Date: 05/21/23 01:20 am Title: I : The Silent
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… thank you for writing and sharing this fic!
Date: 11/10/10 12:28 pm Title: Epilouge
the cutest, fluffiest story in exsistence!!! i'm glad you didnt add a sex scene, it's so much better without it! i lovelovelove this, thanks you for writing it!!!
Date: 06/16/10 01:23 pm Title: I : The Silent
Your fic helped me answer a question! XD
It taught me that haphephobia is fear of being touched, so I could answer it! :P b29;
Date: 06/12/10 04:55 pm Title: Epilouge
I felt that it could gone some more chapters to resolve some more things, like maybe they could of realized that even though them both being bullied was bad, it somehow brought them together for the better.
Author's Response: you're right, i sort of rushed through the ending. ah well, hopefully my other stories were better (:
Date: 02/08/10 05:23 pm Title: Epilouge
That it? This is te end? The story is very good, but U enden it so quickly... What with Jorg? What with Georg? What with other? U discripped it so good, but I'm thing that story should has some more chapters. :)
Author's Response: yeah, it did end rapidly, didn't it? maybe i will change the ending one day when i have time. life is pretty hectic lately. hopefully i'll change some things (:
Date: 10/07/09 05:53 am Title: Epilouge
this story was a bit unsettling.
I dont mean to be insulting, it's just the feeling i'm left with.
I think it was really cute, but sort of frusterating. all the fighting and confusion, everything happened so rapidly, and then it ends and all the nots are left untied.
you're an amazing writer, dont get me wrong, and it's a great story...
i guess i was just hoping for a happier ending? maybe...
sorry, this isn't a very good review, but i'm not so great at explaining what i think. It was fun to read though, and i did enjoy it a lot :]
Author's Response: thanks, i really take in criticism. i guess you're right, the time range this story took place in was too rapid. and the ending was sudden. it was a bit rushed. but i'm glad you think i'm a great writer, and glad you enjoyed some of the story at least (:
Date: 09/20/09 03:16 pm Title: Epilouge
aww, how beautiful... the ending was so perfect! x
Author's Response: thank you so much (:
Date: 03/20/09 11:12 pm Title: V : Observations and Lies
"Let me rephrase, how do you think you did?"
OMG sry but my mom always and i mean ALWAYS! says that to me! haha i just found it funny
Author's Response: haha, thanks :D
Date: 03/02/09 01:30 am Title: Epilouge
Simply beautiful.
Author's Response: thanks so much. (:
Date: 02/08/09 10:25 pm Title: Epilouge
that was amazing a beautiful love story seriously it was soo heartwarming and sad and beautiful good job
Author's Response: aw, thank you [: glad u enjoyed it
Date: 01/22/09 02:56 pm Title: X : The Chase and Bad Remarks
I lol'd at "You didn't even buy the right cereal!"
Author's Response: haha glad you did :D
Date: 12/25/08 09:52 pm Title: XI : Don't Touch
…was like cutting away his joy. – nice line.
Tom replied, “I won’t. I’ll never touch you.” – maybe that will be true.
Author's Response: maybe it will [:
Date: 12/25/08 09:39 pm Title: X : The Chase and Bad Remarks
Bill wanted to go back and get to know Tom better, but his phobia didn’t let him. – good line.
What is Tom doing down alley’s?
Once again good abuse scenes.
Author's Response: thanks, glad you thought so [:
Date: 12/25/08 09:30 pm Title: IX : How's the Weather?
Tom's hands weren't greedy like his past rapers - good line!
The tension between them before either one of them talks is great!
Date: 12/25/08 09:02 pm Title: VIII : Stealing Spots and Flashbacks
I think the Bill swirly has been the best written section of this story so far. Good detail. Good dialogue. Good tone/feeling. Well done!
Author's Response: haha, one of the best sections i think. thanks for the review [:
Date: 12/25/08 08:55 pm Title: VII: Such an ordinary name for such an exotic Person
Nice! I like that Bill was raped, adds depth. And I love that he rams into Tom *grins*
Date: 12/25/08 08:50 pm Title: VI : Stalkish, much?
fairy boy - lol...now I know what you were aiming for but? it just ended up comical...*shakes head* that's ok I'm still reading. Lets see how they meet.
Date: 12/25/08 08:38 pm Title: V : Observations and Lies
The writing at the beginning of this chapter was a little iffy, it did get better as the chapter progressed. Occasionally there are dips where the writing gets a little juvenile but nothing serious and it seems to pick up which keeps me from stopping reading.
Author's Response: thanks, hope it gets better for you.(:
Date: 12/25/08 02:15 am Title: IV : Skipping School
Are they going to meet? O.O *waiting with bated breath*
Date: 12/25/08 02:11 am Title: III : Final Bell
Nice. Could have been more violent though...but I've been reading too much ImNu lol