Date: 07/17/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow you wrote that out so fantastically! Getting everyone's emotions on Bill's sickness and after. ^^ Love!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 07/17/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story. Just...wow. Love it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Date: 07/17/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Oh dear lord, this was beautiful. I loved the way you captured Tom's emotions so wonderfully. I feel as if I was reading something Tom would actually think! Just beautiful.
Author's Response: Hee, then my job is done :) I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 07/17/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, it was greatly written. Great Stuff
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 07/17/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm speechless. I don't think I've ever read anything as intense as this. I'm so awed. I don't... I don't know what to say. Just wow.
I got shivers down my spine halfway through, the intensity made my hair stand on end.
Wow.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the lovely review! :) I'm so happy to hear it had such an emotional impact. That's what I was hoping for.
Date: 07/17/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
bill and tom like strawberry nesquick...
but it was a good story!
Author's Response: Lol - how did I know someone would say that? ;-) Glad you liked it though.