Date: 09/03/08 06:21 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Please.let.Bill.give.in.
Date: 09/01/08 10:56 pm Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Girls, you're making me want to cry with everything you're writing right now... D:
But that doesn't mean I don't love it. GRAH.
Date: 09/01/08 07:32 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
wow...please continue I need more... I guess..like...I don't know what I'm saying...
Date: 09/01/08 01:28 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
This whole thing was pretty... gloomy. Great, of course, but gloomy.
The first thing that struck me was Tom and his behavior. It's so sad that Bill has genuine feelings for him, and is willing to put his pride aside long enough to try and reach out, and just speak to him, and Tom acts like a jerk. He gets dismissive as soon as he realizes that he isn't going to get any ass. This does nothing for Bill's opinions on men, and even less for his self-worth. It just... seems like one of those things that could really creep up later. I'm a little concerned.
And then Bushido...
The poor guy tries so hard, and seems to really want to understand just what the heck is going on with this crazy, moody hooker, but Bill's so damaged he can't muster up the courage to trust him. He's been consistently used and betrayed by the people he was supposed to trust in the past--so who can blame him? But that doesn't make it any less sad. It's such a horrible thing.
Well, whether or not Bill chooses to spend that week with Bushido, I know that we're still going to encounter more of that gloomy nature as we get closer and closer to the raw core of Bill's character. I'm looking forward to it, depressing as it may be.
Thank you girls.
Date: 08/31/08 01:05 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
awwwwwwwwwwww GOD I LOVE this story! I hope Bu isnt gonna let himgo!
Date: 08/30/08 05:58 pm Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Okay,mais alors, si je changes le titre de "I'm here for your pleasure" à "just fuck me already",ça ne colle pas trop avec l'image.Ou alors,je sais!! Le titre est maintenant: "I'm here for your pleasure...Just fuck me already!" XD . J'assume donc que tu as vu le pauvre fanart?J'ai fais de mon mieux^^
Je vais essaier de faire mieux la prochaine fois!!
Author's Response: Oui, je l'ai vu et je l'aime. "I'm here for your pleasure... Just fuck me already!", c'est un bon compromis. :)
Date: 08/30/08 03:00 pm Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
ç_ç I want to cry.Bill's distress is killing me here.And now, I HATE TOM, yes I REALLY DO!!
Date: 08/30/08 02:50 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Shit! he's traumatized O_O Poor thing. And the thought of money calmed him?wow...That lets a lot to think about. Why isn't Tom as caring as bushido?Grrrr!
Date: 08/30/08 02:25 pm Title: "He seems smitten."
It's so cruel in a way,that Tom doesn't show any jealousy or something towards Bill. He doesn't take careof Bill or give him some "special" attention lika Bushido do. And we have no clue how he really feels.It's like he doesn't care or he didn't realize something yet? on the other hand, bushido is the romantic and a sweetheart,really.Poor bill,he's clinging in those little things tom wouldn't give him when sober?Sad
Date: 08/30/08 12:36 pm Title: "Just fuck me already!"
Whew! Pause.
I'm sorry I didn't review often but i was too caught up in the story! "Just fuck me already!" XD lol I was laughing when Bill came first.Again.
Je ne savais pas que tu(vous?) parles(ez) français^^!Couramment? C'est cool!Je croi que je vais changer le titre de mon fanart,peut être..."Just fuck me already" me semble plus approprié maintenant lol!!
Author's Response: Oui, je parle francais et c'est bien si tu changes le titre, lol.
Date: 08/30/08 11:48 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Wood
morrrrrre
Date: 08/30/08 09:58 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
oh man, Tom can't you just talk with Bill?
ne?
Date: 08/30/08 06:59 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
He should definately let Bushido fix him. (:
Date: 08/30/08 06:16 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Poor Bill D:
*pets*
Date: 08/30/08 04:40 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
poor bill. id write more for a review but im fdead tired. so great hob.
Date: 08/30/08 04:06 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
Great chapter Ö I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 08/30/08 02:16 am Title: "He's more trouble than he's worth."
bill you're so dumb
bushido loves u
can't u see?
this is the 1st story where i want bill to be with bushido
Date: 08/28/08 02:26 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Do you have some history in psychology? If not, then both of you are amazing; you hit the mark right no.
You're writing submerges me into the story that is "negotiable Affections" and leaves me wanting more.
Really you should publish this; the world deserves to experience your talent and skill.
Author's Response: Neither of us has any sort of background or formal experience in psychology. Most I've had is PSY 101, like every college student (though I'm also not the one of us who wrote the abuse scene). Froggy's the one who majors in the stuff. But thank you. ;)
Date: 08/26/08 02:05 am Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
Awww! D:
Next chapter now, please!
Date: 08/25/08 01:39 pm Title: "Are you a good little boy?"
may have cried a little? It broke my heart.
Poor billy, no wonder he doesn't trust anyone.