Date: 02/27/20 07:14 am Title: Chapter 5 - Teenage kicks, right through the night
Loved it!
Date: 02/27/20 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4 - Tell me baby, are you coming with me?
Loved it!
Date: 02/25/20 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3 - I'll Kiss You
Loved it!
Date: 02/25/20 11:09 am Title: Chapter 2 - We keep feelin' this urge to touch
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Date: 02/25/20 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
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Date: 07/19/15 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Re-reading the series and I was wondering if the letter he writes her at the end, if I imagined you having revealed what was in it? It's killing me, but going through 4 Years now, wondering if I really just made that up, but I was sure you posted what he wrote, since he wanted her to open it 4 years later.
Date: 01/17/13 05:32 am Title: Chapter 54 Sweet dreams, baby
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 10/18/12 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
that was great, as much as i didn't think i was going to like it when i first started to read, i got hooked and ended up really enjoying it. i'm going to read four years now. :)
also can i just say, i love that she was English, not many people write about English girls in stories and, being an english fan myself it really stood out to me, oh wait i said that before.
there's one more thing i need to ask, you said you wrote some chapters again from Bill's point of view for another part of the story and i was wondering, does that include the bit after he and his girlfriend have their row, he runs away to lock himself in the bathroom and begs her to fetch Tom? I hope it does, i have a strange urge to know what was said.
Anyway, you did a great job and you'll probbably hear from me many more times as i read through the other stories in your series.
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Hi again :) Thanks so much for reading and for all the reviews you have left. Sorry I haven't responded to them all but I read every one and enjoyed your comments.rnrnI haven't written anything mor about Bill's conversation with Tom in that chapter, but I will certainly think about itrnrnI was pleased to hear the story won you over, despite your misgivings :D I haven't posted anything for quite some time, but it makes me want to open all those unfinished chapters I have languishing!rnrnBye for now ;)
Date: 10/18/12 11:47 am Title: Chapter 71 Seven Days
I loved it and i loved that Tom was there too, it added to the sweetness, i loved when he kissed her and promised to take care of Bill for her.
I loved the image of him just standing there in the corner holding onto his poor distraught brother whom i pictured to be nearly unconsolable as he watched his girl leave. I honestly think its something Tom would do, sometimes i think his whole "tough-guy" image is just for the fans.
It was such a sweet moment and talking of sweet moments, the ring... AWWW! :)
i really really like this story.
Date: 10/18/12 11:18 am Title: Chapter 68 Snow Angel
i'm gonna be really frank here and i'm sorry but how on earth does she ever expect to be able to leave him when she keeps giving him what he wants and vice versa, surely it'll be a million times harder.
Date: 10/18/12 11:06 am Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
oh my god that was so *snifs* i felt for him, i felt for both of them it was just so...
Date: 10/18/12 10:45 am Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
oh my god hahahahaha he wants to tell Tom that she... i'm not sure they should share that hahahahaha! What if he gets jealous and wants to come over and play too? Wait... did i just say that? OMG! i'm sorry lol
Date: 10/18/12 10:18 am Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
oh my god can i slap the taxi driver? sheesh! he was rather funny with his little Tokio Hotel jokes lame as they were, i won't list his comments but wow he was lame :) tho i did love "No no sing, sing the song and i give you free ride!" XD
so pleased they made-up :)
Date: 10/18/12 10:06 am Title: Chapter 62 Walk, don't walk Talk, don't talk
oooh she spat in her face, i think thats a serious over-reaction on her part or maybe i've just grown up, i used to get really upset about stuff like that when i was sixteen, seventeen but now i think there are so many more important things in the world than whether Bill has a girlfriend or not, it doesn't change how dedicated a fan i am. perhaps that kid was only really young though
Date: 10/18/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter 61 - What do you want?
oh my gosh i feel so sorry for Tom right now, this situation must be really hard for him, after everything it must feel like that woman is taking Bill away from him. that was so emotional, i literally "awwed" out loud.
i feel a sudden overwhelming urge to take him home and give him a hug :)
okay now on to the woman, i can feel for her too, she was already feeling pretty conflicted in terms of her relationship with Bill and now Tom goes and does that. now not only does he have to deal with leaving but leaving with a slightly guilty conscience.
i think Tom wants her too even though he knows he shouldn't and worse i think there's a tiny part of her that feels the same. i'm not saying she loves Bill any less because you can see she does but i do think she feels for Tom because they're so alike.
this just got so awkward, i wouldn't like to be her right now.
love it.
Date: 10/18/12 09:24 am Title: Chapter 60 Where are you going?
at least we still have Tom XD!
Date: 10/18/12 09:13 am Title: Chapter 58 Out to lunch - Pt.2
They hugged... and they're not drunk lol Aww yay!!
Date: 10/18/12 09:01 am Title: Chapter 56 Out to lunch
i loved that, the pizza stain confession... hilarious,
the hotel room Bill booked... hilarious, ( i agree with her, i'm all for turfing people out on the grounds that Bill is famous HA!)
saying that i think that woman in perhaps a tad ungrateful, i mean Bill just got her really cool designer shoes FOR FREE and all she did was complain about how she'd never be able to walk in them. i'm sorry i just love shoes and shoes from Bill are just something that would give me heart failiure but she seems totally calm. lol anyway, i'll carry on reading now. :)
Date: 10/18/12 08:02 am Title: Chapter 55 Sign here!
ha ha, he stole the quilt! :)
I couldn't review this chapter without mentioning how much i loved the part where Bill gives the little girl an autograph.
it was just "signs book with dirt message and then realises the girl is about 11...signs clean message. Little girl is happy" and i'll send you a picture from Tom. *insert little girl squeal* XD
Date: 10/18/12 07:32 am Title: Chapter 52 - Recurring Dream
aww that was so emotional and sweet, i almost cried when he did lol