Date: 11/15/08 11:36 am Title: :: Chapter Eight ::
They both are totally insane in the chapter! But it did clear some things up.
Date: 11/14/08 06:44 pm Title: :: Chapter Eight ::
lol, Toms so stupid @ the moment xD
Date: 11/14/08 06:42 pm Title: :: Chapter Eight ::
xDDD this is great.
Date: 11/10/08 11:40 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
okay so you didn't kill the kid, but you're gonna deprive poor Tom of his dad..... o_O... WTH is up with that?!?! otherwise it is a good fic. and don't mind the questioning rant i'm just confused about what i read this last chapter. other than that i like how Death(Bill) rants about how Tom is all over the place... that made me laugh.
Date: 11/10/08 08:59 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
I might've... :3
OMG! Best two lines ever!!
"Yes! What did you think, you died and then came back to haunt the fuck out of people?"
And: "Isn't it kinda obvious? I'm Death." HAH!! Go Death-figure boy-Billa. :3 I luff joo...
Und ja, I'm totally gonna die and come back and haunt the crap out of people that ticked me off during high school - like, everyone. -.-;; But it'll be fine. :3 I'll just die young a famous so I can accomplish all that I need done. XDD
Whee... You have no idea how much ?I missed you! XDDD Well, you and the story. But mostly you. Well... Kinda. XD
Much luff to joo!!!
Date: 11/10/08 08:56 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
"Yes! What did you think, you died and then came back to haunt the fuck out of people?"
lol xD
he brought that lil boy back*.*
cool^^
Date: 11/10/08 06:27 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
Oh my, this really is a unique plot. And I have to say I like the story so far. Can't wait for more!
xx
Date: 11/10/08 06:04 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
haha, so bill is death?
nice. xD
But now jorg has to die?
Why doesn't bill pick someone else?
Great Update.
*added to favorites*
Date: 11/10/08 05:48 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
okay I have to admit.. this is a strange story.. verrrryyyy strange. it reminds me of Charmed. xD and you know what? I LOVE charmed!
And I love your strange story so please please update SOON!! x333
Date: 11/10/08 05:26 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
Thank god you didn't! I'm glad your back! I want more answers!
Date: 11/10/08 04:17 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
yay! an update...fina-fucking-lly. lol anyways im so glad you didnt kill of that little boy, though damn you for making me think for so long that he was dead. but i do really like this chapter. tom's way of speaking and grammar made me giggle. so polite. anyways im so glad they finally met. and i can't wait for another update!
Date: 11/10/08 03:34 pm Title: :: Chapter Seven ::
Wait, I thought you-Death said he'd let Tom's dad live!? Wassup with that!? Not that I WANTED the kid to die, but...Well whatever helps the story along. Since I have been waiting FOR EVER! For you to update! oh my gosh! I LOVE! where this story is going! so right now I am like SUPER DUPER DRUGGED UP HAPPY that you updated!! :D I can't wait for the next chapter!! Oh, and are you going to change the title to chapter 7? just asking :P ^^v
Date: 08/22/08 02:22 am Title: :: Chapter Three ::
I Love your story so far! And by the way, in the part where Officer Trumper had coffee in his hands Officer GELDMAN
snatched it. =^.^= but seriously I really like your story.
Date: 08/14/08 07:10 pm Title: :: Chapter Six ::
PLEASE update soon!!!!
i cant wait!!!!
Date: 08/03/08 03:17 pm Title: :: Chapter Six ::
T_T aww poor Tom id hate to see that id have nightmares n stuff more kid
Date: 07/28/08 06:12 am Title: :: Chapter Six ::
X_X SO SHORT
Date: 07/28/08 05:26 am Title: :: Chapter Six ::
so sweet story!!! ^__^
Date: 07/27/08 06:14 pm Title: :: Chapter Six ::
poor Tom having to witness a scene like that;/
are we there jet :P LOved to annoy my parents like that:D
Date: 07/27/08 06:08 pm Title: :: Chapter Five ::
geo's not gonna die too eh...
Author's Response: nooo way. george, with his silky mane and gorgeous face, is not going anywhere. ;)
Date: 07/27/08 05:19 pm Title: :: Chapter Six ::
I guess that boy did have to die, but you didn't have to kill a little kid. Is Tom's mom happy her husband woke up? Or dissappointed? How can Tom get to know Bill if he can't stay long? And why does he keep running into him? It that a forshadow for what's going to happen to him? Or is it just that Tom's surrounded by a lot of death?