Date: 08/25/08 02:33 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
May I join in the crying?
Date: 08/25/08 02:25 am Title: "He seems smitten."
fornication...at first i was :-/ then i LMAO'd like never before. I NEVER saw this word used in ANY fiction i have so far read. You have my praise, not that my praise is something so awesomely incredible, but it's the best i can do :)
Date: 08/24/08 05:16 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
This is a great chapter, getting to see some of Bill's past and such... very insightful. Great writing as always! ^_^
Date: 08/24/08 04:59 am Title: "Just fuck me already!"
You two are amazing. The whole fic is just WOW. Sorry I'm lose on words but this is just WOW.
Date: 08/24/08 03:49 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Oh I knew there was something like that, you didn't leave many hints but I still picked it up. Poor lil Bill.
lol I'm writing a fic that has no buttsex in it and today I had a hankering for some buttsex fic...I knew just where to come.
Author's Response: Hahahahahaha. Oh, the joys of sex every chapter.
Date: 08/23/08 09:58 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Awwuh, I was not expecting that at all .__.
But brilliant as always :]
Date: 08/23/08 05:23 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
:( i think my heart just broke a lil bit.
That was horrible:(
Date: 08/23/08 02:46 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
So sad! I wasn't expecing this to happen.. Great chapter!
Date: 08/23/08 11:04 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
poor, poor little billy :'|
this story is so amazing - mein gott..
I don't know what to say, just - wow.
after reading this (and this hours duty) , i'm totally into billshido *__*
Date: 08/23/08 09:45 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
he should have found him to hold and comfort.... why did he pulled away???
Date: 08/23/08 07:57 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Shit that was unexpected.. and emotional to no end. Really makes me wish Bushido hadn't pulled away.
Date: 08/23/08 07:28 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Oh my God. This was so sad. Poor Bill. Wow it's amazing.
Date: 08/23/08 06:24 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
omg, poor Bill :o :'(
I love this story, and I really don't know what to say, I just love it :')
I like the way you write about Bill's growing feelings for Bushido, they're so real!
Date: 08/23/08 06:14 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Jesus Christ, I should know better than to read you ladies right before bed. I need a fluffy fic asap if I'm going to make it without crying. You are so good at transitioning between the present and the past. I knew he had to have some kind of a screwed up past but good god that was disturbing. I can't read anything from you guys without thinking "poor [insert character here]" and this is no exception. ;_; If Jorg's not dead, please to have Bushido use his gazillions of euros to make it so.
Date: 08/23/08 05:42 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Oh noes.. Poor Billa Ö
Date: 08/23/08 05:22 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
You may have cried, but I did cry.
It's not as if it had caught me by surprise, cause I sort of knew Bill had had to be abused by someone. But for some reason it really got to me. It started with the sentence: What the fuck do you want with someone like me? and then went on, with how Bill gradually gave himself up to Bushido's love-making (at the no-condom part I really gasped) and then came the horrible flashback.
I'm glad you finished the chapter with Bushido's thoughts. If anyone then it's him who can save Bill. He is strong enough, confident enough and goes for what he wants. No matter how bitterly Bill is going to fight him, he will win over Jorg.
This fic is about so much more than one may think at the beginning. That's what I like about your stories.
And I'd really like to see a Billshido happy end for a change. It's so rare.
Date: 08/23/08 05:18 am Title: "You like my lips?"
Two updates in one day..I could not ask for more :) The dialogue you write between Bill and Bushido is just feels so right. Amazingly intense!
Date: 08/23/08 04:35 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
You made me cry reading this. It just knocked me down out of the blue.
Date: 08/23/08 04:35 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
too intense for my little heart ._.
Date: 08/23/08 04:18 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Oh, God, that was powerful. I wish Bushido had gone to him, but that he even thought to do so is enough for me right now. Also, I adore the way you two made the transition from the present to a moment from Bill's past, a memory-- similar to how you depicted his visions in THD.