Date: 09/11/09 08:29 am Title: Darkroom
sexy :p
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/10/09 04:54 pm Title: Darkroom
the imagery was fantastic, i could almost see all this as if it was happening right in front of me. the descriptions of sounds were filling my head. BRILLIANT! x
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for this great review! :D :D
Date: 05/28/09 04:00 pm Title: Darkroom
This was great!.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 04/03/09 04:50 pm Title: Darkroom
No, there was something else drawing Bill here tonight, and he wanted to know what it was. – hum?! Interesting already!
It was so low that he was more laying than sitting, and it was hard for him to drag his drunk ass off that sofa. - *snorts and giggles*
He got to Bill, pushing aside some of the men, scowling at them and elbowing them hard. – he would!
Bill grabbed Tom’s hips and pulled them towards his own, moving his and Tom’s hips in a circular motion to the beat of the music. – good job Bill that’s the way to do it!
He couldn’t help but comply. He had to do what Bill said, it had always been that way. Bill was boss. It had been that way when they were little kids, and Bill would decide what games they would play, and it was that way now; Bill decided what sex games they would play. - *grins*
Bill dragged Tom towards the exit, still grinning, but his face flustered and his hard-on apparent in his tight pants. But instead of going up the stairs to the exit of the basement club, he took some obscure stairs down. – ah the reason why Bill likes this club?
Tom frowned. Now what was Bill doing? He saw a sign that said ‘Darkroom’ in neon letters. Tom’s frown got deeper. Wasn’t that a place where pictures were developed? – ha ha
All around them were sounds of flesh against flesh, lips against lips, lips on flesh, heavy breathing, people sucking and people fucking. – that’s a nice description!
Tom gasped and his eyes got wide. What were they doing here? Was Bill seriously considering...? No, Bill was an exhibitionist, but he wouldn’t be that bad. Would he? - *shifty eyes* seem so!
Tom could feel himself get harder than he had ever been before. He never knew the sounds of other people getting off would turn him on so much. There were moans all around them, and heavy breathing, beside all the sounds sucking and kissing. Every once and a while someone could be heard moaning louder, screaming even as they came. – nice!
Then Bill boke the kiss and started rubbing his hard-on against Tom’s again, slowly and hard.
“Can you come like this, Tomi?” Tom heard Bill whisper into his ear.
He nodded. – nice! The control is loads of fun!
“Mmm good,” Bill moaned in his ear, “I think I can come like this as well. Will you come in your pants for me?” – Bill sets the rules that’s loads of fun!
“Come for me, Tomi,” Bill gasped into his ear, and that pushed Tom over the edge. Before he realised it would happen, he was coming. – nice!
Then Bill pulled away and looked down at himself.
“Fuck,” he proclaimed, “why the fuck do I never think these ideas out?” – ha ha
Author's Response: Yeyy I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 02/24/09 06:29 pm Title: Darkroom
Whiiii! I loved it!! And that other story must be fairly interesting too :P loz xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I must write that other story some time... ;)
Date: 09/27/08 12:05 pm Title: Darkroom
ooooh:P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/12/08 06:40 am Title: Darkroom
This is hot! Great story ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! :D :D
Date: 08/11/08 10:49 am Title: Darkroom
Woah... that was hot and... woah.
It was awesome :]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 08/02/08 09:52 pm Title: Darkroom
Ha! XD I have a bad experiance with a dark room O_O* Loved the ficy that was great!
Author's Response: Bad experience? That's not good :( But I'm glad you liked my story! :D
Date: 08/02/08 09:52 pm Title: Darkroom
Ha! XD I have a bad experiance with a dark room O_O* Loved the ficy that was great!
Author's Response: Bad experience? That's not good :( But I'm glad you liked my story! :D
Date: 07/27/08 05:21 am Title: Darkroom
Oh. write the shower ficlet! please please please. Nah you don't have to, just you're writing makes me feel so good, baby.
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much baby! I'm glad it made you feel good! *abrazos* Shower scene... hey we just wrote a shower scene with Bill and Tom! XD Awww all right, I'll see what I can do! Maybe after I see you in London I'll have more inspiration for it ;)
Date: 07/16/08 05:23 pm Title: Darkroom
even though I'm not very into the whole "totally platonic brotherly affection" xD kind of stuff I really enjoyed your fic :D you know I love the way you write and the description was just fantastic :D
congrats koosie xD
Author's Response: Thanks Lipah!! I am glad you liked it, despite the 'totally platonic brotherly affection' XD Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 07/15/08 07:53 pm Title: Darkroom
OMG! That was scorchingly hot !!!
Great story
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Yeyyy thanks so much! :D :D I am glad you liked it so much! :D :D :D *really happy*
Date: 07/15/08 04:47 pm Title: Darkroom
o.O do we get to hear the other story?
Author's Response: Haha! Maybe! When I am in the mood to write a shower scene ;) Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 07/15/08 03:54 pm Title: Darkroom
It was awesome, well written in my opinion, Bill is so naughty -giggle- xD
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D Haha I see Bill as very very naughty ;)
Date: 07/14/08 05:36 pm Title: Darkroom
Oh my!
Im speechless!
It's totally amazing!
I loved it so muuch!!
You have no idea!!! :O
I wish from the bottom of my heart that you wont stop writing twincest!
Talk about skills! :O
Author's Response: Awww thanks Linn!! I'm glad you liked it so much! This review deffo made me smile :)
Date: 07/14/08 02:06 pm Title: Darkroom
ooooo dirrrty hehe
Author's Response: Thanks Guem! You know me, I like it dirty ;)
Date: 07/14/08 12:21 pm Title: Darkroom
That was pretty hot. Reminded me of Queer As Folk..:D
Author's Response: Haha! Loved that show! Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 07/14/08 03:35 am Title: Darkroom
extremely drool worthy.
so hot, damnnnn,
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 07/13/08 11:24 pm Title: Darkroom
Mmmmm. Just what I needed before bed. Pure smut. It'll give me nice dreams tonight. *sigh* This site just keeps getting better and better
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! This review really made me grin like crazy for some reason! :P I hope you had nice dreams! ;)