Date: 03/27/15 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love your Author's Note at the end of this chapter. EVERYONE should recognize the lyrics to In Die Nacht or they should be slapped right out of this website!!
I LOVED this story!!! All of the amnesia stories I've read have been twincest so I quite enjoyed a gen fic where they have that amazing bond. I don't remember how I stumbled across this since I usually only read twincest but I'm so glad I read it and I just thought I'd leave a review telling you that. :)
Date: 04/09/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
Loved it :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading (and reviewing) :D
Date: 01/01/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
YAY! Happy ending! Now lemme go hit that 'Add Story to Favorites' button...
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 01/01/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 10
NOO! I WANT MORE! I NEED MORE!
Author's Response: Well at least now I know the amnesia thing didn't turn you off ;)
Date: 01/01/10 05:53 am Title: Chapter 5
THIS IS ORIGINAL! I haven't read one which does this yet! Congratulations!
Author's Response: Thank you (I think) :)
Date: 01/01/10 05:50 am Title: Chapter 4
When I read the DON'T DO NOT, I was confuzzled.
YAY! TORCHWOOD!
I have to check out that lullaby.
Poor Billa...But at least Tom's there to hold him.
Author's Response: That scene is without a doubt one of my favorites in the story, when my other beta was editing all of these he just had to add an "AWWWWW" note. hmmm....Don't Do Not? I'll have to back and try and find that.
Date: 01/01/10 05:46 am Title: Chapter 3
No Twincest? Thank God.
I really like how you finished out the chapter.
Author's Response: Well this is actually a continuation response from your review in the next chapter I found the "DON'T DO NOT" and have promptly done a headdesk. It should be something like "I DON'T NOT DO happy endings" which is a. a double negative and b. still a bit confusing; but I want it to be a bit confusing to keep you guys guessing as to where I'm going.
Date: 01/01/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok, for your author's note, you are not a bitch. I've said much worse to get reviews. I've gone to the point that I've calculated all the seconds in a f*ing day and pointed out just how many it would take to write a review.
Ok, for the story. The amnesia deal is slowly becoming unoriginal to me, this is the third or fourth story I've read with one of the twins having amnesia.
I can't full out say I dislike the amnesia storyline, I just have to see where you're going to take it.
Date: 01/01/10 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is a nice story!
On thing that had me confused and it is not the story it is just me thinking to hard is your banner for the story and if I seen that red shirt picture before or not or where is it from. lol
Thank you for posting the story.
Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnAs for the shirt I used an image I had of Bill where he looked sorta sad (had to tweak a few pixels so at least to my beta he looked sad). It's an old image from at least a year and a half ago, so unfortunately I don't remember anything about it, if I ever did.
Date: 11/19/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loverly as always! I like that you're ending this happily! It's nice to see non-sad endings to things, particularly when they're all emotional and shtuff like this story. EXCELLENT!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/09/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Loverly, as usual! Nice use of my suggestions, heehee, and of course, I'm still loving to hate Simone, more and more, but 'sall good. VURY NAIS!!
Date: 04/21/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
WOOO!!! I LOVES ME SOME UPDATES!! Loverly chapter as always. I like this chapter, actually. Cute ending. Tomi was so cute and adorabible. I like him like that, all cute and little-kid-like. Loverly!
WOO FOR NOT BEING CREATIVE AND MAKING A NEW REVIEW!!
Author's Response: *raise eyebrow* How is using the save review this time from the other times ;). But I still LOVE them. :D
Date: 03/16/09 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!!! WOOOOO!!!! I luzz updates~! This chapter was cute! I like how Tomi is willing to testify in court just so he can stay with Billa. Vury nais!
Date: 03/14/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm so sad for Bill and Tom in this story, but I think it would be damaging to Tom to take him away from Bill though. They are so close and if this was a real situation i really think that they should stay together, however this is just a story it you have a direction in mind. You have done really well with it and I can relate to Bill and how he feels about everything. Bill has always been the emotional one and I love authors who can show that in their stories without it being too overwhelming. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Bill's stuck between a rock and a hard place, he knows what he wants to do and what he should do, which fortunately is the same thing; but that doesn't make any of it any easier. As for Tom being taken away....let's put this way Simone is going to be in for one H*** of a fight
Date: 02/18/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
CUTE!!!!! *squeals* Like I said before, I don't shamelessly promote those I beta for! NOOOOOO!!! Not AT ALL!!! EL-OH-EL! But yeah! Cute! loverly! *Waits for updates*
Date: 02/18/09 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to admit, I have read some interesting fan fica, all with very original plot lines. But yours .. it is something I have never read before. Its a beautiful story. And I see where you tie into their actual lives with eachother. In reality, I can see them doing something like this for eachother. It has captured me in many ways and I am looking forward to the update as soon as you can.
Rachael
Date: 01/28/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay! I like this story a lot! It's cute and I haven't really read a nice gen-fic in a while. I am very interested to see where this leads. Keep up the good work!
BTW: I'm your Beta! I stupidly made my LJ a different name than this site's username, but whatever...So, don't worry if you don't see a cookieduck90 review here. My reviews and such will be from Ritsuka18 on here.
Author's Response: I started reading this and my response was "huh??? that's what cookieduck said" and then i continued reading so it makes sense now :), not that the lj I use is the same as my username either :D
Date: 08/19/08 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story very much! I'm really into twincest but I also adore really good stories just about their brotherly bond. Your doing an amazing job. I love the whole concept of Bill being Toms "life plug puller" lol or whatever the proper term is for it, right now I can't think of it.
But I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/19/08 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love this i ust started reading this aND i promise that i will be a frequent reader and im about to read it all again i liked it that much it sucha strong topic and such an oringonal idea and i think you bring out such strong emotions and write them down very well
this is very good
and i would be really greatful if you updated soon XD
i love this so much already
ly
xxx
Date: 07/20/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! Continue please. All I read are gen fics and there few and far between (I read a few het and slash by this one author, but thats it) This has my interest. I need to know how it plays out, my imagination isn't good with this kind of stuff. Please continue, and I hate that you shaved off his dreads, those things are his sexy LOL!
Author's Response: (dodges flying objects) I knew some would have issue with the dreads, but it had to be done, for symbolism, realism, and my own perverse need to see him with a new look :P, not to mention Tom's not going to very sexyish for well....that would be telling wouldn't it