Date: 07/24/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
you should continue it
how its put together makes you wonder
what's gonna happen next
this is the first story on here i felt the need to post a review for because it is a very interesting and good story
Date: 07/22/08 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
AAAwww come on!!! We have been waiting more or less patiently for AGES!! Please updaaaaate!! :D
(otherwise we'll kidnap you and force you to continue the story under lock and key!, and we don't want that, now do we?)
Date: 07/21/08 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god! you must continue with this! PLEASE! update soon k? :D
Date: 07/20/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I'm in love with this already!
Please continue!
Date: 07/16/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
*bounces in seat and waits for an update* :D
Date: 07/16/08 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I think you should continue. I like it. If you keep posting Ill keep reading, deal? :) I've been looking for slavefics here and this one is the first one i have found. Keep writing!
Date: 07/15/08 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Want more!! *begs* PLEASE?!
Date: 07/15/08 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I would love for you to continue. I'm very interested.
Date: 07/14/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww =(
please continue!! i want smg positive to happen to bill now (A)
it was REALLY well written and pretty please update soon?
Date: 07/14/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Please continue!!! This is the first slavery related fic I've ever read. I think it's very interesting.
Update soon, yeah?
Date: 07/14/08 05:52 am Title: Chapter 1
GO ON, GO ON!!! Me wants more!!!!
Date: 07/14/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
It's goooooood,continue!!! please? *puppy eyes*
Date: 07/14/08 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I dont like it o_o
I LOVE IT =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Update soon =)
Date: 07/13/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd like you to continue. I love vamp. fics and if you want to move it along quickly to get it over w/ you could use time jumps, like in the next chapter have Tom already be in Italy and just have a brief flash back to anything important that happend. Personally I just want to get to the part where Tom finds Bill and falls head over heels for him. But that's just me. I'd also like to know more about this vamp war and the slave system. what time era are we in here. Where are we? Germany right?
Date: 07/13/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a pretty good start and I want to see what will happen, I heart oldendays fics and vampires just rock my socks. Good job!
Date: 07/13/08 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
C-O-N-T-I-N-U-E!!!!
Date: 07/13/08 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
dumbass. this chap rocks...FINISH...i will be up in your ass if you dont!
Still luv ya, but if you dont finish, im kicking ur ass.
Bye
Author's Response: THANKS KARI-CHAN...REALYYYYY
Date: 07/13/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was awesome. I really enjoyed this chapter. It's definitely different than other ones I have read.