Date: 08/23/08 03:48 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
awwwwww that was so sad...and hot...and dramatic...
Date: 08/23/08 03:44 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
I might have cried a little while reading it D;
There's been a lot of Jorg-raping-Bill scenes but this one was so well written and so believable ;__; Bill, I'm sorry for all the times I thought you were a whore D: It's all falling into place, and I really really hope Bushido can heal Bill's heart (no matter how corny that sounds).
btw I liked the little detail, that he was having sex without a condom for the first time in years. Random note :3
Date: 08/23/08 01:19 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
And so did I...
Wonderful story - love how your wicked minds keep coming up with fantastic stories! Love ya guys!
Date: 08/23/08 01:06 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
POOR BILL. THATS JUST WRONG. STUPID BILLS DAD.ANYWAY GREAT STORY.ITS NOT OFTEN THAT YOU COME ACROSS A LIL BILLSHIDO THATS NOT CRAP. THIS IS ONE OF THOSE FEW THAT ISNT CRAP. YOU ARE GUYS ARE AMAZING WRITERS. GREAT JOB. OH AND MAJESTRIX, WHAT EVER HAPPENED TO THE STORY YOU WERE WORKING ON? MAKES THREE, IT WAS SO GOOD BUT YOU LIKE VANISHED. WHATS UP IF YOU DONT MIND ME ASKING?
Date: 08/23/08 12:36 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
You know what? I've been wondering about something like that ever since I first started reading this story. It's the psychological aspect of it--Bill's sexual infatuations, emotional disconnections, his distaste for males. And, of course, his very obvious self-esteem problems. Much of the beginning chapter of this alone provided a lot of insight on how Bill views himself, and his self-worth. It was sad. I'm glad you didn't throw this in our faces at the very beginning of the story and instead, decided to show us the aftermath rather than the decisive moments themselves that made Bill who he is today.
I'm wondering if you did a lot of research on sexual abuse before you decided to write this story? Because you girls seem to know what you're talking about...
It's almost unnerving.
Fantastically written, but unnerving.
Author's Response: Dude, that is so wonderful to hear. But actually, we don't know much what we're talking about. Any research about it was purely stuff we picked up, nothing we specifically looked into for this story. We happened to know people who are abused young are often promiscuous young. We happened to know self-esteem issues often came with the territory. Etc., etc. Wish we could tell ya we did our work like good girls, but we knew enough to do and we just did, lol.
Date: 08/23/08 12:34 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
I didn't expect that...not at all.
Date: 08/23/08 12:20 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
I cried a little reading this and it takes a lot to make me cry or squirm. I haven't gotten a tummy ache from reading something in years but this gave me one. Amazing.
Date: 08/23/08 12:12 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
T_________T
Date: 08/23/08 12:02 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Aw, Bill. :( I figured things weren't as perfect as they seemed to be, but Jorg? So sad. I, too, wish that Bushido had gone to Bill; I don't want him alone in the state he's in. I'm wondering who will see him first and if even his closest friends know about his past.
Looking forward to the next update! :)
Date: 08/22/08 10:49 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
ugh i hate jorg!!! :'(
i hope that bill and bushido
will see each other again though :]
Date: 08/22/08 10:36 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Ugh, serious? You girls aren't the only ones who cried from this. I wish Bushido had gone after him...
Date: 08/22/08 10:26 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
thanks for the quick update! more more more! this is one of my favorite fics on the site! :D
Date: 08/22/08 07:24 pm Title: "He seems smitten."
yeah! I love BxT^^
Date: 08/22/08 12:20 pm Title: "He seems smitten."
wow! so our little sexy thing is totally confused whom he wants!!! he is sorta in love with Tom but yet is in denial of his feelings/desires towards Bushido... what a twist...
i felt pity for him that he still feels cheap though changing as much and going to fancy expensive restaurants....
Date: 08/22/08 06:20 am Title: "He seems smitten."
do you have any idea how undeniably sexy this fic is. Every chapter you out out leaves me wanting more - upset that there isn't any just yet. Brilliant!! ^^
Date: 08/22/08 05:43 am Title: "He seems smitten."
Fucking HOT! Can't wait for another chapter :)
Date: 08/22/08 05:39 am Title: "He seems smitten."
What I'm really asking myself at the end of chapters where Bill's feeling really conflicted is: What does Bill like so much about Tom that Bushido doesn't have? Because right now it seems Bill can't enjoy anything as much as when he's with Bu. I like the way the fic's progressing. Tom's beginning to cross some lines and rules are getting mushed up on Bill's end. I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Date: 08/22/08 05:26 am Title: "He seems smitten."
Hilarious. Completely, undeniably, hilarious. I can't get past Bill's reactions toward his unexpected 'feelings' (if we can call it that at this point) toward Bushido--and all the conflicting emotions he's having to endure. As I sit and read about Bill going about his day and doing all he can to ignore our poor little gangster rapper, I can't help but wonder what Bushido's thinking at this point. Or... I guess what he was thinking in the first place, trying to get close to a prostitute. I'm wondering what his intentions are. Why he keeps calling, all the while (most likely) knowing that he's been ignored.
It's difficult, because a part of me is begging Bill to pick up his damn phone and give me a chance to experience some mild romance, but another part is also begging him to let it alone and wait to see what might come of it on its own. I want him to give in, but I also want him to play the part, remain professional, and force Bushido to make the move.
Argh!
But in any case, you girls can't go wrong no matter which path you choose. I've come to find it may be... irritatingly impossible for you.
As always, looking forward to the next chapters!
Date: 08/22/08 05:17 am Title: "He seems smitten."
This is great! I love it. I'm SO curious about what will happen.
Date: 08/22/08 05:08 am Title: "He seems smitten."
Aww :( I feel so bad for Bu and Bill. And a little for Tom because he obviously doesn't see what Bushido does in the little vixen.