Date: 01/03/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 67 - Love hurts Pt 2 (Ouch!)
*It was all so loving and sweet, and then all of a sudden, Bill kicks out. xD LOL xD
*"Are you alright to carry on now?" -> Great, just continue like nothing's happened :P
*That sex seemed pretty intense.
*I like Bill's demand, wanting her to scream his name.
Date: 01/03/09 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
This is so painful, but so true. It made me cry.
WAW.
You really are a great writer, this chapter is so touching, I can't find the words to describe it. It's just wonderful!
Date: 01/03/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 65 - While you were sleeping
"Oh..." He pouts in disappointment. "You're not ready..."
-> Haha! LOL, Bill really thinks a girl is wet any time or what? :P
*Bill is such a TEASE ! :P I'd start begging too I guess.
*That was hot! And I think the 'tell me' part is just sweet! :)
Nice chapter!
Date: 01/02/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
thank you for such a PERFECT ENDING!!!
thank you!!
happy new year to you too!!!
Author's Response: I worried about not getting the ending right - I'm glad you liked it :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/02/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Awwww....it's so sad, but yet, it's such a perfect ending. Will you make a sequel since he promised to check up on her five years after didn't he? It was a good story. =D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/02/09 05:03 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
OMG!
I cried at the end... I didn't expect that... I didn't want to cry... You've written it so good...
And I must say... I LOVE YOUR HUMOR! I laughed, I cried, I sobbed, I giggled, I blushed and most of all I fell in love with this story... I've read it in two or three days... and it was worth it... :)
One of the best HET I've ever read.
Thank you for writing it...
ow and... Bill's g-spot... I think his whole body is one big g-spot... becouse if not... I don't know how he could wear such tight clothes... he must like it for some reason:DD
It was very educational... I need to try some of this things ;)))
It was nice to read this,
I wish a happy new year to you too,
sour_cherry
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you for reading this :) People always mention crying but I love when people laugh too. And you're right, Bill is a human G-spot - A K-spot if you will! Happy New Year to you too sour_cherry - I'll be updating DD soon... xxx
Date: 01/01/09 08:24 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
NOOOOO!!!! You're aware of the fact that you'll HAVE to make a part 2 of this story right? 'Cause I wanna know what's in that letter Bill gave to her?!
Anyways: THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! This has been AMAZING. God, you're talented!!!
Thank you for bringing me on this journey and writing this fantastic story, I love the plot !!!
Hugs
Author's Response: Thank you for the great compliments. And yes, I know... part 2 is in the works! *hugs back*
Date: 01/01/09 05:18 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
omg what a way to end a wonderfull story! well done!
xx
Author's Response: Thank you! x
Date: 01/01/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Shit. I'm a wreck. I felt my heart breaking along with theirs η__η
It's over... The first and last het fic I've ever read...
Please, write a five-years-later-sequel?!
We HAVE to know what was written in the letter! And I KNOW they'll find each other again!
Bitte... T_T
By the way, I really loved this. It ws a truly amazing story. Thanks.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you FeNice - I hope it's not the last het fic you read, if I write another one! I'm glad you loved it :)
Date: 12/31/08 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Awe, that's it. IT can't be over, I love this story.
Fatastic job. It was wonderful :)
Can't wait for your next story, if you plan to continue ;)
Best regards and have a fab Happy New Year!!
~Sammeh
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 12/31/08 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
So I gathered my review notes to the last couple of chapters:
From my review of chapter 66: "Hopefully the ending leads to something special in the future."
This still definitely counts.
- I mean, chapter 68, about the letter she mustn't open to read until 5 year later, even a promise she makes him.
- Chapter 70 - The last word being "Forever"
- Chapter 71 - giving her a ring, he designed himself - a future promise I say!!
- Chapter 72 - too cute, eventhough they're not together!
- Your Chapter end note: "And what's next...? I couldn't possibly say ;)"
Or maybe you could, but you won't. Otherwise, I think I just presented the evidence, that this will continue *hope* some way or another! Maybe not a new story, but at least another chapter that takes us about 5 years into the future. I need to know if they meet again and continue their relationship.
Explanation/Clarification needed!!
Last but not least: Prost Neujahr!
Author's Response: MarieCaroline, I kinda wish I had the heart to leave it there - but I don't ;). You'll see them again, I couldn't let them be! :)
Date: 12/31/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
I loved this story I wish there was a sequel like if they meet again or something.
Author's Response: Thank you angelgurl010, and... there is a sequel :)
Date: 12/31/08 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
OH MY GOD! I sit here brokenhearted for both of them. Thank you! I loved this story. Happy New Year Love. All the best of wishes, AilisHatake (Kristen Hogan)
Author's Response: Thank you Kristen :) They'll get over their broken hearts...
Date: 12/31/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
happy new year. aw its over
Author's Response: I know - I still can't quite believe it myself... :)
Date: 12/31/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
What about the letter. What did the letter say. You know what you could continue this from here. You could add in the letter and then have her throw up and it turns out she is pregnant. I mean after having sex that often it wouldnt be unrealitic to have something happen. Or you can keep it like it is. Just an idea. Really good job.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you for thinking so hard about what might happen next! :)
Date: 12/31/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
No, thank YOU!
Author's Response: lol, you're welcome :)
Date: 12/31/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 71 Seven Days
awwwwwwwwwwwww
Date: 12/31/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Perfect
η_η
I can't believe how much I cry every time I read a chapter of this story...
I love it, really.
I'd like it to never end, though I'm curious to see how it will.
Wonderful
Author's Response: Don't cry :)
Date: 12/31/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
This is my absolute most favourite chapter of all the chapters of ANY story I have ever read.
Author's Response: Wow, that is an amazing thing to hear, thank you so much x
Date: 12/31/08 09:58 am Title: Chapter 67 - Love hurts Pt 2 (Ouch!)
AHHAHAHAHAHA hot!