Date: 01/18/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh my god!!!!!!!!
you need to update...like now!!
this is fucking HOT!!
pleassseeeeee....update!!
*gasps for air*
Date: 11/02/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
hot need more now hurry!
Date: 09/16/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
Linz, you horndog!
Hahah!
No, it's good though, write more!
I wanna know what's going on!
:D
And, I miss you, where you been?
xo
Date: 08/23/08 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
god, its amazing
xx
Date: 08/18/08 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Very much fun reading it. XD Thanks for a, uhh, yummy? indescribable? chapter. :D
Date: 08/16/08 04:25 am Title: Chapter 3
YAY! finally! haaa!
luuuvs it!, cnt wait for the next one C=
x
Date: 08/15/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really do love this story and was really happy to see it updated. This was a really good chapter and boy I can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/15/08 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
OH MY SMUTT!!!!
So worth the wait =D
Date: 08/10/08 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO!!! AWSM AWSM AWSM!! I love it.. nein nein nein I adore it! This is def. a cute story goin` on :P :P ... haha... this is so unlike bill... I mean being so... TOM .. so sexy and confident.. but whatever got into him i definitely LOVE IT (or him.. :? .... :]] )
love the chapter.. UPDATE SOON!! CAN`T WAIT!!!!!!!!!
wavez from earth!
Date: 08/08/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
oooooooo post more
Date: 08/06/08 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
IEEEEEEEEEE
LINZ IS A HORNDOG!
sorry :P
loved it :)
Date: 07/31/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story and because I have seen the video many times can see the whole set and everything, I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 07/27/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
post please
i want more bitte=^)
Date: 07/27/08 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2
=O so sexxyyyy
haha i love how you write!
please update soon!
Author's Response: Awwwh thank you, that is soooo sweet ^^
Date: 07/26/08 08:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow This is great. After I read the chapter, I check out Scream video on YouTube and I imagine the story. It's soo cool.
This has got to be one of the few het storys I read.
Author's Response: Awwwh thank you, I feel honoured. Well it's not aallll het, as you are about to find out ;) hehe ^^
Date: 07/25/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is promising. Looking forward to find out what Bill has in mind...
Author's Response: Yeah it will be rather interesting *wink wink* lol ^^
Date: 07/25/08 11:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh! i love this story! =]
i just read both chapters ....
but i cnt wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Awwwh thank u ^^ more is on the way !
Date: 07/24/08 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I feel loved lol. This is good so far, post more soon! xox
Author's Response: Awwwwh thank you ! Much love ^^
Date: 07/24/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
O.O ooooooo nice little cliffhanger you got there love... great job, even better than the last chapter!! gimme, gimme more, gimme more, gimme, gimme more... ^^
Author's Response: Danke ^^ I hope I can keep it up
