Date: 02/03/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Tell me baby, are you coming with me?
ha that horny 18 year old....ha
Date: 02/03/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - I'll Kiss You
o wow..in the lift?kinda kinky
Date: 01/25/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
i loved it, you kept me up to 4 AM reading it... well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the late night :))
Date: 01/25/09 02:34 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Wow...
I think my heart broke a little with this. Honestly, I could FEEL what they were feeling at the end..and in the last chapter. It was beautiful in all of it's sorrow.
I'm very impressed. This was good. I loved it all.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you :) I'm kinda glad I managed to make your heart break a little - if you see what I mean :))
Date: 01/16/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
thiz is my favorite story of them all, im sure that Bill would be like thiz in a relationship where he is comfortable. but hey u never describes his cock tho lmao, is it big thick well u kno lmao, great job, thiz story made me cry so much by the way, it was like me going thru it.
Date: 01/15/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
"We're not together. We love each other. That's it.” - *tear*
It was beautiful. The sex, sex, SEX was awesome erotic and amazing. But it ended wrong. It’s just so wrong. They were too right for each other to not be able to be together. She didn’t even try. She made me soooo mad! She was right about a lot of things but she didn’t let him try. I’m all broken…this is worse then character death and that’s a big insult from me! I still love you and I’m glad you’re writing +4 Jahre because if you weren’t I think I may have to stop calling you my cousin…Ok no I wouldn’t stop calling you my cousin, but you know you made me cry…I love missed connections only when they get together in the end. If they don’t then it’s just not fun. *crosses arms over chest and pouts*
Author's Response: Pout all ya like - that's how it had to end, you know it's true :)) Thank you for all your mammoth reviews i_is xxxxx ;)
Date: 01/15/09 01:38 am Title: Chapter 71 Seven Days
We make love in silence. I can feel his tears mixing with mine as our faces touch.
We come together and my heart is breaking.
Broken. – I hate this why are you doing this?!
Without me saying a word, he understands. He puts his hand on my shoulder then, with a gesture identical to his twin, he pushes my hair behind my ear and smiles. "Don’t worry, you'll be fine.” – No she won’t *tears up*
As I turn the corner to disappear from view I catch a final sight of him, fallen into Tom's arms. – oh! *tears continue to roll down my cheek* It hurts! Make it stop!
Exactly seven days ago he showed me some sketches of jewellery he'd designed. I remember singling out one piece in particular.
A ring.
And it's here in my hand. – That’s sweet a parting gift.
Date: 01/15/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 70 - Perfect
"Yes! I've still got the bottle!!" - *giggles* he would!
"A STRAP ON! YOU HAVEN'T FUCKED ME UP THE ASS WITH A STRAP ON!" - *shakes with giggles* I would have loved that one!! *squeals*
Suddenly his tongue drags across my clit and I scream out loud, covering my face with my hands as he starts to lap at me, probing inside then flicking my clit again and again. He uses his tongue stud to great effect, circling it around, the hard metal in contrast to the softness. – mmmmhhh!
I'm part of him and he's part of me
Forever. - *sigh* *sad face and a pout*
Date: 01/15/09 12:17 am Title: Chapter 69 Can't explain
"It's all your fault! Rock stars don't come in their pants!"- *giggles at the thought*
We break apart for a moment and stare into each other, sharing a thousand unspoken thoughts with just one look, then he holds me tight to him and I close my eyes. – *sighs* It’s just sad!
Date: 01/14/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 68 Snow Angel
He sits back down and pulls me onto his lap. "Here." He holds the flap of the envelope for me to lick then he seals it shut. "See this date?" He writes today's date down, but changes the year. "You can't open it until this date." – do we ever get to read this letter?! This is one of the unfinished things about this story that has been driving me ~CRAZY~
He laughs, hugging me . "Don't worry! It'll be good for my reputation. I need a change!" – he fucks that over later doesn’t he?!
You turn me on so much...
You can make me hard in instant, just with a look...
Even when you're not looking at me... when I see you... I want you...
I want you all the time...
I'm always thinking of what we could do...
What I want to do...
Like now..."
He takes my hand and guides it to feel his hard on. It's straining against the rough fabric of his jeans, and I automatically start to rub it. He muffles another groan…- OMG this is the kind of stuff that puts me over the edge!!!
"Don't stop... don't stop..." He bites into my neck as he comes, the hardness under my hand becoming warm and damp as it throbs inside his clothes. "Don't stop..." – it’s the fucking details that kill me! OMG!
Date: 01/14/09 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 67 - Love hurts Pt 2 (Ouch!)
Without warning he suddenly kicks out and whacks me hard across the face with his heel.
"OWW!!" I clutch my face and fall backwards onto the bed. "OWOWOWOWOW!!!!" – I knew this one was coming! Ha ha
He laughs and his finger delicately touches the tiny fading mark on my lip where the fangirl punched me in the back of Tom's car. "It's worth it though, right?" – That feels soooo long ago!
"Fuck me Bill." I whisper. "Fuck me so hard it hurts. Make me scream Bill. Fuck me..."
He doesn’t say a word, instead he plunges deep into me then withdraws completely. I gasp and then he plunges in again and again, each time his cock leaves me, hovering its tip at my entrance, before sliding easily back in. -*shivers* yes *closes eyes to compose her self. Hhuumm!
"That's it... come on... let go... let it out... scream my name..."
"Bill..." A hoarse whisper.
"Louder."
"Bill..." I moan.
"Louder."
I grab and claw at his back as my climax takes me over, setting lights off in my head and electricity through my body.
And I scream his name. – I love the progressions like this!
Date: 01/14/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 66 Love hurts
"I... I don’t think I can come to the airport with you tonight." – you should you need to!
"You've got no right to be upset." He shakes me slightly. "It's you that's making this happen. It's you that's walking away!" – ARG!!! He’s right….stupid practical girl!!!
I hate that she’s protecting herself this way! Against something that happened years ago. She thinks she’s protecting both her and Bill but she’s not she’s just scared and I hate her just a little bit for that!
She’s right but she’s more wrong then she’s right. She’s not trying to make it work she’s just trying to make it fail!
"But we have had that for a short while. Seven days together, seven mornings beside each other, seven nights in each others arms... It might not seem like much to some people, but it's meant everything to me..." His beautiful eyes look deep into mine. "You mean everything to me." - *cries a little*
"You're right. I'm not ready. I'm not ready now for what you need. I wish I was. I really, really wish..." He drifts off for a few moments, looking thoughtful as his fingers weave with mine and he slowly pulls me with him as he stands up. "But what about when I am ready? When I've done all these things that you think I'll do, that I need to do? What if I still want you? What then?"
"Then?" I shrug. "Maybe then... maybe then you'll find me."
"I will." His face is suddenly a picture of absolute certainty. "Then I will find you." – yes he will!
Date: 01/14/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 65 - While you were sleeping
"Fuck me." He stretches his body out lazily beneath me and rolls his hips slightly. "Sit up and fuck me." – OMG I would stab him in the eye if he woke me up that way!
He continues to encourage me, urging me on, promising me a climax if I fuck him as hard as I can. – mmmhh!
"No." His voice is firm. "I get three. You get three." He moves forward, running his hands tantalisingly up my sides. "You've had one with my fingers..." He brushes them lightly over my shoulders. "And one with my mouth..." His lips flutter across my throat and to my ear. "And now... you're going... to get.. one... with... my... cock...." - *grins*
"I want you to come harder than you ever did before... for me... You never came from the inside till you met me... Can you feel it... Tell me when you feel it."
He fucks me hard, slowly, grinding into me, changing the angle, altering the pressure until I let out a throaty gasp.
"There. Just... there..." – mmmmhhh *eyes roll back* So good!
"Ssshhh, sshh..." He calms and soothes me with his voice. "Slow down... wait..." He loosens his hold. "Just wait. I'll tell you when. Because I know. I can tell by the sound you make, the look on your face... the feeling inside of you..."
…
Then his mouth is by my ear, he speaks low and soft. "Now..." – Wow I’m impressed
"Don't go..." – NO DON’T GO!!! DON’T GO!!! It's worth it to try...you're a big baby for NOT trying!
Date: 01/14/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Come here
"Your mouth!" He shouts it out. "I want to come in your mouth!"
I immediately dip to him, just in time to catch his throbs of warm spunk. He grabs my head and holds it down, I can hear him murmuring. "All of it, you must take all of it..." – mmmhhh!
Then he stretches his arms and legs out and smiles. "OK. Now you have to wash me. And you mustn't miss a single spot." – I love your Bill he’s so cute!
"Oh no!" He laughs. "I got Gustav to print them off, he gave them to me when we met earlier. One in English, one in German. So there's no, erm, mistakes..." – Never mind about the mistakes GUSTAV?! OMG! How will she look him in the face again?
"THE QUILT!" - *shakes head* I love that he took this…I hope he keeps it forever! I hope you bring it into +4 years
"Move around, move yourself over my face, let me eat your cunt while you suck my cock." – mmmhhh! Yes! OMG! Yes!
Their hesitation and then…
He frowns in thought. "Shall we get the print outs?"
"Yes." I nod. "Get the print outs." – So funny *giggles*
Suddenly he's not laughing. He's not even smiling.
The papers drop to the side of the bed, he lets out a long, low, moan and his hands fly up and he covers his face.
"Fuck. Oh fuck..." - *grins* oh the power!
"Amazing... just... I love you... amazing... I can’t wait to tell Tomi... he'll be so jealous..." – ha ha maybe Matti can try that on Tom! LOL and Bill in Double Dare! *grins* yes please!
Date: 01/11/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Wheee a Sequel!
Gosh That you could write SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much smut *.* Damn girl!
The story was really funny, but also pretty sad at some times.
totally checking 4 Jahre out^^
Date: 01/11/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
Wheee a Sequel!
Gosh That you could write SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much smut *.* Damn girl!
The story was really funny, but also pretty sad at some times.
totally checking 4 Jahre out^^
Author's Response: I know, sooo much smut - I never knew I had it in me! Thx for reading :)
Date: 01/11/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter 72 - EPILOGUE
keep writing w/ 4 Jahre im getting REALLY REALLY impatient, danke danke danke schon
Author's Response: Danke to you too :) Thx for reading these stories x
Date: 01/07/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 42 Wet 'n' Dry
He hesitates a moment then takes the kitty hat off and carefully places it on my head, tying it tightly under my chin in a neat bow.
"There." He kisses me on the lips, laughing at my grumpy face. "I'll see you in a few minutes."
That was so sweet^^
Date: 01/06/09 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 31 Home movie stars
"1000 pussies?"
"No, An Deiner cock!"
"It definitely won’t be Vergessene cunts."
xD lmfao!!! xD
Date: 01/06/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 30 Got your number
xD whahahaahahahahahhaa omg that's sooooooo wrong!!! xD hehehe