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Reviewer: Pump Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 09:23 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."

oooh I really like this! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Hikki_Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 08:30 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."

I like your goal. I feel more people should have these types of goals.

HeeHeee. I think I know his name!!!!! But honestly, with your fics, I can't ever guess the next chapter :(

Reviewer: Lazurline Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 05:06 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."

:shudders: God, YES!!!

Reviewer: RcA Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 04:00 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."

Yay! Tom enters the picture. And I think I might know who this athlete/up and coming musician is going to be. ;)

Author's Response: The athlete/up-and-coming musician is no one. It's the exec he has to sign with who matters.

Reviewer: boxofhappy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 03:57 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."

Yay Tomi! And I can sense some Bushido coming up soon. MAN, I'm so excited for this fic. The dialogue, the descriptions, everything is just perfect and very evocative xD

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 09:40 am Title: "You like my lips?"

Oohh, I like it! Bill is soo...rawr. *lol*

Reviewer: Pump Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 08:43 am Title: "You like my lips?"

Yes yes yes. Bill as a men ho? A DREAM come true. That and Billshido, I just might die of hapiness.

Chapter was brillant and I can't wait to see how all of this new world will turn out. I'm confident. ;)

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 11:38 pm Title: "You like my lips?"

daaaaaaaaaaaaang I am sooo looking forward to this story!

Reviewer: semioticxlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 10:35 pm Title: "You like my lips?"

very good so far. ;D

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 04:28 pm Title: "You like my lips?"

Wowza! That was hawt!! I think I'm going to like the idea of Promiscuous Bill. *drool* I WANT MORE!! That was almost too hot to handle. Impressive for only the first chapter!!

Reviewer: catmio Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 01:00 pm Title: "You like my lips?"

Great start!

Reviewer: bleepbloopbanana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 12:46 pm Title: "You like my lips?"

I didn't want to read this. I saw it on the front page and my hand itched, I swear it did, and I said to myself, "No, Ella. Control yourself, goddamnit. Don't you remember what they did to you with the last Billshido they wrote? Do you really want to have your heart ripped out, stomped on, and bazooka'd? Again? Really?"

...I managed to hold off for about ten seconds.

And then I started thinking, promiscuous!Bill isn't really my cup of tea you know, so maybe I'll just hate the fic right off the bat. ...pfft. Yeah. Right.

I've come to realize that with you its less about what you write and more about how you write it. At this point you could drivel out something along the lines of "Boy meets boy. Boy likes boy. Boy trips over turnip and dies." and I would still be cooing over it.

It's like some sort of disease! And I didn't know there was a vaccination beforehand, so now I'm well and truly fucked.

I'm hooked. Again. T_____T I was reading the scene with Bill and Richard and silently giggling over Bill's thoughts (which IMO were spot on, by the way) and now I'm practically vibrating in my seat waiting for Tom/Bushido to show up and show Bill how its really done. D: Or maybe its the other way around, I don't know, but I'm very much looking forward to Bill being romanced. And hopefully no one dies in the end this time, and we end up with a happy threesome.

Because that is obviously how all things should end. -duh-

Can't wait for the next, and I've put my heart in a protective bubble already (steel reinforced) so I'll be able to handle any amount of angst you throw at me. ...hopefully.

Looking forward to the next, and much love,

Ella

P to the S, heehee, Georg. I think my favorite line in the entire chapter came from him, "Then I'm sailing to Hawaii and fucking every bored housewife on Maui."

Reviewer: Hikki_Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 10:07 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I am so loving this! So the guy that Bill was thinking about; was it Bushido? And does Tom fall in love with Bill and wants him for himself or something? I NEED MORE!!!!

Reviewer: nimmck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 08:19 am Title: "You like my lips?"

You know, I was just thinking how tired I was of Bill being the innocent party in everything that I'd been reading lately. Thank you so much :3

And is it wrong of me to really want to hear more about Georg's cougar? I hope to read more about that aspect.

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 08:11 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I love it already :)

Reviewer: Lazurline Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 05:33 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I think I'm-a dirty pervert because since the first line I've been grinning like crazy and shaking my head mad, man!! This is F#$king awesome! Exactly what I expected from you two!

Reviewer: FeNice Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 04:43 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I totally love Bill when he's a slut XD
Seems like this fic will be one of my favourite ;)

Reviewer: lilie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 04:19 am Title: "You like my lips?"

Promiscuous, indeed. Wasn't too impressed with the client sex scene, to be honest--personal preference; nothing against you guys--but I will admit I'm intrigued. I see promise in this, and am curious to see where you two will take it.

Author's Response: Understandable. Client sex is simply necessary to set up the story. People you recognize will soon come into it, though we can't promise they won't be clients as well. ;)

Reviewer: RcA Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 04:03 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I'm quite fond of promiscuous Bill, myself. Great start, you two. I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Anchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 03:59 am Title: "You like my lips?"

I feel like this could be the start of a beautiful friendship.

Promiscuous!Bill can be something I could get used to. A lot. I love every possible story that proves to me just how easily men can be...misguided, to use a light term, ergo i LOVE this already.

More please :D

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