Date: 07/26/08 09:26 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Anything more and he'd go limp, like he was trained to do, and eventually black out. Then the memories would come and he couldn't have that, now could he?
Ok, what is that about?
I like to imagine that this is what sex between Bill and Bushido would be like, not just NA Bill, but the real Bill. :)
Date: 07/25/08 07:36 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
love it!
Date: 07/25/08 02:31 pm Title: "You like my lips?"
oh gosh...
that was sexy
XD.
Date: 07/25/08 02:12 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
that was so erotic
this story is promising
more
Date: 07/25/08 12:34 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA! grr baby!!
Date: 07/25/08 12:13 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
I have mixed feelings about this chapter. When I read the chapter title first, a part of me started doing a little victory dance because, hel-lo, sex, but the other part of me was very disappointed.
I suppose because I hadn't lied in the last review when I said I didn't want to them to have sex *just* yet; I wanted it to be drawn out into something that could mean more to Bill than what he has been dealing with so far. So when I started reading I was grumpy and more than a little annoyed.
And then I got to the word "Bushido" and melted into an Ella-shaped pile of red love-goo. ...which is really just starting to become a problem. D:
I loved the entire scene in the bar, because it written out to be very sexy but not *about* the sex, you know? I loved that Bill put both himself and Bushido in the "Control Freak" category because opposites attract (and there's definitely some attracting going on there) but you need some common values to build a relationship on - and I'm really, REALLY rooting for a relationship here. I've got my pompoms and everything. D: I also really enjoyed the little insight you gave us into Bushido's head - it wasn't much but I feel like I have a much stronger foothold on him now, character wise, and I like that he's so sincere and focused on his work, despite being as successful as its possible to be already (or so I assume, from all that Bill keeps calling him the Rap Mogul) and I don't think you ever wrote him to be 2-dimensional, but this just fleshed him out even more.
I really enjoyed Bill's POV in this, especially the sardonic tint to his voice. That had been present in every chapter, but it was funner (Yes. fun-ner. Not more fun. Funner. Go screw yourself, 3rd grade grammar.) to see him being thrown off and frustrated by Bushido. But! As much as I liked that, I also liked that you didn't make Bushido have *all* the control because as much as he seems like a godly specimen of sexiness, he IS a man. And I really, REALLY liked that you didn't make him resistible to Bill's charms. :3
"He liked money." That line reminds me of the whole faux-pimp-Tom again, and I'm glad you cleared me up on that because I can see now how he'd want to be in control of everything all the time. It was just that the way Tom phrased it to Bushido, it made it seem like he *owned* Bill and could give him away as he pleased. Or, it must have seemed that way to Bushido anyway.
And speaking of Tom, the feel I got from Bill's thoughts of him in this chapter is that he doesn't care for Bill beyond his business pursuits and stoking his own ego, especially the part where "...it was always about inflating his own self-confidence, even if they were good at it. [...] Especially Tom." I hope you'll expand on that more later on and I could be wrong about the not-caring thing, but right now I'm hating on him. Really bad. D: And that's never before happened to me so it's a tough pill to swallow, but he doesn't even register in my radar anymore. Billshido all the way, bby. ;3
Okay, so the sex. By the time I got to this part most of my disappointment had been leeched away by Bushido being... you know, all Bushido-like, but I still couldn't focus so much on the sex as the thoughts that went through Bill's head as they had it. So, was it hot? Sure. Did I love it? Not particularly. Was it interesting? Definitely. I especially liked the part where they "fought" (because what else would two control freaks get up to in bed?) 'cause I hold firm in the belief that sex should be fun on occasion. And not the kind of fun Bill gets out of it, but the kind where you enjoy being with your partner for the sake of being with them and I think it could be really, really easy for him to find that with Bushido.
And I hope he does. :)
I'm really looking forward to how you connect them in the future, especially since Bill's pretty adamant on getting out of the deal once this is over. But something tells me Bushido won't let him go so easily. Mwah. Mwahahah! ..haha... ha.
Right, so, lovely development in this chapter, I always enjoy getting into Bill's head. And. Um, Bushido. Guh.
Next chapter, pleeeease!
Much love,
Ella
Date: 07/25/08 11:51 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
This is so hot!
Date: 07/25/08 05:24 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Let me guess. He was that good twice. I wouldn't have Bu any other way.
Date: 07/25/08 02:58 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Bill what a male whore you are!!
i m curious, what happen next?
i m eating my nails
Date: 07/25/08 02:11 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn guys how the hell do you come up with this shit! Its amazing!
Date: 07/25/08 02:05 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
LORRRRDDY
Date: 07/25/08 01:58 am Title: "You like my lips?"
gosh i LOVE bushido in your fics. you guys are GOOD.
Date: 07/24/08 01:40 am Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
I snuck away from writing so I could read this chapter. I couldn't wait any longer. I really, really love that it was Bushido and that Bill introduced himself to the wrong guy.
I lol'd over this though. "I don't do watersports, choke play, scat, or small animals. No sex without a condom, and we're good to go."
Does that mean large animals are okay?
Date: 07/22/08 11:35 pm Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
O.O
more, more!!! pretty please??!?!
Date: 07/22/08 08:07 pm Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
You never cease to amaze me. Most interesting plot I've read in a looong time. This Bushido is precious, I cannot wait for more!
Date: 07/22/08 04:38 pm Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
O.O
More?
Date: 07/22/08 04:35 pm Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."
You have no idea how frustrated I was when I got to the end of this chapter and realized that I could read chapter three if I could just get online. I seriously walked through my friend's apartment with my laptop, desperately trying to find some signal to steal.
I'm loving this Bill more and more with every chapter. I'm loving that goal of sex in every chapter too. Promiscuous Bill is amazing!
Date: 07/22/08 04:31 pm Title: "You like my lips?"
I read this last night while I was stuck without the Internet. I am so glad I decided to save this so I could read it while I was online.
Fucking hell, this story is hot. I started out thinking that Bill was just very promiscuous and had a thing for older men. (By the way, how did you make the idea of Bill sleeping with an older guy so incredibly erotic? Normally that would freak me out.)
I loved how you gradually introduced us to Bill's mind. It was a slow such a slow progression from thinking that Bill was just slutty to understanding that he was actually an "escort" that by the time I came to that realization, I fully accepted him in that role.
This Bill is just amazing. I can't find the right words to describe him, but I love him to death. It's really interesting to see Bill in the role of a strong prostitute rather than the usual naive boy who was manipulated into it.
Date: 07/22/08 02:35 pm Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
I love this!
Date: 07/22/08 12:50 pm Title: "I'm here for your pleasure."
OMG Bushido is so...hawt. *-* Okay okay I'm walking into this story with a Billshido mindset (and omg I REALLY appreciated the Bill/Andreas sex...I can't thank you enough) so seeing Bushido so...classy is very exciting.
I really can't wait for an update on this, and it is going straight to my favorites :)