Date: 10/18/12 04:27 am Title: Chapter 50 Flick of the Switch
It was all going really well, i was ;oving the romantic gestures and then there were christmas lights lol so funny.
Date: 10/17/12 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 44 Love Cats
This is where i'm stopping for now but i love it
Date: 10/17/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 37 Away day
if there was an ice-cream van like that i'd be sooooooooooo fat lol.
I loved this i love the idea of Bill giving directions... i think they'll be lost before they get there.
Date: 10/17/12 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 33 - I'm right where I belong
Awwww, my heart, so sweet, i loved that.
Date: 10/17/12 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 31 Home movie stars
i've been laughing all the way through this chapter, i loved the image of the guys huddled togetther looking through the phone going "oooh....ahhh....oh hmmm"
by the time the woman was like "oh god they're gonna write a song about it" and Bill was reeling off titles i was in stitches.
i was sat there thinking if you're so bothered put them on her phone, no-body wants to look at that, they don't know her.
Date: 10/17/12 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 29 Take me with you
aww, i saw that coming it was so emotional, i can see both their sides of the argument and as much as i don't want to say it, i think she'll leave him. I mean she was a fan, she knew what he did for a living before she decided to get with him and if she choses now not to like the fact that he's got loads of fans. the younger of which probably won't like her because she's "Bill's Girlfriend" then maybe she shouldn't be with him at all.
I mean its a really insensitive thing to do expecting him to choose like that. any fool can see how much he loves her.
i see her side tho, she thinks she's old and she thinks he'll get bored of her and go looking for someone new. of course she made it out to be his job, but if she really loved him, they'd find a way to make it work.
Date: 10/17/12 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 27 I < 3 Little Bill! - Pt II
first she throws a beer can at Tom's head, then she throws a bag of crisps at Georg and then she comes out of the bathroom looking like Bill... okay NOW I'M ANGRY! LOL
Date: 10/17/12 11:40 am Title: Chapter 26 Crash course
i'm presently rather amused that delicatr-looking Bill just kicked the bathroom door in whist only wearing one boot :) I'm also loving that she had to wait for him to finish doing his make-up before he let her talk to him. (i can imagine its true! LOL!)
Also i think the bracelet IS his and he just nipped down to his room to get it to cover up for the fact that he totally forgot he'd promised to get her a present.
Date: 10/17/12 11:25 am Title: Chapter 25 I want you to...
everyone knows he thought she'd named that bunny after the manager and he knows he was jealous lol poor bunny, Bill hates him... if he gad any sense he'd leve the country! LOL! Sorry just had to get that out :) now i can go onto my review.
not thinking of all the graphic parts i really felt for your female character (I missed whether she had a name or not) at the end of this chapter, it seems she's just realised she's fallen for Bill and know she's completely at a loss, they weren't supposed to get emotionally involved were they? Now her question is "stay or go?" i hope she decides soon.
Date: 10/17/12 11:02 am Title: Chapter 23 Tick Tock
hehe how awkward but it was funny, he should make it if he runs lol
Date: 10/15/12 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 23 Tick Tock
I got thus far i'm gonna have to leave it here for now.
Date: 10/15/12 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 13 Biff, bang, pow!
HAHAHA! she threw up...pha-ha on Bill hahaha! xD
Author's Response: Hi :) Thank you for reading and for all your reviews, it's nice to get a new reader for an old story. I appreciate you sitcking it out even though the graphic parts aren't your style and I'm very glad you've enjoyed it so far :))
Date: 10/15/12 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 10 - I < 3 Little Bill
okay i'm gonna try and write a better review than all the times before cause even though i love it, just writing "i love it" or "Thats cute" doesn't really tell you much does it?
Despite this being something i wouldn't normally read because its so... "graphic?" I'm finding that i can't stop and i love it especially this chapter, its getting so much deeper than that.
I love all the humour, (Tom's intervention this chapter was ridiculously funny).
Lastly i love the the way you've written the characters, i mean i could literally see Bill bickering with Tom in the back of the car just to name one example.
This is so good :)
Date: 10/15/12 08:48 am Title: Chapter 8 - Bringing me in, turning me on, making me glorious
awwww this is great.
Date: 10/15/12 08:26 am Title: Chapter 7 - A pair for every day of the week
that was soo funny, loved it.
I love Tom coming out with his little lines, but then again... generally i do. :)
Date: 10/15/12 08:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - If you want clean fun, go fly a kite
i loved it, especially the Xbox bit, i can imagine there will have been many scenes like that throughout their lives lol :)
your story's awesome.
Date: 10/14/12 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Tell me baby, are you coming with me?
Hahaha well, well, well, it seems Bill's not so sweet after all lol :) well he was when she got hurt, that was quite sweet.
I'm loving this
Date: 10/14/12 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 - I'll Kiss You
I love the phone bit, she called Bill bossy and then everyone else agreed lol
Oooh, it seems Tom doesn't like her all that much, maybe he's just trying to look out for his brother but now i'm wondering, does that mean the relationship is doomed? isn't that supposed to be the way it is? if Tom doesn't like Bill's girlfriend or vice versa, then she goes?
Hmmm, interesting.
Date: 10/14/12 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 - We keep feelin' this urge to touch
I really liked that he did her hair and make-up for her, it was such a cute moment he's got himself a mini me.
I was gonna say wasn't it a little soon for them to be doing that in the toilets? didn't he just meet her? Then again, it could have been a while later.
Then of course there was the awkward moment when Bill found out that his potential girlfriend is a massive Tokio Hotel fan lol ooh. Well, i have to say he took it better than i would have expected and it doesn't seem like it'll change anything between them. After all he was the one who appoached her, she never went and bugged him did she.
Love it :)
Date: 10/14/12 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - From Out of Nowhere
I just found this and i love it, it was funny and also it made me think of me quite a bit. I'm a crazy Tokio Hotel fan from England, i have a Bill hoodie in my wardrobe (i know u can't get them here, my auntie got it for me) oh and I'm in a wheelchair so i got an extra laugh from "Bill standing in front of me makes my knees go weak and i'm not even standing up!" (its true lol)
Okay thats all the reasons i love your story so far, now i just think i should let you know that i have a tendency to review every chapter of stories i really like so you could end up with at least another 70 from me alone.
Anyway, if the rest makes me laugh that much, i'll lobe it even more, great job.