Date: 08/11/08 07:21 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
Oh, I bet Bill wont let Tom kiss him :) Im really,amazed.. I dunno. Speachless? I really don't know what to say! It way fantastic. Super. You really know woh to write! It was so cute when Tom started to speak, and then helped Billl..
Author's Response: thank you. and i still dont know myself if bill will let tom kiss lol
Date: 08/11/08 05:12 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
Blah! You and your cliffhangers!
I liked this update a lot. :]
Please update again soon cause i'm dying to know. :]
Author's Response: ill try to bring you back to life...
Date: 08/11/08 04:22 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
ah damn those cliffhangers! great chapter =]
Author's Response: ah you know you love them! (the cliffhangers i mean) lol (:
Date: 08/11/08 04:12 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
Aww, JEEZ. poor tom, he's probably gonna be rejected cuz bill's little problem :/ BUT THEN he does like tom, right? ;) hopefully he'll let tom kiss him! This story is really good! Cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: hopefully... (: i still dont know myself. so im just as clueless as you guys are :P
Date: 08/11/08 03:38 am Title: XV: Through the Monsoon
oh, poor little Billy u_____u
I want a kiss, a sweet, soft ans cute kiss for the next chapter, yay!!!!! *O*
Author's Response: i'll think about it (:
Date: 08/10/08 06:32 pm Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
Blah!!!!!
O_O! Update soon!!!!!
I looooooved it!
Please?????
WHat happens next!!!
Author's Response: you'll find out in my next update (:
Date: 08/10/08 03:53 pm Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
This was a really good chapter, you sure are torturing us lol I really can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: sorry. ill try updating tonight :P
Date: 08/10/08 03:08 pm Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
This chapter was really good hope Bill is going to be alright can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks me neither (:
Date: 08/10/08 10:26 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
i love when you have these short funny lines here and there. like : Bill should grow a pair of balls and confront me! or Not that kind of Bill. and the wa-wa language is hilarious.. but the thoughts of tom are really good, they give a clear aspect on the story :) and you had a exiting twist on the story, jey :) and now we all have just wait for next one, perhaps tomorrow? when does you school start?? i mean mine stars allready tomoorow, that's what made me a bit conserned. i mean i hope your story isn't ending jet, or is it?
Author's Response: lmao. thanks (: and i try to use the funny short lines as what we do in school (ex: grow a pair of balls, dont be such a pussy, ect) and i start school in one week. so if i update a chapter a day, that should be enough to end the story. (:
Date: 08/10/08 10:00 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
Aaaagh! D:
Poor Bill ): That must be his worst nightmare. D:
Author's Response: -nods-
Date: 08/10/08 06:19 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
soo... if i want a fast update i have to review right? oky so u're doing an amazing job with this story i really like it and update when u can:D(soon i hope)
Author's Response: my plan is to add another chapter tonite (:
Date: 08/10/08 03:26 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
love it :) please update soon
Author's Response: ill try (:
Date: 08/10/08 01:48 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
oh, really good!! XD
Sorry for my bad english u___u I'm not very good... but anyway...
I'll be waiting for the next chapter =D
Author's Response: hopefully you wont have to wait too long :P
Date: 08/10/08 12:16 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
Aww, things are pretty tense between them :( They should both stop being so stubborn and realise how much they need each other.
Grrr to Georg! He'd better not hurt Billa!
Still loving this :) x
Author's Response: yes, they are both being stubborn, aren't they? and thank you for reading and reviewing (:
Date: 08/10/08 12:08 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
intense and amazing...I loved it. This chapter was so sad but so amazing at the same time. I can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you (: i'll try not to keep you waiting too long :P
Date: 08/10/08 12:05 am Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
AHHH Cliffhanger!!! Tom save him!!
Haha I loved the "Wa, wa Bill" part =P
I liked this chapter, so now im excited for the next one!
Author's Response: thank you (:
Date: 08/09/08 11:44 pm Title: XIV : Too Late to Apologize?
ah. woot go tom. =D
Author's Response: (;
Date: 08/09/08 03:33 pm Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
Awww poor Tom and Bill, this was a good chapter I feel really bad for Bill thoughl. I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: i felt bad for bill too :/ but also for tom as well, him having to watch his brother suffer. glad you liked the chapter (:
Date: 08/09/08 09:55 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
i don't know why, but I love this story ^^ they're just so perfectly angsty...
Author's Response: thank you (: im glad you love the story so far (:
Date: 08/09/08 08:03 am Title: XIII : Dead Daisy
D:
Poor Billa ):
Author's Response: you have to see where TOm is coming from too (: poor tomii