Date: 12/31/08 07:44 am Title: Chapter 70 - Perfect
hot
Date: 12/29/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
Awe, I'm like crying.. It was so sad and beautiful. I wish, they could be together :(
Amazing story. Please don't let it be the end..
Love,
Sammeh
Date: 12/29/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
Wow.. This was good, like REALLY good. This was so true and well, it just hit me hard, like reality does sometimes. My reality.
Thank you for writing this amazing story, which in some ways is such a perfect picture of my life.
Date: 12/29/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
This chappie is amazing. So full of emotions.
Hopefully the ending leads to something special in the future.
Date: 12/29/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
Oh so sad yet so sweet. Dont let this be the end please. This is such a romantic yet sad and a whirlwind of a relationship that is suck in Bill and (Wow we dont even know her name yet. Get craken on that please) and the readers. Just keep going. Maybe have it to where they do seperate and years later he comes back and fines her married to some other guy with a son named Bill or something. But it could also go the other way and have it be to where they leave and then he comes back (or she comes back) and then they live happy ever after. It could go both ways and both would be a good ending. Or you come up with something on your own and have that be the ending. I dont know. As long as it isnt something super cheesy and cliche. Well you could do the cliche just make it really good when writing it, I have now relized I have rambled so... I have really enjoyed reading this so far. It really keeps you on your seat and waiting for the next chapter. Good job.
Date: 12/29/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
AWWWWWWWWWW!
Date: 12/25/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 15 A.D.I.D.A.S.
We still dont know whst her name is or what she looks like. Its harder to picture this because we dont have a discription tho compare to the one in our mind and we dont have a name to put to the picture.
Author's Response: I'm sorry there is not enough description of the OFC for you - I hope it doesn't put you off from reading further :) I like to think that the reader can be closer to her by putting their own vision into the story. Maybe we can all then put a bit of ourselves in the mix :))
Date: 12/25/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2 - We keep feelin' this urge to touch
Hey we still dont know her name. Whats her name?
Date: 12/23/08 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
lol
thank you. i got your e mail :)
i'm on it now!!!
THANKS!!
x
Date: 12/22/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 51- Silent night? Holy night...
nice and rough, and also on the playlist there's a song, cassie vs teddybears. have you downloaded that from anywhere, cuz i keep trying but in vein, it can not be found :(
Author's Response: http://www.divideandkreate.com/rnrnOn the remixes page, it's called "Cassie Bear" - In fact I'd download everything there :)
Date: 12/21/08 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
wow oO that was so sexi hexi
Date: 12/20/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
*Sexy times in the tub :P
*First doing their homework :P Just great, papers and all :P
*"Lotion? What's that for? In case I have a sudden attack of dry skin mid-fuck?" xD
*I just love that guide :P
*The papers drop to the side of the bed, he lets out a long, low, moan and his hands fly up and he covers his face.
-> she found it!
*His orgasm was pretty intense I guess.
*"Amazing... just... I love you... amazing... I can’t wait to tell Tomi... he'll be so jealous..."
-> typical Bill :P
Nice chapter!
Date: 12/20/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
glad you made more chapters, hope you will add more soon, looking forward to it .
Date: 12/20/08 01:42 am Title: Chapter 29 Take me with you
love your story, maybe a stupid question but how old is she??....i read in all the chapters that she is older..
Date: 12/19/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
oh wow hot
Date: 12/19/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
wow - amazing - and truly OK
The new, more suitable banner is beautiful!
Date: 12/19/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
DAMN IT!!!! OH you're killing me here! I ADORE THIS STORY!!!! *BLOWS KISSES* THANK YOU!
Date: 12/18/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
OOOoooh I anticipate the coming smut fest!
Date: 12/18/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
i love this chapter- so funny! lol but i'm so sad that they only have 24 hours leftttttt =[
Date: 12/18/08 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 63 Cab for Cutie
*I just LOVE that taxidriver :D
*"Do you think we can make love for 24 hours?" -> sweet :)
*"Are you implying that I smell?" haha :P
*Ooh, you crazy little Bill :D His actions always make me laugh :)
Nice chapter :!
PS: I really had fun reading an reviewing yesterday :) I didn't have time lately, but yesterday I decided I HAD to read your story further ;)