Date: 12/18/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
OMG i laughed so hard at the end bit, i could see it so plainly in my head and it was hilarious, i have already read the whole story but im reading it again cos ITS THAT GOOD you rock!!
Date: 12/18/08 11:18 am Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
The taxi part made me laugh and fall of my chair. LOLZ! Hilarious! And the kissing the cock part was funny as well. Heheh!
Date: 12/17/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 62 Walk, don't walk Talk, don't talk
*That love-making is breath-taking, it's so full of emotions.
*At moments like this, he needs his Tomi :) It's adorable.
*:O Bill is crazy, running through that traffic
*That fan is so rude! :O *is shocked*
*"Just in case you changed your mind..."
-> lovely end line for this chapter :)
Author's Response: Haha! You really have had a marathon session of reading and reviewing! Thanks! :)
Date: 12/17/08 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 61 - What do you want?
*This is SO touching!
All those things Tom sad..
This chapter is so different from all to others, and yet it fits in so perfectly.
I don't have words for it.
Waw.
Date: 12/17/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 60 Where are you going?
*"I want... I want you to marry me."
-> :O How sweet :D
Well, they're staying in the honeymoon sweet after all..
Date: 12/17/08 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 59 A simple plan
*"You know, see if they make you tall enough for a comfortable stand up fuck!"
-> such a horny boy! :P
*"Have you not heard anything I've said about how uncomfortable they are?"
"And did you not hear me saying I don’t care?"
-> *grins*
*Don't feel so pressured, he doesn't mean it like that.
*"Do you think you could untie me?" -> Nah, let's keep him tied up :P
*"Have you got scissors?"
"Yeah sure, in my jeans pocket, I carry them with me all the time."
-> sarcasm much? :p
*Nothing wrong with a nice, simple fuck :)
*"Achtung, Achtung..."
-> Well, well... ;)
Date: 12/17/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 58 Out to lunch - Pt.2
*"Well, if you stayed here with me, instead of insisting on going home, then maybe you would."
-> Bill! Don't say something like that! :O That hurts!
*That was nicely sorted :)
*"Well, I didn't want to tell you, because I knew you wouldn't take it well..."
-> Okay, everything thing that followed made me laugh more and more, I cracked up! xD
*What a sweet present :)
*I don't like goodbyes :(
Date: 12/17/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 57 On the pull
*"Do you want to know how much I care?""I don't care at all.""Not one... little... bit." At the last sentence he undoes his belt and trousers and takes out his cock.
-> Bill is pretty horny if you ask me :P
*"Are you alright? You've gone a bit pale."
-> that's not hard (no pun intended) when her corset is pulled so tight :P
*"So... are you ready for some lunch?"
-> like nothing happened :P
Date: 12/17/08 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 56 Out to lunch
*I'm doubled up with laughter
-> me too! (almost) :P
*"JOST!! You thought we got MARRIED?!?!”
-> baahaaa !
*"Because I've booked us in to the Honeymoon Suite!"
-> haha! no way! :D NICE !
*Haha, kick the others out, that would've been something :P
*Nice, dinner with the 5 of them :)
Yay! choosing each others outfits :)
*“I CANNOT WEAR A PVC CORSET AND CROTCHLESS PVC PANTIES TO LUNCH!”
-> whahaha! You got to be kidding me! xD
*“Bill, you look like some kind of overgrown kinky schoolboy! And yes. I like.”
-> hihi xD Zexy :P
*OMG ! The shoes! Wahaha!
*He really thought about the shoes ;) Horny kid ^^ :P
*Uncomfortable outfit? :P
Funny chapter!
Date: 12/17/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 55 Sign here!
*Sweet, he's dressing her :)
*Tssk Bill, where are your manners? :P
*< cough > "Ahem..." < cough > The landlady is standing in the doorway.
-> hahah xD funny!
*:D The grand daughter, that was to be expected :D
*Bahahah! No way! Crazy Bill! xD
*"I took the patchwork quilt off the bed."
-> kinda cute :)
*Sleep tight Bill :)
Date: 12/17/08 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 54 Sweet dreams, baby
*I was waiting for something like that, Bill calling Tom :)
*So tired, little Bill :)
*"Is it OK if we don't..."
"What?!" I look back at him in mock horror. "NO!"
-> wahahah xD
*Nice dream analysis:)
*"And I think I've changed my mind. We need to say goodbye to this bed properly!"
-> horny kids! :P
Date: 12/17/08 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 53 Eureka!
*"Make love to me. Show me how much you love me. I need to know. I need to feel it."
-> that's so sweet that it makes me tear up.
*"Don't cry." That smile flashes at me again. "I know you love me." He rolls me onto my back and kisses over my face. "I know."
-> that's so f***ong sweet!
*"I'm looking for your spot..." He's slightly embarrassed. "Your G-spot."
-> Bill being embarrassed about it is cute :)
*But up till now it's all been theory. Now I get to put it into practice..."
-> sounds good ;)
*"Bill... I think you found it."
-> Lovely! First she's getting all tensed up, and doesn't want Bill touching her anymore, but he insists, and then he finds her spot :)
*So hot! Both climaxing very hard!
*Great, Bill didn't know he had a G-spot too, this is going to be interesting... :)
Date: 12/17/08 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Recurring Dream
*That text she wrote almost made me cry. It's so beautiful!
*"Make love to me."
-> that's the perfect end line for this chapter!
Lovely!
Date: 12/17/08 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 51- Silent night? Holy night...
*"You can unwrap me later :D
*Lovely playlist :)
*Sweet, Bill kept a diary too :)
*She keeps distracting him with sex :P
*I so LOVE the fun facts of BK, nice changes :P xD
*Nice knickers :) Bill, buy me some undies too *grins*
*I believe he's driving her crazy, what a tease!
*"Don't stop... Suck my cock... Suck it and tongue it till I can't take any more... But don’t let me come... Take me to the very edge... But don't let me come... Not yet..."
-> God, that's hot!
*OMG ! This chapter almost made me come on the spot!
Damn! Never read a story this hot!
Date: 12/17/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 50 Flick of the Switch
*The mood swings are kinda cute :)
Dinner outside, how romantic :)
*Ja! Presents :D
Lovely!
Date: 12/17/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 49 Can't cook, wont cook
* Of course! Their dinner! Completely forgot about that, and so did they :P
*Haha Bill, “Hey, I’ve had fingers up there.”, sure, sooo not the same :P
*“And you know what I said about there being no more fancy undies in the bag?”
I nod. “I lied.” -> yay! :D
*Nice, a whole basket of food :)
*“Just stop arguing and get on with the dinner woman.”
-> I so want to hear him say that :P
Date: 12/17/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 48 Double Fantasy
*I want such a hoodie too :)
*That's such a fucking hot line!
*Damn! That was HOT !!
* * is curious about the burning*
Date: 12/15/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 62 Walk, don't walk Talk, don't talk
i wont them to get married!!!!
Date: 12/13/08 02:09 am Title: Chapter 62 Walk, don't walk Talk, don't talk
I seriously love this story. it's so sweet and painful all at once.
Date: 12/12/08 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 62 Walk, don't walk Talk, don't talk
Aaawwww...plz update soon!