Date: 09/17/08 06:03 am Title: "How do you know?"
*was not shocked by the abuse*
Aw I would like to see Bushido teaching Bill how to loooooooove. LOL I had a feeling Georg was going to end up doing that.
Date: 09/16/08 04:19 am Title: "How do you know?"
Wow. I am very saddened by Tom, but Georg more than made up for it. And Bushido of course. Fabulous fabulous story, though I would not complain about any more. However this is wonderful, one of your best. great job!!
Date: 09/16/08 04:09 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
:( I'm disappointed in Tom. I want him to be better than this, be better to Bill. Glad to see Bill has a little of his fire back, but i still can't wait to read more!!
Date: 09/16/08 04:05 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
oh my god!! Thank god i have another chapter to read! I am excited to see some of Bill's past finally, even though it was heart-wrenching. you guys write his angst and terror so well though. utterly fabulous. i am impressed.
Date: 09/15/08 03:02 pm Title: "How do you know?"
I loved it.
It was hot hot hot!
And Bu was such a sweetheart in this one ^^
Great job!
Date: 09/12/08 05:54 pm Title: "How do you know?"
Loved it! You two constantly amaze me. You're fantastic writers.
More stories please!
Date: 09/12/08 07:02 am Title: "How do you know?"
;____; Can't decide weather I should cry or skip out of joy. Anyway, I love this. Love with a capital L. Thank you both, it was amazing and it was everything, witty enough and various and.. all that jazz. ;D
Date: 09/10/08 01:16 pm Title: "How do you know?"
Aww, so sweet! Adored this story!
Date: 09/09/08 05:14 pm Title: "How do you know?"
i didn't even realize this was the last chapter until i looked back at it again, and OMG NO!!!!
can we hope for a seqeul with this one? it was so good!
Date: 09/09/08 03:22 pm Title: "How do you know?"
Aww. Bills first time. Sweeeet. ^^
Date: 09/09/08 11:49 am Title: "How do you know?"
*claps her hands*
yayyyy they're together
tom's an ass
Date: 09/09/08 02:31 am Title: "How do you know?"
(Insert annoyingly high-pitched squeal here) Oh my gosh... I didn't know you girls were capable of writing something so unbelievably sweet. I'm not even sure its you who wrote this. The Little Muse and Majestrix that I know would put Bill through an unbelievable hell, then have his lover killed. But instead, you two strangers actually gave him what both wanted, and needed. Who are you people? :)
It was the scene with the bottle of glue that really got to me. Being that I am a little bit of an airhead, it took a whole several seconds for me to get it--I was sitting there, going, What on earth would Bill do with a bottle of glue? But then it registered. And then I read the dialogue. And then I giggled insanely and fanned myself off from the charming sweetness of it. I think everyone would like a man like Bushido in their lives... sigh.
The scene with Tom was a little bit more difficult to bear. He was a prick. He was an honest prick, yes, but a prick nonetheless. I never expected to actually learn to like him from the beginning of the story, and as time went by and he made himself even less likeable, I was happy I never developed an attachment. It's sad that Bill had to endure the harsh words and all... but I guess the ties to his old life had to be broken before he could move on. Tom wouldn't have done him any good, anyway, even if they did remain in contact.
Maybe you could write a side-story wherein Bushido beats Tom's face into a brick wall? :) I would really, really like that. LOL.
Well, what else is there to say. I love this. I'm so glad I was able to be a part of it, and follow it as the story unfolded week after week. The dialogue was perfect--as always (I don't know any other authors on this site who write dialogue as realistically as you girls do), the characters were wonderfully charming, whether I came to like them as people or not, and the story was beautiful.
Thank you so much for writing this.
Date: 09/09/08 01:54 am Title: "How do you know?"
Bill sat back, and tried not to cry over a one euro bottle of glue....
that stupid bottle made me cry too..
Date: 09/09/08 01:52 am Title: "How do you know?"
THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER?!?!?!?!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOØ!!!!!!!!!!¡ Or did I just make that up?
Date: 09/09/08 12:26 am Title: "How do you know?"
Aww, I loved this story, I wish it could have been longer, eventhough it was probably the right time to end it. It was so beautiful.
Date: 09/08/08 10:46 pm Title: "You like my lips?"
this was a wonderful fic, I kinda don't want it to end but... it has to. Thanks for keeping Billshido alive.
Date: 09/08/08 09:15 pm Title: "How do you know?"
That was really awesome, you guys. The perfect ending! I'm going to go read this from the beginning to end in one sitting now, yay :D
Date: 09/08/08 06:44 pm Title: "How do you know?"
Awww.... I love this story. Sad to see it over, though.
And no, the abuse thing totally fit for me... It brought it together, in a sense. ^^
Date: 09/08/08 04:43 pm Title: "How do you know?"
I liked it.
I remember reading the first chapter and assuming that Bill was just some prostitute with no feelings, and oh how wrong I was :) The best stories are the ones that surprise you.
So thank you!
Date: 09/08/08 03:23 pm Title: "How do you know?"
O.O; wasnt expecting that out of Tom, dayum.