Date: 08/02/08 04:35 am Title: "As long as my man is paying for it, then you're all his."
Man, you can't even guess how much I like this fic.
And it keeps getting better!
I'm looking forward to the next meeting between Bill and Bushido.
Date: 08/02/08 04:16 am Title: "As long as my man is paying for it, then you're all his."
Really nice - but the name is spelled Dieter and not Deiter ;)
It's my dad's name - images of my dad and Bill = do NOT want *shudders*
Apart from that, I really like this story :)
Author's Response: Uh... very much double-checked the spelling when I was writing it, just in preparation for this type of response. Perhaps both forms are names, but I assure you, Deiter is correct.
Date: 08/01/08 12:49 am Title: "You sound surprised."
Yes! Sassy!Bill is sexy and I love it :) One thing I really like going on is how Tom seems to be Bill's solid ground. The scene where Bill speed-dailed Tom's number without thinking about it was really sweet. I think you guys captured Bushido's personality really well despite this being an AU. I can't wait to see more of this fic! The plot must, must thicken and may hearts be twisted and torn!
Date: 07/31/08 03:59 pm Title: "You sound surprised."
XD love the ending!!
man you guys continue soon bitte^^
Date: 07/31/08 02:23 pm Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."
sex every chappie XD jeeeeha!
Date: 07/31/08 12:19 pm Title: "You sound surprised."
There aren't words to describe the two of you. You could write math books together and I would read them with a smile on my face and a song in my heart,
Date: 07/30/08 09:26 am Title: "You sound surprised."
I love the way you portray Bill in this.
Can't wait to read more!!
Date: 07/30/08 07:14 am Title: "You sound surprised."
Haha oh my gosh. I adored this chapter, especially this line: Bushido and his Cock of Doom.
Bill's feelings and thoughts towards Bushido are really forming nicely. I really enjoy the look into his head about the whole situation.
And from my review from the last chapter... I do realize there are two of you writing this fic. I was just using 'you' as a general statement, meaning for you both. Sorry for the confusion. You're both incredible. :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/30/08 01:30 am Title: "Hello, Gorgeous."
yay the was awsome ^^
Date: 07/29/08 12:51 pm Title: "You sound surprised."
Shit, if I had the money, I'd pay that much for Bill. XDDDD
Date: 07/29/08 12:16 pm Title: "You sound surprised."
10 000 €! WOAH! makes me wonder how much he usually charges...lol
I like this Bill very much, he is/ seems very tough (which is rare in fics) and therefore I cannot wait to see his softer side. I'm sure you will manage a great way to introduce it.
The sex with Michael was my second fave sex scene in the story (after the Billshido one). It was sexy, light & funny.
The phone call from Bushido got me. I like how he is messing with Bill's head.
You guys do a fantastic job, as always.
Date: 07/29/08 11:15 am Title: "You sound surprised."
This is the hottest thing I have read in so, so long. It's...wow. I want more! I love how Bu is fucking with Bill's head. It will be interesting to see what comes of this.
Date: 07/29/08 09:47 am Title: "You sound surprised."
i dont get it
Bill is toms whore??
Fucking Tom,
how you dare?
Date: 07/29/08 06:17 am Title: "You sound surprised."
In all honesty, he does have great hair.
And for Bill's knowledge I'd sell my house and auction my organs on the black market for something as 'trivial' as being there when he does Bu.
Date: 07/29/08 02:42 am Title: "You sound surprised."
I'm adoring this 'relationship' development between Bushido and Bill. It's... interesting, with all the stress involved and the almost blatant dislike Bill has for Bushido. Throughout this chapter I was sitting and debating over how this might affect the plot in future chapters, and what kind of angst it might cause for the characters.
Well... what else is there to say that hasn't already been said on my part? The chapter, as always, was perfectly written and I really enjoyed reading it. Love your characterization of Bill and all the odd perverts he keeps encountering as the story continues.
Already crossing my fingers and praying for an early posting of the next chapter. Keep up the great work, girls!
Date: 07/28/08 03:24 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Fuck, Bill. Of course he'll be that good twice. XDD
Date: 07/28/08 12:32 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
This fic is amazing.
I totally love it.
Bill's just... perfect. And I love Billshido's ^^
Wonderful job, ladies XD
keep writing, I wanna read more of this!
Date: 07/27/08 03:44 am Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Yeesh, I feel like such a dirty little pervert reading these things late at night by myself... Some of the chapters had me yearning for a shower. Or two. Or three. Well, one per-chapter.
To no one's surprise, the collaboration of Little Muse and Majestrix is going to knock every other author on this site onto their poor little rumps. The writing, as before in This Hour's Duty, is almost perfect in its specific style of focusing on its main character(s) and those around them, giving just enough detail to their environments as necessary, and not a word more. The plot's evolving a great pace, not too slow nor too fast.
It really is stories like these, ones that can actually involve me despite my lack of interest for smut-centered pieces, that really, really showcase the strength of the written (well... typed) word, and strength of its authors.
I remain an avid fan of you both (and a busily praying doofus who hopes some of this talent will rub off on me the more I read). Good luck with the rest of the story!
Date: 07/26/08 07:35 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
Ohoho!
My god this is incredible. I believe, after reading most of your fics, that you are the queen of AU and Billshido. Dear lord, you blow me out of the water with every word you write. I wish there were enough adjectives to describe how awesome this is and you are. b29;
Author's Response: For some reason, I don't think many people seem to understand that there are two of us... but thank you. :)
Date: 07/26/08 05:09 pm Title: "I've never gotten it up that fast before."
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