Date: 07/26/08 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
well that definitely cleared everything up, well most things at least. but boo, i wanted a bill and tom chapter. lol oh well this one was really good as well. cant wait for the update!
Author's Response: I'm glad it did, although some got confused =/...rnrnIt seems it's what everyone's waiting for, a Bill and Tom chapter xD...DW it's gonna come sooon =PrnrnI'm glad you like =]rnrnThanks for r&r and Stay tuned xD
Date: 07/26/08 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well I am definitely less confused on somethings, but you've brought up a bit more of course.
First of all I was a bit confused at the use of the name 'Tom' in this chapter. When Ben was speaking with Gordon he said that Gordon was busy shagging Tom and then you said he had a baby named Tom and then I was confused who exactly Tom was...
Also there was absolutely no Bill in this chapter! How could you leave me with all those questions from his last encounter with Tom and all that jazz?!
*sniffle* meanie
Author's Response: It seems all I do is bring more confusion =SrnrnYes, Gordon used to have a secret boyfriend called Tom, Ben had walked in on them shagging, thus resulting why Gordon hated Ben, as Ben could have exposed to him to everyone.rnrnGordon had been in love with this Tom, and managed to get Anna to agree to name their son, Tom for his lover back in his school days. So there are two Toms.rnrnWell, I know no Bill, this is like the first chapter I ever wrote which doesn't contain Bill anywhere...I still can't believe I did that =/... And dw, you'll find out soon xDrnrni guess I can own that title...for now =P
Date: 07/26/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hummmm this explains alot. But still, I need more details as to why Tom knew Bill.
Author's Response: Well, I wanted to give this out, so no more confusion erupted, but some still got confused it seems :S...rnrnOh, well Stay tuned..next chapter is juicyyy =P
Date: 07/26/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
ok... maybe I'm just to stupid but you really lost me in this chapter. Ben is the guy for whom Bill works right? And Anna is Tom's mom right? The Tom that in the 3rd chapter was with Bill, right? The time is just so confusing to me... Who was Gordon shaging? Another Tom becouse it's just so strnge. Are there two Tom's, like the child Tom and Tom with Bill? Sorry for all the questions it's just so strage. Is Ben at the end thinking about Gordon when he said that he joined Fatun? And than later on talking about Tom as in shunned by classmates? I think I nearly got it, a little more thinking and I'll be on the right way I guess.
Do write some more. I'd like to know about Tom's reaction to Bill's name before he passed out. What will happen now? Do they know each other?
Anyway love the story :D
Author's Response: Well, I'll answer what I can xD...rnrnYes, Ben is the guy that gave Bill a home and work.rnAnna is Tom's mom.rnIn this chapter there are two Toms. Gordon was shagging one of his friends back at the boarding school, named Tom. He then called his first born for the guy he had been in love with.rnYes, Ben was thinking about his hate for Gordon, and then about how Tom got shunned by classmates, given his father.rnrnI hope that you understood now =]rnrnI'm glad you like this =D...Stay tuned & you'll know =P
Date: 07/26/08 01:52 am Title: Chapter 3
This has been my favorite chapter so far. Sorry I would write more but I am really tired, so next chapter I will tell you more of what I think.
Date: 07/25/08 09:32 am Title: Chapter 3
can't wait for the next chap... hehe...
xoxo
Date: 07/25/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 3
o_O wtf!! Why does Tom know Bill?? =_= more! :)
Date: 07/24/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
*Awww, that video-taping thing with his sister is adorable :)
*Jenny was pregnant? :O And Jenny died :(
*Well at least I tried.
-> he tried indeed.
*They know each other! (Bill forgot because of his amnesia, and Tom just didn't recognize him, it all fits!)
Nice chapter!
Date: 07/24/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
*Poor Bill, but it's better than a life on the street.
*Ben, you should thank Bill for saving your club!
*Tadadaaaa...and there is : TOM !
*Hotness, Bill and Tom making out :)
Date: 07/23/08 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
How dare you make me dance like a crazy person in front of my friends... Oh wow I was so excited about having a chapter dedicated to me. I had just randomly noticed an update and...well imagine my surprise!
Anyway onto what I thought of the chapter: You wound up a lot of suspense over Bill's entire family situation and how Tom knw his name. And you probobly left quite a few people unhappy since there was no smut, but wither way this story just has me on my toes!
Uh I was a bit confused on the video though, is there like underlying meaning to his 'angel' comments? I thought after awhile it was just because they were very close, but then I was confused about the 'save me from darkness' things...Of course knowing you it'll probobly come out in a later chapter.
The only thing is with the back flashes too his sister and old life, it seemed like the chapter was going extremly fast paced. Which might or might not be a good thing depending on how you're planning for this story to unfold.
Just wow...thanks for the dedication...wow...
Author's Response: I didn't know you'd dance like crazy in front of your friends xD...So it's not really my fault :PrnrnOHHH Smut will come...but it's still not the time imo...And I well...I love leaving cliffs =D...i guess you noticed XDrnrnAll the questions, as you came to conclusion will come out in later chapters. It's gonna be taller than 5 chapters, 'cause when I finished it, i saw that balance was completely off...so there'll be more than 5 chapters to fit everything...rnrnThe flashes and all, I wanted that it goes a bit fast, but we'll be thrown back to the time...just you wait and see :PrnrnI'm glad you liked the dedication xD...And you got me hyper again...especially with the dancing thing...since I was just head banging and um...pretending to be Tom xD and sometimes Georg...I love to do it XD...
Date: 07/23/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG! This is cuuttee. Lol you should keep going. I'm really getting into it...in a non-negative way. haha.
Date: 07/23/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow, I really like this story : DD okey, I'm from Finland so I didn't understand it ALL, but I still liked it : DD
Date: 07/23/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Hey... what's happened after??? So Tom knew the Kaulitz's family I guess... I like Jenny, but it's sad that she's dead.
Date: 07/23/08 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, your story seems really special^^. I like the way you're telling it ;). And Tom was just hilarious, too drunk to notice that Bill was hard --'.
Date: 07/22/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is amazing. I love the way you make bill think. Keep up the amazing work I add this to my favorites love it
Date: 07/21/08 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love this storyy!
Date: 07/20/08 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
ack! what happens??????
xD
Date: 07/20/08 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: I'm glad =]rnrnDW I have it all written but it depends on response how frequently I update...rnrnStay tuned ;]