Date: 10/06/08 01:12 am Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
You are a delightful author. You have wonderful wit. I found myself laughing out loud and caring about these characters. You have excellent dialogue between them as well. Never boring or expected! The sex scenes are really hot. Please finish the story. I can’t bear to think they don’t end up together happily ever after? :)
Date: 10/05/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 13 Biff, bang, pow!
haha xD 'biff,bang,pow'. makes me think of thaifood.
Date: 10/05/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
this story is so wickedly awesome! I absolutely love it! you have the ability to make your readers really horny ;3
Date: 10/04/08 01:57 am Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
ok the sooner you get the more chapters the better
you see ?
i give you cookies
rolo cookies
xoxoxox
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-TOKIOHOTELROCKS123
Date: 10/03/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 - I'll Kiss You
Again, good story.
Date: 10/03/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 - We keep feelin' this urge to touch
Whoa. that was hot! lol! The story is great, I wonder what happens now...
Date: 10/03/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
Oh, that's embarrassing! Lol!
Date: 09/10/08 04:35 am Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
No don't stop there moooooore!!! xxx
Date: 09/03/08 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
I think I ran out of superlatives for reviewing this story.
I'll keep it nice and short: Damn, woman, you sure know how to write PWP!
Date: 08/31/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
what happens?? lol
Date: 08/13/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
omg! I love this story! It's the one of THus!!! That has A LOT more chapters though O_O
Still love it. **hugs miss r**
Date: 08/13/08 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
THIS IS ONE HOT FANFIC, just a question how much older is she suppose to be? i am only wondering MORE PLZ
Date: 08/12/08 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
cliff hanger...ish lol
Date: 08/08/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
GAH! please post more soon, i have my suspicions but i'm probably wrong. do the right thing and confirm them!
Date: 08/07/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
post more
Date: 08/06/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
*That 69 was hot!
*What will she do? I'm curious!
I like fics with mention of fanfics :)
Date: 08/06/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 14 - I promise you'll like it
*“Why are you wearing Tom's t-shirt?”
"Why do you think?”
“Oh. Yes. Sorry. Oops.”
-> lol xD
*Aww, that's so sweet of Bill :)
haha, the noises the others are making, funny :P
*“I've never known anyone...”
"Yes?” He looks hopeful somehow.
“Who could make me come quite as quickly as you can.
-> whahaha xD
*Oh God, Bill can get a girl so horny!
Nice chap!
Date: 08/06/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
God! This was really hot! Every single chapter! I don't know whether I should feel guilty for enjoying it so much, but to be honest, I really do! And I have a good time reading it! Please go on, I don't find it obscene in any way, I myself have such a detailed scene in my fic and I have been judged by some readers, but yours is just nice! Please write more, I can feel there are feelings there and delicacy of both main characters was much appreciated!
Author's Response: Thanks! Just think of it as a guilty pleasure if you will :)rnrnAnd thank you for your comment on the main characters. rnrnI will be sure to find time to read your story some time soon x
Date: 08/06/08 04:06 am Title: Chapter 13 Biff, bang, pow!
OH MY GOD!
amazing keep writing
please!
=D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/01/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 13 Biff, bang, pow!
*Woops! :P That fan grabbed Tom's hat :O
*Oh no, she threw up on Bill :s
Funny, Gustav's phone conversation versus Tom's :)
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thx, I love your reviews! :)