chance to explain!! Wait, actaully, scratch that. I'd probably do more than that. XD Then where'd I be? Off worse than Tom is now, of course.
Author's Response: lol yes. and tom is more embarrassed than mad at bill. but like mentioned in the story, he expresses his humiliation through anger. that's why he treated bill that way :/
Date: 08/09/08 01:46 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
=O!!! *tear*
ohhh noo!!!! Bill!! Tom!!! poor guys =[
yeah you better get writing the next chapter! Im dying here!
Author's Response: lol i'll try (: school is about to start for me in a week, so everything is getting a little hectic. i'll try to finish the story before school starts though (:
Date: 08/09/08 01:07 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
Author's Response: glad you did (:
Date: 08/08/08 04:27 pm Title: XII : Sunday Night
Poor Billa, I really liked this chapter though and how happy they both were for a little while I can't wait for the next one, and I don't find this story predictable at all.
Author's Response: good. it bothers me when stories are too predictable /: glad you liked the chapter (: always remember that youre thanked for reviewing (;
Date: 08/08/08 02:00 pm Title: XII : Sunday Night
oh no... i cant stand waiting for FEW DAYS?!?!?!? im so hoping that you would update soooonn.. i happen to like your story a lot. its exiting, and-like you said- not too predictable. over all, the writing is smooth and plot is Awsome! i was a bit conserned about the chainching the PV but you did it in great way, it's very easy to understans and you dont even make a big fuss about chainching it, it just happens...so sorry about my mistakes i really suck in english!
Author's Response: thank you so much, youre review meant a lot to me. i was kinda worried about changing the P.O.V's as well, im glad im not confusing any one XD and your english isnt so bad, just a few spelling errors, but over all i could read what you wrote. the more you read in english, the more you improve. so good luck :D hope to see your reviews more in the future (: love always: olivera
Date: 08/08/08 12:32 pm Title: XII : Sunday Night
Omg that's sad this chapter was really good can't for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks (: i cant wait either :P
Date: 08/08/08 07:31 am Title: XII : Sunday Night
Poooooooooooor Billa D:
I want it all to be okay. D: I wonder if Tomi will ever be allowed to touch, and if he'll ever realise?! D:
Author's Response: hopfeully you'll find out in the next chapter (:
Date: 08/08/08 03:33 am Title: XII : Sunday Night
Oh, very interesting and dramatic, I just love it.
You write very good and I'll waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you (:
Date: 08/08/08 01:26 am Title: XII : Sunday Night
Awww 'Our tree' Thats soo cute XD
Uh oh!! Billl!! poor Bill =[ and Tom he was so excited...
excited for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: thanks, im excited for the next chapter too. i hope you like it (:
Date: 08/07/08 05:13 am Title: XI : Don't Touch
Awww, that's so cute. :3 Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: thank you (: im glad u liked the chapter :P
Date: 08/06/08 08:10 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
Awwwwe this chapter was so cute. I was a little scared for Tom at the beginning, but he is smart luckily, I really liked the ending and I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: thank you so much (: im glad you liked the ending and i hope i wont dissapoint you in mynext chapter :o
Date: 08/06/08 07:34 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
Yay! There talking!!
woot!
ohhh I cant wait for more
Author's Response: i know (: i was thinking to make them talk because so many ppl asked for it lol. thanks for reviewing :P
Date: 08/06/08 07:24 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner! I've been nightmare busy.
Hey though - this story is going great! It's so sad, but so sweet that they have finally found each other. Just that simple line
"I wanted a friend" - so poignant.
Author's Response: i was wondering where you went :P glad you like the story. thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 08/06/08 06:32 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
Why did this story suddenly change from general to slash? I had a hard time finding it....
Aaaaanyway, really good chapter. I'm glad to finally see a real conversation between them^^
Author's Response: my ideas changed suddenly :o and more ppl enjoy reading slash rather than general. but if u ever have a hard time finding it, check the 'my reviews' section in your account. it shows all the stories you reviewed :D
Date: 08/06/08 05:00 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
This chapter was really good I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: thanks im glad you liked it (:
Date: 08/06/08 04:11 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
=] Keep on with the story and dnt stop!
I love it =]
Author's Response: glad you like it (:
Date: 08/04/08 09:56 pm Title: X : The Chase and Bad Remarks
Poor Boys =[
Amazing chapter!
Cant wait till they talk again =]
Author's Response: thanks (: glad you liked the chapter! thanks for reviewing :P